After Traveling Through Time and Transformation, Can I Practice Immortality in a Supernatural World?

I haven't watched much yet, but there's nothing sinister about it. The female protagonist has all the psychological conflicts that come with a transformation, and the male protagonist has a good personality. What's impressive is that he guessed that the female protagonist was hiding her identity, and thoughtfully chose a more stable way to talk to the female protagonist, and gave up on competing in school. She's still smart (the female protagonist didn't hide her identity for long), and has all the elements that should be expected in a marriage transformation. The male protagonist is a bit cheating. The system is quite interesting, and there are no obvious loopholes. All in all, it's ok to eat. I'll comment if I think of anything else. (Four stars is a habit. I won't give five stars to a book that I don't like very much. Four stars is more realistic. And I heard that five stars is not as good as four stars?)

I've updated 32 chapters so far. I've finished reading it and it's okay. Overall, it's OK. There's nothing poisonous about it, so I gave it five stars. There's no vulgar or explicit plot, and the writing is okay. It's not too bad. However, it is recommended not to have too long paragraphs. Some paragraphs almost take up a page. [Pause face] I suggest you break it up. It's too tiring to read. I usually skip this kind of paragraphs at a glance. Currently, there are still more plot lines, maybe because the book hasn't been written much yet. I personally quite like the character of the male protagonist Jun An. He is a bit cold and reminds me of the cool and aloof academic. In fact, I feel that this kind of little boy is the most fun to tease. He is the kind of innocent boy whose ears will turn red after being teased, but his face remains straight and he will look away. (Of course, the author hasn't written it in detail yet, and I don't know if Jun An is such a little boy [laughing] [laughing]) I understand that because the heroine Su Qian has become a woman, her psychological activities are somewhat rich. It's a little girl who unexpectedly feels a little bit of pure love, and her face gets hot just thinking about holding hands with her little girl. But I hope it's not love brain. Love brain is really annoying. As for the supporting characters, at least there aren't any great ones right now, just a cowardly villain named Zhao. Another suggestion for the author, if there are top-notch products later, don't have too many, as it will ruin your good impression. After all, in reality, there are but not many people with cerebellar atrophy. In addition, I don't want the female to be aborted and only have sex with her. I actually read this book for the combination of martial arts and remarrying. I still hope that the plot line will be the main focus. Of course, the emotional line should not be too few. If it is too little, it will be boring. Give the author support for this very new book. As long as the author doesn't make any mistakes, I can continue to follow it.

I feel that the enemy is very strong. Regarding the battle plot, I feel that the protagonist's system is a cultivator after all. In future battle plots, we can write more scenes where the male and female protagonist suppress or kill the enemy instantly. The transformation of the female protagonist and the relationship between the male and female protagonists are also written quite well. I am looking forward to the daily life of the male and female protagonists becoming stronger together. Overall, it is good to watch [Love]

I don't see the difference between cultivating immortals and practicing martial arts. The second level of martial arts training is more expressive than the foundation-building stage of cultivating immortals. Cultivation of immortality is not as good as training of martial arts

The heroine should be called Cathay

Don't the author think it's weird for the Sun Body to have ice powers?