Dating Show: We're All Ordinary People, So Why Are You Singing and Dancing?

Since you want to write about breaking off a relationship with a friend, and you didn't break off the relationship before, and you didn't do anything sorry for you, but now because of someone else's words... You just asked him to do a favor. Although he was given three songs, there is really no need to write. Did your roommate of four years just break it off? It feels like the protagonist is very cold, and you want to return the favor to him in the recording studio. Although you have the intention of breaking off the relationship, you gave him three songs at once... This part is a complete failure.

Please support me, there is no comment. It's generally okay to write it, but it's a bit awkward to send a song without copyright. You can write it to show that the protagonist is generous and wants to return the favor and stay away from the relationship. But it's a bit exaggerated. You wrote three songs that could win gold hits, but it's just a recording studio. You're not incompetent, so you have to pull out an inexplicable character just to give away three songs?

It's very beautiful, I like it very much 😄😄👍👍

Very sweet 🥰🥰🥰

It's mediocre, the pace is too fast. Feeling a little strange