
One Piece: My Wife Is Shinobu Kocho, and I Summon Goddesses from Across Anime
海贼:老婆蝴蝶忍,召唤综漫女神
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 310k Words
- Genre
- Unknown
- Subgenre
- Unknown
- Updated
- 19d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
133Chapters
1.7kReads
6.2Score
137Shelves
455Listens
60.8kReads · all time
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In the world of Pirates, the harem summoning flow, I hope that the interval between summons will be slightly longer, and the event story should be as far away from the main plot as possible. Since we are creating a "secondary" and "lazy" character, the daily life can be slightly longer. It is best not to often sideline the main plot, and major events can be mixed in. It can be developed in many aspects. You can collect the natives who should be collected. It doesn't matter if you dismantle the CP or not. Travel and entertainment, create fun, and change the miserable fate of people along the way. I am quite optimistic about this book, but I always feel that the intervention time of this book is almost in the middle and late stages, and there is a high probability that it will end with only 1 million words. Author, if possible, in this pirate world you created, ask the protagonist to help ask the aunt whether she is Charlotte Lingling or a Carmelite. [Think]
It's okay, five stars for encouragement. A few personal suggestions. First, the main plot is unclear. After so many chapters, the protagonist has no particular goal to achieve. The main plot is not clear, at least I don't see it. It seems to be to replace the world government and improve the pirate world. Otherwise, it is completely unnecessary to involve the navy. If you want to make money, you can go to sea and directly rob pirates. The initial strength itself is already quite strong. Second, it feels a bit monotonous to only play the power of death. After all, the animation of that period was not at the peak of special effects, and it would feel a bit plain. The third thing is that the Overlord color in One Piece is theoretically the soul power. It is not strange that the protagonist is not a god of death. After all, he is a mortal god of death. In terms of special effects, the level of the Overlord color entanglement seems to be visible. If you can see it, it means the special effects are cool. When it comes to writing a book, it is not the author who has the final say whether it is strong or not, but whether it is handsome or not is the key. The whole book seems to be quite good so far, keep it up
I really like the theme of summoning, but I still like the author to check more information when writing. I would like to suggest that you don't write the original plot of the Straw Hats and the Straw Hat Pirates in too detail. Ninety percent of the fans who read the fandom know the original work, which is completely superficial!
It's okay, not emotionally pretentious, just take it when it's time to take it. Not sentimental either. If you suppress the combat power in the early stage, there is no way. After all, if you don't suppress it, you won't be able to write later. In fact, you can be more relaxed. The road to becoming a god will be taken later. After all, there are other anime fusions. So when you become a god, let alone going to other planes, there is a big universe outside the planet. Of course, you can also take your wife to travel to other worlds
Come on. However, looking at the author's other works, the number of words is so small [face covering]
This book is very good. The protagonist is not sentimental and treats feelings very sincerely. Every feeling is exactly what it feels like. The protagonist's character is also very good, not crazy, indifferent, or condescending, just a normal person's mentality. Come on, author! ! !
I hope the author can write longer, tens of thousands more words
Not bad, worth a look
Work harder and update it! I don't want you to be nice, just make Sanji angry to death.
This book is okay. It's just that the update is a bit slow. If I raise books later, I will be wasted.