A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Beginning with a Broken Jade Slip

The writing is pretty solid at the moment, but the foundation and enemy-fighting skills are still quite lacking. I just don't have to engage in those kinds of whimsical ideas that will collapse the combat system in the future. It can be seen that the author wants to write about sword cultivation, but it is unclear at the moment 🍉

You always like to write this kind of articles that give villains wisdom, right? The villain is bad, not stupid [get it] If you like cool stories, you can read it.

Very unique and very good!

The storyline is exquisitely conceived, the content is compact and interesting.

So far it sounds pretty good and has a plot. I can listen to it and get good reviews in the future.

Seeing that it's okay now, let's look at the situation later and then comment.

The language is simple, the description is detailed, there is suspense, and the plot is attractive, making people unable to put it down. Come on, editor!

Great content

I don't want to see Wulinggen anymore, so I'll give you 7⭐️ and leave.

Well written