Is It Reasonable for Me to Suppress Everything in Creative Mode?

The protagonist is an abstract image of a happy person who appears holy in front of his lover. However, because of the author's poor writing style, the entire character dialogue and shaping are very childish, a bit like a YY novel in middle school. In fact, it is just a pretentious attribute. Why? Personally, I think the author can add a system to set emotional values. Although it is old-fashioned, it is practical. It can give the protagonist a reason to show off to others, and the plot will be more reasonable. The author is very obedient but his writing style needs to be improved.

When I wrote about the slums, I was thinking about why those poor people have to work hard to practice. Maybe they also know that for people who have nothing, their efforts may not yield anything, but if they don't work hard, they will always have nothing. Writing too many painful and serious things will make people confused. If words can make people happy, then I also want to write things that can make people smile. No matter what, happiness is the most important thing.

The subject matter is good, but it looks a bit childish. I think it's a problem with the writing style. Some other novels make people angry after reading them, but this one makes me angry. I hope the author can write better when he grows up.

Creative mode is direct destruction, not block-building like survival.

(Posted some suggestions)

Hey hey, [licking the screen] Hey hey, [licking the screen] It feels so good.

Good-looking, vivid plot

Be sure not to stop updating.

Fortunately, at least it's not like other books, where the protagonist has to submit and suppress him even though he has the strength.