Game Life, a Cool Start, the School Beauty Asks to Live Together

How should I put it? The reincarnation of past and present lives, fate is illusory, everything seems to be destined, maybe I regret it, but no one will come to redeem me. The only one I can rely on is myself, really only myself. The author made me see, at least the redemption from the future, the dawn is right in front of me. , Overall the writing is okay, the harem aspect is really good, because a good man cannot be single, whether it is a novel or reality, with a little money, our wives are all normal, they are just married, and the children are linked to the eldest wife's household registration

I have read Chapter 40 so far. The following is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't comment. Thank you [smile] Overall, I think this book has great potential. Let's talk about the female plot first. The author did not tell the story of Tachibana Qianqian's past life experience with the male protagonist in one breath, but interspersed it in different plots. Related plots were mentioned more or less, which enriched the content of the relevant plots and made it quite interesting to read. Regarding the plot of the second female lead, I think the author did a good job in introducing the second female lead and the ending of the plot events. However, the follow-up plot of the second female lead is currently cut off directly, which feels a bit strange, giving me a sense of absurdity that the second female lead is just making an appearance. Looking at the current overall plot, the plot of the second female lead is a bit abrupt. I suggest that after the second female lead appears, the author intersperses a small part of her background or other content into the subsequent plot to draw out a line unique to the second female lead, so that the subsequent plot can be better taken over and not appear abrupt. Of course, if the author has spare energy, it is recommended to bury a hidden thread, which can be about the third female protagonist or other female protagonists, so that the overall feeling will be more layered. Secondly, regarding the description of the characters and environment, I generally think the author writes quite well. However, one thing that needs to be noted is that the description is pictorial but not detailed. The overall plot gives me a pictorial but hazy feeling. You can think of some pictures but they are not specific and vivid enough. Take the plot of Tachibana Qianqian messing up the fish cooking as an example. According to the author's description, I can think of ginger everywhere and Tachibana Qianqian looking aggrieved, but I need to think of a more specific picture myself. If you add this sentence - some (gingers) exploded and landed on the ground, some hit the wall, and some flew up and hit Tachibana Qianqian on the head, and then bounced to the stove - I think it would be more vivid and concrete.

The writing is good, but only two female leads appear now. The first heroine, Ju Qianqian, has to be eaten in chapter 3, while the second heroine, Su Lanyue, only appeared in chapter 20. Tachibana has too many scenes. I hope Su Lanyue can eat it soon! [Bookshelf plus one]

It's really good. I highly recommend watching it. First of all, there are no mindless pulling scenes. You have to eat it right away in the beginning. Although there are a lot of pretentious and slap-in-the-face plots, the problem is not big. There is no praise for the system. The second wife wakes up a little slowly. The daily interactions are very sweet. There is nothing wrong with it. There are not too many commercial plots. There is no poison. The biggest poison after watching it for a long time is that the male protagonist loves to show off.

Not bad, the big dog is barking

Oops, that's good. What's the matter with the interruption?

Looks good, don't be a eunuch [I strongly recommend]

It's okay, but the number of words is still very small.