Creation Begins with the Collapse of the Star Dome Railway

It's okay, at least it's well written in terms of viewing, and it's not too homogeneous. Just like other comments said, it's true that the plot of the author's main world is not very good. At least for now, it seems to be all kinds of upper-level darkness plus doomsday plus resistance, and then in various Being approached by promotion nodes and the like and then hiding around, I can't say that it feels good anyway, and it's a bit uncomfortable to feel aggrieved. Anyway, it is more uncomfortable to watch. The author means that there is foreshadowing, although I feel that this kind of foreshadowing is not a good thing, but so be it. Anyway, all in all, if you can't accept that, just skip the realistic part and it won't have a big impact. So far, I feel that the only useful point in the real-life plot is to link up with his teacher, and then accommodate the teacher's world view. There seems to be no other key things that need to be known. It's not bad. Try to finish it as much as possible. I can't say it's too good, but it's definitely not bad, at least it's already very good. Forget it, I really can't watch the realistic plot. The ratio between the movie plot and the real plot seems to be adjusted to about 1:2, or even 1:3. I feel that the author likes the realistic kind very much. All kinds of restrictions on high-level combat power are left to the protagonist to face, and all of them can make faces. Again, if they really have such great power, they can just kill the protagonist. If they don't have such great power, why should they show such great power? It also deliberately creates a sense of frustration, and then deliberately breaks out a little sense of joy in certain plots. For me, I don't like this somewhat deliberate feeling.

It's quite interesting. I give four stars to encourage the author to [learn it]. I also hope that the author will overturn it. Writing Star Iron fan settings that conflict with the original work is an indispensable part of the review. [Check carefully] In fact, I feel that if the protagonist wants to develop a world view, it may be easier to start with Ompharos. The world setting is complete and well-recognized, and the world can be introduced later to expand the world view. If you go directly to the fairy boat, it feels like it is too big a step. It is inevitable to mention the star god, and it is impossible to explain it clearly in a lot of videos. In fact, most of the introduction to the world view of Xingtie is integrated into the plot. There will not be too much content at once. It is split into the main line or side tasks and various texts. It is naturally easy to understand and accept us as we slowly get to know the world from the perspective of the protagonist who has lost his memory, but it will be difficult for people in the text who can only watch a few minutes of the video to understand. However, I think the author seems to have his own ideas, so I will share my thoughts to see if I can give the author some inspiration.

It feels quite good-looking. It's not the kind of mindless fun where all the combat power is unleashed and you're instantly invincible. I want to see the protagonist unleash Beng Tie and everyone is wowed by how awesome he is and then they praise him so much that he can quit. Although the current reviews from netizens are all positive, there are some people who want to play the protagonist for profit reasons. There is early growth for the protagonist, and the world view that the protagonist lives in is also complete. It is not a background world with no background and is just for the protagonist to enjoy. There are supporting characters who have not appeared to hinder them (nothing happened). So far, all the published ones are pv

After watching it, I also saw a lot of long comments, which shows that everyone wants to have a real feast after eating too much, and now they are looking forward to the scene when the embodied protagonist comes in the future, hahahaha. The author should not be obsessed with the heroine. The emotional line is not easy to write and it is easy to overturn and discourage the readers. Because she has eaten too much saccharin, I have seen some heroines being avoided as soon as possible. No matter how high the score is, they will not click in. Haha, besides, I think this heroine's throne is not a bad one for us (just kidding) author, please give it a try ୧•̀ꇴ•૭

I have read the first 10 chapters, and I can only say that the setting is okay. But the protagonist seems to be unintelligent and cannot understand human speech. The power system of this world needs to introduce the character setting and world view. All kinds of world-building essentials. And the people around me don't have any slap-in-the-face plots, such as the teacher suppressing them. And they all understand the protagonist, but the protagonist seems to be disobedient. In the first few videos, except for the introduction of the character settings, the world view and the power system are not included. They are all writing something that requires a plot. Only things that can be understood. But even though the author doesn't know the world he writes about, the people he attracts are attracted by the high quality of the work. Although the logic is perfect, the world consciousness is not allowed to pass, and more people are needed. But if you do this, it will appear that the protagonist knows how to survive. In the second and third chapters, there is still no video of the relevant setting set, so it feels like the protagonist [smile] I can only say that it may not be suitable for me, but I encourage you to give it four stars. Ok This is a novel with a good setting, complete logic, and a good starting point where the protagonist is surrounded by normal people. It's just that the protagonist is a bit [staring]

Now that I have watched all the updated ones, I feel that the PV part is OK. In the past, many people who purely watched the movie just followed the game plot, which made it difficult to form a complete world view with the PVs shown here and there. So the feedback is not very good. But I feel that the PV part of this book is well placed. I released many PVs of Luofu Xianzhou in one go, and wrote some of the world view of Xianzhou in a relatively complete manner. But, this book is not a pure movie. The adventures of the protagonist seem to take up a lot of space... And there are obviously many internal human conspiracies. To be honest, this part is not interesting. Because this kind of plot is relatively homogeneous, there are too many stories about using the power of other worlds to resist the dark upper strata of this world. The part where the protagonist is hiding is not as good as the part where he goes out to fight monsters (although the part where he goes out to fight monsters is not that interesting). It is recommended that the author can write briefly about the forces in the differential universe in the future, such as the most classic Star Reacher/Arsonist who are so bad that they ooze pus, or the Super Sportsman/Immortal Stranger/Spinning Savior who prefers order. Let the audience see what a complete world view this is I hope the author can control the ratio of movie watching/adventure and try to fill in the big holes he dug (it is not easy to dig holes without burying them. The Star God pits in the world of reflection seem a bit too big)

The setting is super interesting. Looking at it so far, some parts in real life may be a little awkward (strong blood), but there are no obvious poisonous points. As for the introduction to Xingtie, it's just right, not too much, not too little. It feels like I was delayed by the introduction. The actual performance of this book is not as rigid as the introduction. Under the system of gaining power through video communication, it has its own innovation and thinking. Looking forward to the update [plus one on the bookshelf] [please ask for more updates] [I also strongly recommend] [the masterpiece of bird food]

Oh no, the author seems to have failed with his elbow

In fact, it's okay, but worlds like Star Iron are not easy to place in a world similar to resource upgrading and immortality. The concept of Star Iron's destiny is Tao, which is more in line with the traditional feeling of immortality and enlightenment. Enlightenment is the main thing. The focus of the two types is different. The resource type focuses on grabbing resources and attaches great importance to combat power. The difference in style makes me feel a little inappropriate. The others are okay and have no poisonous points.

"I'm here to preach, I'm here to heal, I'm here to dedicate." "I'm sowing seeds for life, watering my flesh and blood, and harvesting abundant fruits." "Everything is dedicated to the compassionate Medicine King!" Flowers bloom wantonly, facing the inescapable loss; birds spread their wings and sing, flying towards the inescapable fall; streams gurgling, flowing towards the inescapable dryness - why must all things perish? There must be a magic medicine in the universe that can cure the stubborn disease called "short life". Praise the abundance, lament the abundance, the tranquility and beauty of the abundance. The abundance should be the head of all things, bestowing the blessing of eternal life. Trillions of people in the universe, the gift of abundance, should be the only gratitude of the universe. All things are interdependent, only the abundance will last forever. Listen to the blessings given by the abundance pharmacist, who is fair and selfless, and bestows the blessing of eternal life on the entire universe. Thank you pharmacist for your greatness

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 So beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so good that my tears will not stop, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water. To sum up, it's so beautiful｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

I'm curious how the protagonist will change the world after eradicating those powerful families? I hope not everyone is equal, after all, the protagonist is in a world that is collapsing iron! The only thing that can make everyone equal is the order and harmony of the two Star Gods. Good guy, one obeys the order and the other erases everyone's differences and makes everyone equal, right?

It looks good, I like it very much, and it has a very novel world view setting (very interesting to me). So far, there are no surprises. There are no characters that make people feel uncomfortable. The characters are reasonable. I hope the author will continue to maintain it. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up plot.

It also took me one night to read the author's new book. On Tomato, there are actually many novels derived from "Beng Tie", but there are actually very few systems like this. Generally, it is similar to creating a world view, expounding the world view to gain power, and summoning the characters. In fact, it is similar to creating a world view. There are many books like this, but I think this one is particularly outstanding. Both the author's literary talent and the author's construction of the power system are relatively complete, but there are also some flaws. For example, in the book, the author emphasizes many times about the end of the world and monsters. Then, from the book, I personally feel that the main character, oh no, it should be said that the source of the power system is human traffic or page views, but a planet or the country you see so far. Because the author didn't say how many countries there are, I assumed it was a federation. How many people does a federation have? How many people are there? How much traffic can it provide you? What is its conversion rate? How can a relatively small realm provide such huge power? I think the author can do something about it, such as changing it to a cosmic background. In other words, you can make some settings on the traffic flow. It is no longer the basis for providing power, but can also be turned into some anchor points. For example, it is a necessary way to gain the beginning of power, but there is no need to tie up the number of views on the road of development. All in all, this kind of novel system that uses traffic and views to transform power, and uses posting videos for PV to build a power system is still rare at present, and the author has mastered this point perfectly. Another point is that extraordinary people are the mainstay in resisting outsiders, so ordinary people can also be described. Well, the above are my personal opinions. If there are any mistakes, I hope you can correct me. Also, the author is really awesome. [Blowing kiss]

It's okay, it's quite interesting. It's not a complete movie viewing, it has its own original plot. But to be honest, I think the author's viewing part is pretty good, but the original plot is a bit... Then there is the starting memory defect, which I think is a bit poisonous.

The world view is quite good, and it is a growth-oriented protagonist. Don't let the protagonist make some temporary breakthroughs. Those characters may appear at some point. After reading and listening to this novel for so long, why hasn't the protagonist summoned the characters yet? Why haven't the four-star characters of the growth type been summoned yet? Well, there are a lot of soldiers, but it still feels good. Come on, author, I hope you can make four-star characters and summon some in advance. Even I don't ask you to find and create those five-star characters. Just a four-star character is fine. I beg you, author, okay?

This book is actually very well written, and it is considered a masterpiece in Tomato. It's a pity that the author has seriously considered reincarnation. This subject is really interesting.

It's very interesting to read, but sometimes the plot is passed quickly and there is no sense of immersion. Of course, too much may lead to too much nonsense, but as long as this book is not removed from the shelves or suddenly withdrawn, I will keep reading it.

The biggest shortcoming of this novel is that it is too short. Damn, I really like it. Teacher, in fact, I have always been a fan of yours. From the first chapter and the first page, I have been deeply attracted to you. Teacher, hungry, rice (knock on the bowl and wait for updates)

Although it feels weird, I still gave it five stars to show my support. It can be seen that the author does not respect second creation very much, and works very hard to write his own original plot. But how should this second creation be defined? If there is a completely original world view and plot, but one of the characters is a popular character from another work who has traveled through time, can it only be considered a second creation? There are a lot of things that don't make sense in the setting of this original worldview. I didn't want to go into it at first, but I felt that it was the author's foreshadowing. I have read a lot of novels of this type, but basically none of them are finished. They are basically stopped halfway through, and no one has completed this kind of world view setting. Come on, author.

It's pretty good-looking, the subject matter is relatively rare, and the integration is a bit innovative. At least I haven't seen anything similar before, or there are so few that I forgot. So far, it seems that there are no poisonous points, the logic is not flawed, and the protagonist's character is also good. I just don't know if there is a female protagonist, at least now I don't see any sign of a female protagonist.

Fortunately, I scrolled down and saw this book, [licking the screen] otherwise I would have missed such a beautiful book [plus one on the bookshelf] I hope the author can keep updating and not stop updating [almost crying] It is really not easy to find a book you like in a pile of shit [love] [please update]

It is much better than watching movies from different dynasties, watching movies with game characters, and watching movies with parallel Blue Star. It has its own world view.

It looks good. The author must win.

Hey, I cried. Is there still a chance to be reincarnated?

I saw a lot of low scores before reading it, but since I'm really a book nerd, I decided to read it anyway. After watching it all at once, I actually felt pretty good. There wasn't any major negative points for me. I felt fine about the issues mentioned in the comment area. I suggest you turn off the paragraph comment and read it yourself. Don't let the paragraph comment affect your mood. You will know whether you like it or not [laughing]

It's just my personal opinion. I don't ask the author to change anything. I just think that writing it this way will make readers feel more comfortable. It's my personal opinion. It doesn't matter whether I change it or not. I'm just telling you my personal thoughts. There is no main content to write about. I just write half and half, half the plot or PV and then half what happened in reality. For me, the plot that I was originally addicted to in the PV suddenly returned to reality, and there are conspiracy theories and pursuits. Because I have already focused all my attention on the PV, I feel that the real plot is a bit long-winded and I can't concentrate [face covering]. It feels like the author wants to write everything very clearly. Maybe we can focus on writing about people's reactions after the PV is released, and then let the reality pass through it a little bit, or conversely focus on some real-life PVs and go through it a little bit. Mainly for me, I almost skip watching and only watch the PV before and after the release. Don't be like this, writing half and half, it's easy to focus on the previous plot, and then when you feel like you want to continue watching the actual plot, what will you post next? Then pick to see which chapter has a new PV and new plot released It's just my personal opinion. I don't ask the author to change anything. I just think that writing it this way will make readers feel more comfortable. It's my personal opinion. It doesn't matter whether I change it or not. I'm just telling you what I think. It's well written and makes people want to read on.

Liang Cao -, you can try reading if you are short of books, you don't have to force yourself to update. The creative framework is very good and the potential is sufficient; however, most works of the same name/same theme are subject to the pace of online content updates and fail to polish the setting of "Creation + Star Dome Railway". It is recommended to read the first 20 chapters to feel the author's handling of the balance of combat power and plot direction before deciding to continue reading.

The setting is interesting, the early plot is a bit flawed, but the current overall problem is not big, and it is considered good in Tomato. The author is good at listening to suggestions. If you feel something is toxic, you can directly explain it to the author. In short, there are no big problems at present except that there are few chapters. But four chapters a day is pretty good.

Very good book, but too few