Pretending to Be a Lily to Avoid Disaster, She Became a Heartthrob

Ahhhh... The writing is very good, but it's too detailed. . Let people find the plot (feeling) in a lot of details. Author. . What did you add to the novel? It looks so tiring. . . But I still want to continue watching. . .

Oh, in fact, I think the author's writing is more delicate and accurate, relying on a large number of body and object details to distinguish the characters' personalities. However, there are problems such as repeated modifiers, weak environment preparation, and lack of inner drama and exclusive dialogue tacit understanding. The overall story is gentle and interesting, and it would be nice to simplify and supplement it a little. [Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss] Come on, author!

The plot is really good, but the detailed descriptions of some appearances, actions, and applications are too complicated. I suggest that it be simplified to highlight the key points.

I went, the babies are very beautiful! ! ! I personally think that the books in Tomatoes are very suitable for my taste. Come on, big brother, don't stop updating [cry][cry][cry]

I felt a little tired at the beginning, but I got better later. It looks great. I enjoyed watching it. The author will update it soon.

The book is very good and the plot is interesting

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