Mysterious Recovery: It Turns Out This Is the Republic of China!

After reading Chapter 19, here's what I think is wrong: 1. The writing is not good and it makes people upset. 2. I really don't understand why the author always makes the protagonist startled? 3. There are many inexplicable emotional descriptions. 4. I don't know how the author set it up. It's not clear whether the protagonist's emotions are affected by the ghost armor. 5. Incidents come one after another, with basically no buffering time. He is even more of a model worker than Yang Jian. He solves one ghost before stepping into another ghost realm. 6. The first good and evil ghost that the protagonist encountered, after the protagonist reluctantly sealed him in the coffin, he actually used the ghost realm to move it 5 meters underground, and prayed that nothing would happen again. No, let me ask, what is 5 meters enough for? 7. The protagonist has absorbed several ghosts, and the ghost zone is only 20 meters long. 8. In short, there are so many flaws that I can't finish them. What annoys me the most is that the writing is so messy that it makes me dizzy. 9. I hope this comment can be posted (*￣m￣)

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The writing is indeed childish, the plot is average, but the subject matter of tomatoes is lacking, so I give it 5 stars for encouragement.

It's actually a good book, and you can tell it's written by hand, but the pace is slower. All in all, it looks interesting. As for switching between first and third person, I don't think it's a bad point. Many stream-of-consciousness works are like this. In fact, this method of treatment in the article did not reduce my reading experience, so I think it is understandable.