Pokemon: Steel Symphony

It's very nice to watch. The scene descriptions, character language, Pokémon battle scenes, etc. Are all very good. Daigo's stone mind has come to his senses. The two of them are so sweet! Compared with many articles, the author's writing style is very good and the plot is smooth! Recommended, teacher, I will give you a thumbs up for the next 9-point article (maybe it's because I feel the structure is a bit small at the beginning. The whole story revolves around the research of the heroine, and there are no eye-catching features. Of course, this is just the beginning, and I look forward to the author's output in the future). Is the character of the heroine a light-faced and dark-bellied? I look forward to a contrasting description of exciting scenes. The author's basic writing skills are really the best among all new articles. Boss, I'm following you!!! But the author couldn't think of a way to replace the chapter title with Pokémon. Let's vote for Tan Xiaoyu and Blue Flame Blade Demon (that's what they're called)

We have a good relationship with Pokémon in June, and we have Pichu, and our relationship with the male protagonist has been flowing for a long time, but the Yellow River has not stopped flowing in June. At the same time, it has successfully avoided the embarrassing disadvantages of licking the original protagonist in most fan fiction. It is very natural and feels very equal. Xiaoyao even has a slight admiration for June. Xiaoyao is so cute! But for anime fans who have never played the game and want to see more familiar people, teacher, teacher, is it convenient for our Xiaozhi to appear? Hey, I have a plan. The timeline can be compared to the Carlos line, because it will be more exciting. Be greedy, can we have Xiaozhi Serena in June? For example, some small plans, some help, etc... Thank you for your hard work, teacher. Finally, it's really good-looking, and I'm not asking for help

It's pretty good, the writing is not sluggish, the writing is smooth, and the descriptions are relatively delicate. It's also a rare protagonist who is not a trainer and can't do babble. It seems to be a bit warm at present. According to the current writing style, it is interesting to read to the end. I look forward to reading the complete book. I hope the teacher can finish it normally and not dig holes (threat)

After reading this, I feel that the heroine has a hard life, working hard as a worker 🤦, and also caring about a certain problem child: a Pokémon in the late stages of secondary disease, an avid metal lover, a beast that hates bathing and causes the heroine to be misunderstood - Lucario Chapter 64 confirms the relationship, but the heroine actually takes the initiative [Thoughts]

(Representing only one person, please mark it) It's a very comfortable book to read. There are no inexplicably stupid plots. The characters are full of personality and the plot is smooth. It's just too short. You can definitely consider writing a longer one.

I like this book very much, the writing is delicate. I particularly like the way the protagonist and Daigo get along in a long and steady manner. There is no rush or intense plot, but feelings slowly develop bit by bit. The atmosphere is just right, making it extremely enjoyable to read. After following it carefully, I feel full of reluctance, and I look forward to the author producing more warm and beautiful stories in the future ❤️

The plot is slightly different from the original work, but the wife's original part is also very interesting. The heroine also has a great character, she loves Pokémon, she is just and gentle, kind and courageous, she is very charming! All in all, it was a delicious meal, thank you to the chef [salute]

The show is great!!!!!! The writing is also good. I have no regrets after reading this book🥹The interaction between the protagonist and Daiwu is so good😋😋😋I read every article very carefully. Can the teacher add more chapters? It's not enough🤓🤓

It's beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it |ʘᗝʘ|

The writing has a smooth rhythm and is not laggy. Both people and Pokémon are portrayed in a three-dimensional and cute way. (The interaction between the protagonist and Pichu and Lucario is real and full of life, and the world of Pokémon seems to be right in front of you.) The logical connection is also smooth and natural, and it feels very comfortable to read the whole story. 👍 👍 👍 (I read it with another account, come here to comment ¯꒳¯)