[Group portrait] [Hot blood] [Two-way redemption] [Cultivation] [Conspiracy] [1v1] [Double strong] [Double clean]
Did you know? The sun can only shine on some people.
The three realms are divided: the upper realm is illuminated by the warm sun and enjoys exclusive light for thousands of miles; the lower realm has thin sunlight and all living beings are struggling to survive; the dark world falls forever into the night and never sees morning or sunset for eternity - for thousands of years, everyone has believed that this is God's will.
Until Jiang Qianshan was pushed into the abyss.
When he woke up at the bottom of the cliff, his right arm was disabled, his sister was dead, and he was saved by a group of lunatics who tried to break the boundaries of the three realms. Yan Yuzhuo, one of the founders, came from the light, but was willing to stay in the darkest place. He said: "The sun should not be a charity."
Jiang Qianshan had nothing to lose, so he joined them.
Together they broke through the underground palace filled with bones, walked into the silent abyss of silence, and sneaked into the Yinpuppet Pavilion full of secrets. He discovered one thing: the sunlight in the upper world was stolen. Someone has tampered with the order of heaven and earth and trapped the sunlight that should belong to everyone in their own airspace.
And the man who stole the sunshine is sitting in the highest position, looking down at the people struggling in the eternal night below - "Don't you want the sun? Come and beg me."
Jiang Qianshan's right arm is disabled. No spiritual roots. No magic skills.
But he said: "Then fight."
——When the sun is stolen, what you have to do is not to pray, but to snatch the sun back.
Reader comments
It's a group portrait-oriented story. I feel that Jiang Qianshan's character arc is relatively complete, and Yan Yuzhuo is more vivid, because he is set at the ceiling of combat power, but he also has some shortcomings, such as unwillingness to drink medicine (BTW, peeking at Mei Ruyuan and Jiang Qianshan's faces are really cute...), And every character is taken care of, even Xu Changyong doesn't appear much, but it is understandable that there are a lot of people. Comments on each character:
Yan Yuzhuo is the kind of person who has experienced huge trauma (losing his mother), so he is used to covering himself up with nonchalance, and the setting of having no heart is very touching, and the part where he stabs the heart is quite awesome.
Jiang Qianshan, Jiang Qianshan... Is... Dumb... I feel like the kind of stupid dog with a cold face... First he lost his sister and wanted to take revenge. After taking revenge, he lost the hope of life. But then he had a new goal. However, this is not so much the credit of Yan Yuzhuo as it is the credit of everyone. Everyone is taking care of each other very seriously.
Xu Changyong has relatively few appearances, but he is relatively reliable. He likes to hide things and report good news but not bad news.
Mei Ruyuan, Mei Ruyuan (Xiangbaobao version)... Is... What... Zhang Jue... You... Quickly chase... Ah...
Song Shiluo is a kind of confidant big sister. Her skill is to be able to understand other people's emotions and use them, so let her know herself and the enemy.
Li Wanyi is a taciturn type, but he always makes exceptions for flowers and trees. He seems to be unable to control his own vines (?)
Hua Ci Tree, Hua Ci Tree... It's also... What... Li Wanyi... She talks so little... I'm so worried...
Zhang Jue, the arrogant puppy, came to the lower world because his parents said he was not doing his job, hahahahaha. He is a completely spoiled child. Everyone pays attention to Mei Ruyuan, but is he not aware of his feelings yet? Hahahaha looking forward to the follow-up
Nightingale's appearance is relatively short. I just remembered my memory. I don't know how it is. I don't know if there are other characters in the future. I will follow up on it at that time (does it have this function?)
The writing is okay, some transitions are a little stiff, but it doesn't affect the reading. The main reason is that the plot is quite exciting, and the setting is also very novel, the battle to grab the sunshine [laughs]
It is a wonderful group portrait article. The story concept and background can show the author's intention. Judging from the synopsis, I think it can be developed as a medium-length novel. The overall narrative rhythm is fast and plot-oriented.
The characterization in this book is quite good. The protagonist Jiang Qianshan, as the seventh child, is a cold-faced cute puppy who has been wounded in the soul (maybe haha). From the despair after the death of his sister to the loss of life after the revenge, the psychological journey is fully described. What was particularly touching was that everyone from the Qingzhuo Society cared for and guided Xiao Jiang and supported each other along the way. The impressions of other characters are Xu Changyong's reliable big brother, Mei Ruyuan's apricot forest master, Song Shiluo's kind-hearted people, Hua Cishu's cheerful and lively character, Bai Zhiqing's ancient niche, Li Wanyi's plant master Aihua, Zhang Jue's arrogant business guru, and the rebellious genius Yan Yuzhuo (Jiang Shitou's exclusive stabilizer?). Each character is exciting individually. I wonder if it will be specially developed in the follow-up.
The writing style is not sluggish, and it is comfortable to read. I recommend reading it.
It's a group portrait-oriented story. I feel that Jiang Qianshan's character arc is relatively complete, and Yan Yuzhuo is more vivid, because he is set at the ceiling of combat power, but he also has some shortcomings, such as unwillingness to drink medicine (BTW, peeking at Mei Ruyuan and Jiang Qianshan's faces are really cute...), And every character is taken care of, even Xu Changyong doesn't appear much, but it is understandable that there are a lot of people. Comments on each character: Yan Yuzhuo is the kind of person who has experienced huge trauma (losing his mother), so he is used to covering himself up with nonchalance, and the setting of having no heart is very touching, and the part where he stabs the heart is quite awesome. Jiang Qianshan, Jiang Qianshan... Is... Dumb... I feel like the kind of stupid dog with a cold face... First he lost his sister and wanted to take revenge. After taking revenge, he lost the hope of life. But then he had a new goal. However, this is not so much the credit of Yan Yuzhuo as it is the credit of everyone. Everyone is taking care of each other very seriously. Xu Changyong has relatively few appearances, but he is relatively reliable. He likes to hide things and report good news but not bad news. Mei Ruyuan, Mei Ruyuan (Xiangbaobao version)... Is... What... Zhang Jue... You... Quickly chase... Ah... Song Shiluo is a kind of confidant big sister. Her skill is to be able to understand other people's emotions and use them, so let her know herself and the enemy. Li Wanyi is a taciturn type, but he always makes exceptions for flowers and trees. He seems to be unable to control his own vines (?) Hua Ci Tree, Hua Ci Tree... It's also... What... Li Wanyi... She talks so little... I'm so worried... Zhang Jue, the arrogant puppy, came to the lower world because his parents said he was not doing his job, hahahahaha. He is a completely spoiled child. Everyone pays attention to Mei Ruyuan, but is he not aware of his feelings yet? Hahahaha looking forward to the follow-up Nightingale's appearance is relatively short. I just remembered my memory. I don't know how it is. I don't know if there are other characters in the future. I will follow up on it at that time (does it have this function?) The writing is okay, some transitions are a little stiff, but it doesn't affect the reading. The main reason is that the plot is quite exciting, and the setting is also very novel, the battle to grab the sunshine [laughs]
It is a wonderful group portrait article. The story concept and background can show the author's intention. Judging from the synopsis, I think it can be developed as a medium-length novel. The overall narrative rhythm is fast and plot-oriented. The characterization in this book is quite good. The protagonist Jiang Qianshan, as the seventh child, is a cold-faced cute puppy who has been wounded in the soul (maybe haha). From the despair after the death of his sister to the loss of life after the revenge, the psychological journey is fully described. What was particularly touching was that everyone from the Qingzhuo Society cared for and guided Xiao Jiang and supported each other along the way. The impressions of other characters are Xu Changyong's reliable big brother, Mei Ruyuan's apricot forest master, Song Shiluo's kind-hearted people, Hua Cishu's cheerful and lively character, Bai Zhiqing's ancient niche, Li Wanyi's plant master Aihua, Zhang Jue's arrogant business guru, and the rebellious genius Yan Yuzhuo (Jiang Shitou's exclusive stabilizer?). Each character is exciting individually. I wonder if it will be specially developed in the follow-up. The writing style is not sluggish, and it is comfortable to read. I recommend reading it.