When Atsushi Nakajima Traveled Through Time and Met Kuro Tokizai

The writing is very good, the plot has good fluctuations and depth, the characters are consistent with the original work, there is very little OOC, the rhythm is good, the subject matter is novel, and there is no cp. I love the original work! What I particularly liked was that I felt like I was actually following the show. You can see their growth, and although they are unfamiliar, they have a growing tacit understanding and cooperation in each battle; you can see their respective characteristics, not just a single piece of paper. They have flesh and blood, their own emotions, their own persistence, and things that need to be done, rather than blindly following the crowd. The future intersects with the past, and the line between dusk and night is clear but leaves traces. It's been a long, long time since I've seen such high-quality Fumino fan fiction on Tomato… I must keep up the effort! ! ٩(ˊωˋ*)وᵎᵎᵎᵎ I'm looking forward to the following plot, my curiosity has already gripped me, and I look forward to your masterpiece!

This is a great book that I discovered by chance. I haven't read it yet but the teacher wrote it so well that I must tell you about it! ! The logic is super clear, and the description of the inside of the mafia is also very realistic. In the extra episode "if", you change cars and fake death... It feels like you are watching a large-scale wit show (fog) The character design is also very accurate. Dundun is such a kind boy who wants to bring light to the people around him! ! Mr. Dazai's strategy and gentleness hidden in the calculation of use, Chuuya's strength and gentleness, Akutagawa's persistence, the rogue faction keeping a distance but deeply trusting each other, and the tacit understanding of the old and the new. . This is how I imagined them, just like the original novel written by Mr. Asagiri (I feel like I have to change from being a single person to being a full-time cook hhh) By the way, teacher, you really don't look at the if line, Odasaku survived, he's so "sweet" (Devil whispers)

Very nice! ! ! It's really super pretty! ! ! There is almost no OOC plot, and F4's interactions really impressed me! ! ! Kuro Tokizai is not as... Cold (?) As in the anime. When he goes on a mission, he has a tenderness (?) Towards other people (only F4). The author's big words of Dazai's tenderness towards them really touched me! ! I was seen tossing and turning in bed in the middle of the night, screaming, almost turning into a monkey.

Personally, it doesn't really feel OOC, everyone feels very vivid and real. Moreover, this subject matter is really novel, and it is difficult to find another one that is the same as this one. Is this considered another kind of meal replacement-free food on the Internet? The relationship between the two blacks is such a tacit understanding! It's not like the stereotype of elementary school students scolding each other, but it's very real and doesn't just say those few words over and over again, which is good (please forgive me for my lack of words). I'm thinking about when Tun can go back, or when people from the future can travel here again, that would be fun, haha, I've been fantasizing [laughing] [laughing]

The writing is very good... Although there are some situations where the words are too repetitive, but overall it is quite comfortable to read. I like it very much, I like it very much. My favorite characters are Atsushi and Zai. Atsushi's growth in this book is not heart-breaking, and he is beaten by Dazai. The gentle guidance is really great,,, so heart-warming, ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,, ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,... Highly recommended!

Thank you all for liking

The author's writing is very nice and not OOC at all.

The writing style is very good and the description ability is also very good. It is like watching a movie. It is very advanced and the content is relatively novel. I like it very much. It is a bit OOC at least but you can hardly feel it if you don't pay attention. In short, it is recommended! No cp to be awesome

It's so good, so good, so good. I like Kurozai so much, but I still hope that Odasaku lives a good life, maybe he can change the future [crying], hey, no matter what, I have to be fine. The author is asking for updates, it's not enough [crying] [crying] [I'm about to cry]

I really like Akutagawa's bond. It's really well-written and makes me want to cry. The feeling of old enemies and tacit understanding in the original novel is completely conveyed. The awkward comfort is very cute. It would be great if Akutagawa still remembers Atsushi's future memories. After all, Akutagawa said, 'Next time we meet. I won't lose to you, my dear, can you please do a single one [cry] [cry]

The author's writing style is super good, not OOC at all. The character and behavior of Minato Kurozai feel very close to the original work [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Dazai's tenderness is hidden in the small details [Blowing kiss]

There are too few articles based on Atsushi Nakajima's perspective, and there are only a few good articles. It's so beautiful, don't stop updating (∏一∏)

That's what we call high quality! The writing is good, the characters are well-developed, and they fit the character of the original work, but it's just not enough.

Ahhhhhhhh the author's writing style is really good! I haven't seen such a good article in a long time! ! It's not OOC at all. It's like a fairy 😋

The characters are well polished and in-depth, the plot has ups and downs, and the quality is not popular.

Summary of the book: Authoritative! No loss in investing😋😋

Dazai's writing is good, he is both gentle and cruel, and he has a lot of wisdom, which makes people feel at ease as soon as they see him.

The writing is very good and very beautiful [laughing]

. . . ! Mr. Dazai is the most handsome here. .

Very interesting... A very touching book

Well, I feel that the original Dazai would be colder (only my personal understanding). After all, Dazai may not have found the meaning of life at that time (don't blame me ˃ ˄ ˂̥̥ ) [Blow kiss]

It's very interesting. This book shouldn't end so quickly, right [laughs]

I wanted to say a lot, but when I opened the review I didn't know what to say. It feels like it could be watched as a side story. It is really well written and highly recommended.

The characters are three-dimensional and vivid, mainly because Dazai's portrayal is very good [Blowing a kiss]

It's very beautiful and well written. It's a rare piece of writing.

It's a very interesting book, and none of the characters are OOC. It's worth reading!

After reading the first four volumes, I was shocked and delicious. I can't describe it in my poor language. I am so delicious.

It matches the original work and is not OOC at all, and the content is particularly beautiful.

There is no OOC, it is completely the same as everyone in my heart. The story is also very gentle and awesome.

This theme is very new! And the description is very cool! Dazai Sang is really handsome! (//∇//)