The Poor Cannon Fodder in Jackie Chan Ao Tianwen

Super Invincible Thunderbolt recommends it. First of all, the fact that it doesn't have a strong AI smell is a plus. God knows I almost vomit when I watch AI every day. Secondly, this kind of growth flow is like a love story in my dreams. The plot does not drag on, and the protagonist does not hold back blindly. My waist does not feel sore and my legs do not hurt after watching it. I can go up to the fifth floor in one breath. The last and most important point is! Teacher, this is not enough [send heart]

It's really good. The comments on the third day will be mine. I really like the Lingyao baby. She is so cool and beautiful. My favorite is almost every setting on my xp. [Shy] It's true that men are menstruating🙄 women are going crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock of vegetative people😭I can see tears flowing from the corners of my mouth and flooding into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It's God and my rose that lights up my dark person Life makes my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony on the 0th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I burst into tears. The world is no longer short of water. The nemesis of depression😋It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😨I can see the tide of the Qiantang River in Yancheng😈It's so beautiful🥰It is God who is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful

Teacher, please work hard. I have read a lot of fairy tales. Your protagonist's character is very three-dimensional and unified. I think it is very good. The effect of writing group portraits is not good. I feel that there are too many people. When I read it, I can't tell who is who. Also, Xiaoyao is too independent. He and his master are too far away from other people, so it is a bit difficult to write group portraits. You have to have elders who care about each other to feel it. I asked where it is a little too long, but it is okay. The contradictions in the plot really arouse the readers' curiosity. The characters are established. Looking forward to the follow-up development of the two little ones [shy][shy] Why is it so beautiful? Who is that?

It's a good read, but the title of the book is a bit deceptive. The protagonist is not a delicate character. The protagonist is very strong and has the kind of character that learns and lives forever without being attached to anyone. I really like the tenacity of this protagonist to stand firm. It seems indifferent but occasionally has a strong sense of life. I feel a bit cold-faced and cute😈

Nice! The author is really good at naming names, and I feel that the plot develops at a very good pace, making it very comfortable to read without any rush. I also like the characters of Ying Xing and Ling Yao very much. They are both kind-hearted and friendly. They care about each other and have complementary personalities. Watching their interaction makes my heart warm. They are each other's confidants, and the handsome brothers and sisters are also very affectionate. There will not be too much interference in the system, and I am eager to help Lingyao solve the problem. I really think this is a comfortable and heart-warming article to read. I recommend it! [Blowing kiss]

Ah ah ah, after reading it I just said one word, cool! From the beginning to the present, it is mainly written around Xiao Yao's revenge on Yuan Shen Ling Yao, followed by the emotional line between Xiao Yao and Xiao Xing, along with the interactions between various characters in the sect. The main plot is very special and refreshing, and it is very refreshing. Xiaoyao and Xiaoxing are not allowed to suffer at all. They take revenge on the spot. So far, the revenge has been successful. I can really feel the hatred of Yuan Shen Lingyao. What a pity. He could have had his own world, but he didn't even have a chance to see the power of his sword bones in person. I really feel sorry for him. Xiao Yao's revenge is over. Judging from the current clues, it is really surprising. He is actually planning to return the sword bone and return the soul of Yuan Xiao Yao instead of the body he possesses. Nuan Nuan [almost cried], he really remembered and helped Yuan Xiao Yao. The revenge is still completed, I don't know what will happen next, I look forward to the author's big update^ω^ The main line is mainly connected through Xiao Yao's ability improvement, not procrastinating, not abrupt, and very smooth. The relationship between Xiaoyao and Xiaoxing is smooth and steady. The two people go hand in hand through stories. From the author's words, I can clearly feel the gradual progress of their relationship, from being wary of each other but cherishing each other at the beginning to caring for each other and bravely holding hands, and now willing to save their lives. After that, there are other characters. There are not many more yet, but some of the characters have already appeared, such as Ji Fan and Lin Wan'er. I look forward to the deepening of it later. ദ്ദി˶>ᴗO) ✧ In short, it is a very good book. I just hope that in the subsequent plot, the author can give more descriptions of Xiaoxing's strength and heart. Although Although Xiaoxing's strength has been portrayed through Xiaoxing's fights in recent chapters, I still feel that there is still a lack of strong feeling. Of course, Xiaoyao's strength is fully demonstrated [Admiration]. In addition, the author's description of the fights is particularly touching. Those actions naturally come to mind, and they are very smooth and neat. ૮₍ᵔ⤙ᵔ ₎ა[Bird food masterpiece][Please update more][Please update more]

It's good-looking, a very pure article about cultivating immortals. Xiaoyao is very strong, and he will take revenge on the spot when he has a grudge, and he will not feel aggrieved at all.

It's pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low. Come on, your writing is great. The writing of this book is good, the plot is also very interesting, the male protagonist is not brainless, and some of the supporting characters are brainless, but overall it is not bad [Sending Hearts] By the way, the author chose all the titles very elegantly [Like][Like][Like]

Why are there so few people? [Shocked] You can't buy it, you can't suffer a loss, you can't be fooled! ☆*:.｡. O(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆Come and support our little couple٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)وThe author's writing is smooth, and the characters' IQs are online (*≧ω≦) Xiao Lingyao, Ying Xing and other characters are well created. Very good [Blow kiss] The author is completely at the level of a goddess [lick the screen] [lick the screen] The writing is very good [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] I hope to release 100 chapters in a day [adoration] [adoration]

It's great to see it, the two protagonists really compete with each other. Emotional development takes a long-term path, which makes the relationship and bond between two people traceable. It is not inexplicable, and it is not imposed by the author in a very short time to serve the readers. It is generated from long-term companionship and is the result of the constant resonance of two passionate and sincere hearts. It is really a good relationship. The writing style is also good. The author is simply born in the ancient style. [Like] The names of each chapter are very elegant, with a hint of Dream of Red Mansions. The plot is also very good, but the character creation (Shen's portrayal is good) feels a bit uninteresting, so I give it four stars [like] [like] [like]

Such an authentic male video with a refreshing sense of style. It's so delicious. It's just like dancing on my xp. Boss, I will follow you forever. . . . .

The author's writing style is good and the whole text is fluent. There is no AI flavor in the text. Each character's personality is very independent and outstanding. They are flesh and blood. The starting point of the chapter titles is also very careful. The protagonist is well portrayed. It is a pure traditional fairy tale.

The writing is very, very good. I finally found the gold after looking for it for a long time. The early interaction between the two cute animals really warmed my heart and gave me a faint sense of happiness. The famous scenes at the end were also very exciting. It made me angry.

It's great. It's been tied in two days. Xiaoyao and Xiaoxing must be happy. This is a 1v1 article. Xiaoyao has the attribute of being a heartthrob. There are people in the comment section who are criticizing Master and Xiaoyao. If you mind this, please don't read the comment section.

I just wanted to ask Shen why he didn't have thunder tribulation when he was building the foundation first, and only the other protagonist had it. I'm confused. And I feel that every time the protagonist is stopped, he will not take the initiative to take action. He has to wait for someone to disrupt the situation or Ying Xing to rescue him, and then he will take action slowly. I feel frustrated when I see it, and can I not use ancient prose? It's very uncomfortable to see the ancient and non-modern, and I just can't figure it out. How big is Ying Xing's Thunder Tribulation of Breaking the Foundation? Even the main character, Thunder Tribulation, is not seen. Then, others say that Breaking the Foundation is solid, but the main character is vain. I have a puzzled look on my face.

So pretty! The teacher's writing style is really very good, and each chapter title is very thoughtful. It makes me feel so comfortable when I read it.

It's so good to watch, the plot is amazing, full of ups and downs, twists and turns, the characters are also great, and the young couple is so cute. When I saw the introduction of this book, I actually dismissed it and just added it to my bookshelf, thinking that I would take a look at it one day. I thought some master was using AI to deceive people again, and used the introduction to attract attention and trick people into killing them. The more I read, the more attractive it became. The title is very charming and has a good emotional transition. I really like it. Among them, some plots are also very touching. I was moved to tears. I hope the young couple will become happier and happier. Star Yao 99 [Blowing Kiss]

It's very good. It made me feel happy and happy after watching it. The protagonist's emotional transition is very natural and there is no plot that he falls in love with for no reason. The plot is also well written and the writing style is beyond words. It's not bad. I recommend you to buy it.

The catalogs of Sitting Up are very nice, meaningful, and very innovative. Unlike the traditional redemption literature, you will reserve your own bottom line for the other person when you first meet. You will see the other person clearly through getting along with each other time and time again. You will not unconditionally trust the original male protagonist just because he is the son of luck.

It exploded! The writing style of the author is super good. It has a feeling of ancient Long Ao astronomy. It is super refreshing. It seems cold but actually cares about the people of the world. I love it to death. I will follow you forever!

This little Shen has a cold face and is cute. . . Xiaoying, you are smiling all day long, but you are so smart. In terms of characters, I think Xiao Shen and Xiao Ying are very three-dimensional and distinct (they are both cute.) Both of them are cautious, calm and intelligent out of pettiness, but also have the bottom line and goodwill of the protagonists. At first I thought Xiao Ying was the kind of person who is gentle on the surface but cold and heartless in reality (because he has a lot of eyes and is always probing and testing). But later I saw that although this man was defensive, his care and concern were real. This is also very reasonable. After all, neither of them are simple and naive people. It is a good thing to be defensive. But sometimes I will sigh when I look at it. After all, Xiaoying is still a child of fifteen or sixteen years old, and he has a bit of a boyishness about him. (When you win a game, you have to show off to your friends. When you drink, you become a little childish. When you are curious about something, you have to ask for details, and you are a bit shady.) As for Xiao Shen, sometimes I feel that he has a sense of tolerance that is older than him. (In fact, in terms of mental age, he is indeed older, hahahaha) He is tough and calm, with a strong heart. Sometimes you can see a bit of arrogance in him, but there are also times when he is cute, such as pretending to enter the secret realm hahahaha. (Xiao Ying: It only took me 0 seconds to guess who it was. You can try it too.) Both of them refused to admit defeat. Just test it like this! When the time comes, you will be honest when you get into bed! Pull the delicious pinch😋. (The emotional line heats up slowly, from acquaintance to acquaintance, from precaution to trust. From friend, teammate to lover) Then there's the plot, oh oh oh, I felt so good watching this, yes. I've only read about twenty chapters before I came to comment. I originally thought that Xiao Shen would feel aggrieved for a few chapters after he beat up Shen Tianci and then got into trouble, but in the end, your Uncle Dongfang just stepped in to protect him. (Speaking of which, your Uncle Dongfang's character seems pretty good now, and there's an inexplicable tension in facing Xiao Shen.) Anyway, I feel very satisfied so far😋💪 As for the writing, I think it's okay. (My opinion is only for reference and may not be accurate) There are very few typos and the whole article is smooth (I glanced at it and it was quite smooth). Boss, can you throw 800 chapters in my face for no reason? 🥺😡

Book lovers, just look at the title of each chapter written by the author. This author's writing style is unparalleled. I've only read Chapter 3 now and I've fallen in love with it. Okay! [Love] I like the character of the protagonist very much. The protagonist is so beautiful. [Like] It is probably a new book, so the number of chapters is relatively small. Many people don't like to read this kind of serialized articles, but I prefer reading these serialized articles. I prefer the feeling of catching up. I'll comment after I see it! Ok, now I see that the protagonist is about to take revenge on Shen Tianci, which is so refreshing. I really like watching this kind of rhythm, not too fast, not too slow, just right [sending heart] [love] I look forward to revenge, and then keep cheering for Long Aotian [laughing evilly]

The writing is clean, to the point, and no nonsense. The characters are well developed (and distinct), I recommend [adoration][adoration][adoration][licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen][OK][OK][OK]

It's rare to see a story that fits my taste so well. It's so exciting. The two protagonists are very up to date, and they have the youthful spirit of cultivating immortality. Many novels can't express this flavor. The author's writing style is very suitable for writing novels about cultivating immortals, but the emotional line is not particularly obvious, and it is relatively slow-burning.

In fact, I don't have many deep comments on this type of novel, but this one feels that the emotional line between the protagonist and the protagonist in the early stage is light, and overall I think it is relatively dull. I look forward to the author's subsequent novels because the writing style is very good. Da~ It's so pretty🥺The man is menstruating🙄The woman looks crazy💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It's God, it's me The roses illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I shed tears. From now on, the world will never be the same. The nemesis of dehydration and depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 It's so cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 It's God, it's my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful

Super super pretty. I really have never written such a long review. I like other books very much. But I really want to express my emotions about this. This book fits my imagination of cultivating immortality very well. Very very logical. And I particularly like to watch the tit-for-tat confrontation between the protagonists. The two people have extraordinary IQs, and together they have 8,000 tricks. I personally particularly like the Xianxia IP. But in the past, most of the articles I read were abandoned halfway, which made me feel a little bored. But this one doesn't have that at all. Support support support.

Damn... I didn't have high hopes for reading the book. I thought it would be another kind of mindless and cliché plot, but I didn't expect it to be so good! The two protagonists are also particularly attractive to me, which is really rare to see on this platform.

It looks delicious, but why are Xiaoyao and Xiaoxing so bitter? T_T. The storyline is also very interesting (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I hope you can update it more, but don't tire yourself out♡＾▽＾♡

It's been a long time since I've found a book that's so satisfying. I looked up and saw that it's a serial. Author, you must update diligently❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥Readers are crying in their nests❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 It's not enough. I still want to watch. I still want to [cry][cry]

The two of them are youthful pure love, redemption, two-way sincerity, responsibility, my treasure, my heart, my baby, my family property. . . .