P.S. I’m a novice author. I got the idea to start this novel because another author kept putting theirs off.
(Ultraman fanfic, Ultraman spirit, a bit of an ensemble cast, no heroine for now, with an original plot.)
(The text has been revised. The early chapters may be a little rough, but I get the hang of it around chapter twenty.)
(The author may go a little crazy. Just ignore it.)
A genius with 25% brain development hand-builds several Ultraman armors and guides the younger generation as they grow. But...
Hayata Shinjiro: “Senior Moroboshi, Senior Hoshino, I don’t get it! The Jeep is too dangerous!”
The Leo brothers: “Damn it, Seven is still chasing me.”
Father of Ultra: “Ceres! Does this really work?”
Hoshino Amagi: “Don’t run away. Charge at the Jeep!”
I’m no good at summarizing this. Come see for yourself.
Let me give myself a score. Dear readers, this young author is looking for bookshelf online. The plot in the future will be very exciting 🥺
Although I have only written 50,000 words, so far, the impression is good. Unfortunately, I have seen less of the mobile plot. I don't know much about this aspect. Generally speaking, the future is promising. Come on, meow 😘
It feels okay, but theoretically speaking, there are only two Ultramans in the world view of Mobile Ultra, Zoffi and Ultraman. From a normal person's perspective, you don't know the first generation of Ultraman, and the narrative feels a bit too fast. Also, according to the setting, the Ultraman who protected the earth 40 years ago is already the best in the race. Ultraman should only know Zoffie and not Hikari. I think the setting can be rounded out.
I like the world view of Jiao very much. Secondly, the plot must not be too solid😱Don't be as solid as Silius [fear]
This school started early, I secretly watched during class
It's not bad, at least in terms of writing [Smile] It's good that it doesn't have content that makes people dizzy after reading it [Chigua]
A very nice fan work. I want to see the emotional line between Shinjiro and Rena 😢 The ending of the anime is unclear. It's really a pity 😢 😢
Come on, it's very beautiful
It's rare to see a mobile arcana fanfic, here it is for you. 🥺 Beidou Xingsi is so beautiful, but no one around me has seen it.
It's pretty good, but the update is too short and too slow. I hope I won't send it half-written.