The Occultist Simulator in the Old World of Warhammer

The story described in the full text is interesting, but it is obvious that the understanding of the world view is insufficient and the description of the group of characters is not good enough. One character is overly focused. It is recommended to occasionally describe the current situation of other characters. The original codes are quite interesting and fit well with the worldview of the medieval Warhammer. You can expand the line about other races a little, such as describing the influence of the Code of Winter on factions such as the Vampire Tomb Kings or describing the impact of other codes on other races. For example, the Code of Lamps and Scales fits well with the Lizardmen. I also hope to see the appearance of those legendary heroes, and how the gods of various races view the Code, Mansu and all the Sichens among them.

Not only does it have an AI feel, the author also has some clouds. The actual area of ​​Mansu is only the mountain in the game, and the glow and the virtual world are not local to Mansu. Even if you become the will of Mansu, you can't control the glow. It's better to just become the glow. At least you can raise another Supreme Sichen.

It feels very good, but it's a pity that I don't know about medieval warhammer, otherwise it would be more enjoyable to watch.

This book is good, but if you have not understood the Esoteric Cult Simulator, it may seem confusing. It is recommended that you learn a little about the Esoteric Cult Simulator and the Medieval Warhammer before reading it.

The author writes well, keep up the good work

Good looking, good luck to the author