Ps: The author is a novice. He came up with the idea of starting a novel because of a certain author's pigeon.
(Ultra fan, Ultra spirit, micro group portrait, no heroine for now, original plot)
(The content has been revised, you can read it in the early stage if you are slightly poisonous, and you will be proficient in about twenty chapters)
(The author may go crazy, don't worry)
A genius with a brain developed at 25% twenty-five, rubs several Ultra Armors with his hands, and guides the younger generations to grow up, but...
Shinjiro Hayata: Morohoshi-senpai, Hoshino-senpai, I don't understand! Jeeps are so dangerous!
Brother Leo: Damn it, Severn is still chasing me.
Father Ao: Sires! Does this really work?
Hoshino Amagi: Don't run, rush towards the jeep!
The brief description is too weak, please move on and watch.
Reader comments
Let me give myself a score. Dear readers, this young author is looking for bookshelf online. The plot in the future will be very exciting [I'm about to cry]
Although I have only written 50,000 words, so far, the impression is good. Unfortunately, I have seen less of the mobile plot. I don't know much about this aspect. Generally speaking, the future is promising. Come on, meow [blowing kiss]
It feels okay, but theoretically speaking, there are only two Ultramans in the world view of Mobile Ultra, Zoffi and Ultraman. From a normal person's perspective, you don't know the first generation of Ultraman, and the narrative feels a bit too fast. Also, according to the setting, the Ultraman who protected the earth 40 years ago is already the best in the race. Ultraman should only know Zoffie and not Hikari. I think the setting can be rounded out.
I like the world view of Jiao very much. Secondly, the plot must not be too solid😱Don't be as solid as Silius [fear]
This school started early, I secretly watched during class
It's not bad, at least in terms of writing [Smile] It's good that it doesn't have content that makes people dizzy after reading it [Chigua]
A very nice fan work. I want to see the emotional line between Shinjiro and Rena [crying] The ending of the anime is unclear. It's really a pity [crying] [crying]
Come on, it's very beautiful
It's pretty good, but the update is too short and too slow. I hope I won't send it half-written.
It's rare to see a mobile arcana fanfic, here it is for you. [Aggrieved] Beidou Xingsi is so beautiful, but no one around me has seen it.
Come on, that adult
Given the five-star rating, I hope to update it more often.
Come on, big brother who writes mobile Olympics
Personally, I feel very good
Come on, it feels interesting
It looks good, the plot is good, and the character of the protagonist is also interesting
Let me give myself a score. Dear readers, this young author is looking for bookshelf online. The plot in the future will be very exciting [I'm about to cry]
Although I have only written 50,000 words, so far, the impression is good. Unfortunately, I have seen less of the mobile plot. I don't know much about this aspect. Generally speaking, the future is promising. Come on, meow [blowing kiss]
It feels okay, but theoretically speaking, there are only two Ultramans in the world view of Mobile Ultra, Zoffi and Ultraman. From a normal person's perspective, you don't know the first generation of Ultraman, and the narrative feels a bit too fast. Also, according to the setting, the Ultraman who protected the earth 40 years ago is already the best in the race. Ultraman should only know Zoffie and not Hikari. I think the setting can be rounded out.
I like the world view of Jiao very much. Secondly, the plot must not be too solid😱Don't be as solid as Silius [fear]
This school started early, I secretly watched during class
It's not bad, at least in terms of writing [Smile] It's good that it doesn't have content that makes people dizzy after reading it [Chigua]
A very nice fan work. I want to see the emotional line between Shinjiro and Rena [crying] The ending of the anime is unclear. It's really a pity [crying] [crying]
Come on, it's very beautiful
It's pretty good, but the update is too short and too slow. I hope I won't send it half-written.
It's rare to see a mobile arcana fanfic, here it is for you. [Aggrieved] Beidou Xingsi is so beautiful, but no one around me has seen it.
Come on, that adult
Given the five-star rating, I hope to update it more often.
Come on, big brother who writes mobile Olympics
Personally, I feel very good
Come on, it feels interesting
It looks good, the plot is good, and the character of the protagonist is also interesting