Sex transfer No system Time travel
Wearing books? And his identity is still an elf?
No, why do you have to chase me and fight? Didn't I just blow up your training ground? I didn't mean it! It's all the fault of space shock!
Grass! I can't bear it anymore, no need to bear it anymore! Take the move! Second Truth————!
This is my first time writing a book. There may be many problems with the writing, but I will improve in the future. I also ask all readers to express their understanding.
Reader comments
Personally, I hate making jokes about discord. It's a bit disgusting to be tough and make people feel ten times more spicy.
This kind of prank with no limits on friends is really disgusting.
And it was obvious that Rosemary was in the dominant position. Then Qin Shuangyue was still doing this. She couldn't tell the difference. Now Rosemary is helping her just for fun.
There is too much description. Generally speaking, there is no problem with too much description in the novel. It is just that there is too much description. Don't describe too much about one thing. If there is too much nonsense, it will feel watery and the quality of the article will decline.
Personally, I hate making jokes about discord. It's a bit disgusting to be tough and make people feel ten times more spicy. This kind of prank with no limits on friends is really disgusting. And it was obvious that Rosemary was in the dominant position. Then Qin Shuangyue was still doing this. She couldn't tell the difference. Now Rosemary is helping her just for fun.
There is too much description. Generally speaking, there is no problem with too much description in the novel. It is just that there is too much description. Don't describe too much about one thing. If there is too much nonsense, it will feel watery and the quality of the article will decline.
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An excellent book