Creation Begins with Honkai: Star Rail

It's okay, at least it's well written in terms of viewing, and it's not too homogeneous. Just like other comments said, it's true that the plot of the author's main world is not very good. At least for now, it seems to be all kinds of upper-level darkness plus doomsday plus resistance, and then in various Being approached by promotion nodes and the like and then hiding around, I can't say that it feels good anyway, and it's a bit uncomfortable to feel aggrieved. Anyway, it is more uncomfortable to watch. The author means that there is foreshadowing, although I feel that this kind of foreshadowing is not a good thing, but so be it. Anyway, all in all, if you can't accept that, just skip the realistic part and it won't have a big impact. So far, I feel that the only useful point in the real-life plot is to link up with his teacher, and then accommodate the teacher's world view. There seems to be no other key things that need to be known. It's not bad. Try to finish it as much as possible. I can't say it's too good, but it's definitely not bad, at least it's already very good. Forget it, I really can't watch the realistic plot. The ratio between the movie plot and the real plot seems to be adjusted to about 1:2, or even 1:3. I feel that the author likes the realistic kind very much. All kinds of restrictions on high-level combat power are left to the protagonist to face, and all of them can make faces. Again, if they really have such great power, they can just kill the protagonist. If they don't have such great power, why should they show such great power? It also deliberately creates a sense of frustration, and then deliberately breaks out a little sense of joy in certain plots. For me, I don't like this somewhat deliberate feeling.

It's quite interesting. I give four stars to encourage the author to [learn it]. I also hope that the author will overturn it. Writing Star Iron fan settings that conflict with the original work is an indispensable part of the review. [Check carefully] In fact, I feel that if the protagonist wants to develop a world view, it may be easier to start with Ompharos. The world setting is complete and well-recognized, and the world can be introduced later to expand the world view. If you go directly to the fairy boat, it feels like it is too big a step. It is inevitable to mention the star god, and it is impossible to explain it clearly in a lot of videos. In fact, most of the introduction to the world view of Xingtie is integrated into the plot. There will not be too much content at once. It is split into the main line or side tasks and various texts. It is naturally easy to understand and accept us as we slowly get to know the world from the perspective of the protagonist who has lost his memory, but it will be difficult for people in the text who can only watch a few minutes of the video to understand. However, I think the author seems to have his own ideas, so I will share my thoughts to see if I can give the author some inspiration.

It feels quite good-looking. It's not the kind of mindless fun where all the combat power is unleashed and you're instantly invincible. I want to see the protagonist unleash Beng Tie and everyone is wowed by how awesome he is and then they praise him so much that he can quit. Although the current reviews from netizens are all positive, there are some people who want to play the protagonist for profit reasons. There is early growth for the protagonist, and the world view that the protagonist lives in is also complete. It is not a background world with no background and is just for the protagonist to enjoy. There are supporting characters who have not appeared to hinder them (nothing happened). So far, all the published ones are pv

After watching it, I also saw a lot of long comments, which shows that everyone wants to have a real feast after eating too much, and now they are looking forward to the scene when the embodied protagonist comes in the future, hahahaha. The author should not be obsessed with the heroine. The emotional line is not easy to write and it is easy to overturn and discourage the readers. Because she has eaten too much saccharin, I have seen some heroines being avoided as soon as possible. No matter how high the score is, they will not click in. Haha, besides, I think this heroine's throne is not a bad one for us (just kidding) author, please give it a try ୧•̀ꇴ•૭

I have read the first 10 chapters, and I can only say that the setting is okay. But the protagonist seems to be unintelligent and cannot understand human speech. The power system of this world needs to introduce the character setting and world view. All kinds of world-building essentials. And the people around me don't have any slap-in-the-face plots, such as the teacher suppressing them. And they all understand the protagonist, but the protagonist seems to be disobedient. In the first few videos, except for the introduction of the character settings, the world view and the power system are not included. They are all writing something that requires a plot. Only things that can be understood. But even though the author doesn't know the world he writes about, the people he attracts are attracted by the high quality of the work. Although the logic is perfect, the world consciousness is not allowed to pass, and more people are needed. But if you do this, it will appear that the protagonist knows how to survive. In the second and third chapters, there is still no video of the relevant setting set, so it feels like the protagonist 🙂 I can only say that it may not be suitable for me, but I encourage you to give it four stars. Ok This is a novel with a good setting, complete logic, and a good starting point where the protagonist is surrounded by normal people. It's just that the protagonist is a bit [staring]

Now that I have watched all the updated ones, I feel that the PV part is OK. In the past, many people who purely watched the movie just followed the game plot, which made it difficult to form a complete world view with the PVs shown here and there. So the feedback is not very good. But I feel that the PV part of this book is well placed. I released many PVs of Luofu Xianzhou in one go, and wrote some of the world view of Xianzhou in a relatively complete manner. But, this book is not a pure movie. The adventures of the protagonist seem to take up a lot of space... And there are obviously many internal human conspiracies. To be honest, this part is not interesting. Because this kind of plot is relatively homogeneous, there are too many stories about using the power of other worlds to resist the dark upper strata of this world. The part where the protagonist is hiding is not as good as the part where he goes out to fight monsters (although the part where he goes out to fight monsters is not that interesting). It is recommended that the author can write briefly about the forces in the differential universe in the future, such as the most classic Star Reacher/Arsonist who are so bad that they ooze pus, or the Super Sportsman/Immortal Stranger/Spinning Savior who prefers order. Let the audience see what a complete world view this is I hope the author can control the ratio of movie watching/adventure and try to fill in the big holes he dug (it is not easy to dig holes without burying them. The Star God pits in the world of reflection seem a bit too big)

The setting is super interesting. Looking at it so far, some parts in real life may be a little awkward (strong blood), but there are no obvious poisonous points. As for the introduction to Xingtie, it's just right, not too much, not too little. It feels like I was delayed by the introduction. The actual performance of this book is not as rigid as the introduction. Under the system of gaining power through video communication, it has its own innovation and thinking. Looking forward to the update [plus one on the bookshelf] [please ask for more updates] [I also strongly recommend] [the masterpiece of bird food]

Oh no, the author seems to have failed with his elbow

I'm curious how the protagonist will change the world after eradicating those powerful families? I hope not everyone is equal, after all, the protagonist is in a world that is collapsing iron! The only thing that can make everyone equal is the order and harmony of the two Star Gods. Good guy, one obeys the order and the other erases everyone's differences and makes everyone equal, right?

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 So beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so good that my tears will not stop, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water. To sum up, it's so beautiful｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡