Cultivation of Immortals: Start with the Children of Aristocratic Families!

What a pity! What a pity, why do I have to stop updating as soon as I want to watch it? I feel that this book is still very good. If it can be slightly revised, it will definitely have a score of 8 points or above. The protagonist has the characteristics of a gambler, neither high nor low, with medium qualifications. He still has no parents at the beginning, and there is no origin of Goldfinger, but I think the plot has some characteristics of the protagonist. His behavior is still very good. He is cautious but not too stubborn. He dares to fight and grab. The setting is quite new and the realm is very authoritative. Currently, there are only four major realms and one small realm. It is difficult for the protagonist to cross. With the secret method, he can barely compete. This is good. There is also the old thing in the mirror. Although he doesn't help the protagonist much, we can't see his subsequent ending, alas. I feel like I could add some inner drama, which would enrich the characters of the supporting characters and the protagonist. Currently, I think it deserves four stars. If it can be slightly revised and some spiritual objects systems added, it would be more than the current evaluation. This book is like a prototype, a bit like a draft. It can be seen that it has a bit of a novice, but the writing is very good. I thought I would finally find a new book, but it was shattered as soon as I found it.

Give yourself a five-star [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Well written, keep it up.

The writing is actually pretty good.

It's okay, the character description could be better