
After Pretending to Be Good, I Caught My Senior Brother's Eye
装乖后,我被师兄盯上了
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- Ongoing
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- 584k Words
- Genre
- Two Male Leads
- Updated
- 7d ago
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- Fanqie
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- 焚骨为仙Alternate title on Fanqie
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This is the first time I read this type of novel about cultivating immortals. I really like the character of the protagonist, Shou Xiaojuan. I like this white-cut black kitten. I was also very excited to read Xiaojuan's growth path written by the teacher. The overall story rhythm is also very good. I hope you can work hard, teacher! (In addition, Xiaojuan is just like a little kitten. People who watch it feel warm in their hearts. So cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute) ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Not to mention other things, this writing style is simply exquisite. (As you read further, you can really feel the improvement of the author's writing style. Of course, it was also very good at the beginning! 🥰) I have read several books before and they all said that the protagonist baby written by the author and teacher did not have a golden finger, the plot development was not exciting enough, or he was dissatisfied with the character design, etc. But I just think that this is good. First of all, the author and teacher have said many times that the entire theme of this book is the protagonist's "counterattack". Moreover, our Juanbao also has unique strengths, such as his sword bones and his fierceness in crawling out of the dust. I think these are his "golden fingers". On the contrary, I feel that those cool articles that force everything on the protagonist are just superficial (of course, I don't mean to denigrate or boycott such cool articles. I also like it and sometimes look for cool articles to read. Some people just like to read this kind of article, or simply like it or want to relax. This is a carrot and a green vegetable. Everyone has their own preferences💕) The author and teacher start from the idea of "ordinary people", so the struggles, efforts, emotions and brilliance of ordinary people in the article as an "ordinary person" are all normal (it's just an idea, of course Xiao Juanbao is not an ordinary person😳😳) Besides, the character design is not too good at all. The author's teacher is really delicate in portraying the characters and laying out the emotions. When He first appeared, he seemed really unlikable to me. I even thought about whether I could change my attack at first. But later, He entered Taichu to study as a teacher. As he practiced step by step, He's humaneness improved a lot. The author, the teacher, wrote about Juan's emotional and mental changes from the beginning to after entering Taichu, which is simply the pen of God. 🤤 I just don't know why I saw a lot of doubts in this review forum. 😅In my opinion, this is a very good and reasonable novel. It is a work with profound meaning and connotation. If someone wants to ask the author for a work based on the standards of Shuangwen, then why not go directly to Shuangwen? It is normal for a work to have different voices. This is actually a kind of affirmation and encouragement to the author and teacher, 😘😘but some are simply unreasonable. Every author has different writing preferences and writing styles. There is no need to force it. If you don't like it, just don't read it. The author teacher concentrates on writing the article, and we readers also read the article carefully. Finally, all the babies who read my book review, please read it!!! You won't know if you like it until you watch it. Trust me, you won't lose money if you invest in it, it's super good-looking!!! 💕💕💕💕
Finally tied! It's really good-looking, and the characters are very three-dimensional. In the world of cultivation, the jungle is strong and the strong eat the strong. The Virgin will definitely not survive, but good intentions can. It seems that almost all of them are evil, but it turns out otherwise. Everyone has their own position. As long as the starting point is not to do evil, I really like this kind of character. What shocked me the most was that none of them were NPC characters. The appearances and dialogues of each supporting character were very consistent with the characters. Even if they appeared very rarely, such as the elders and Xiang Heting's father, each one had his or her own distinctive character. Finally, I would like to talk about Song Juan in particular. He is a counterattack by a small person in the unconventional sense. The malice of the world has almost wiped out all his kindness. What he wants is very simple, to survive and climb up. But a small person like him cannot rely entirely on himself. He is very precise about his situation and positioning, so he needs to stay rational at all times, stay damned rational! Then I have to praise Baby Fuyuan, a really kind-hearted child. He was the first person to break Song Juan's secret and still choose to protect it. Xiangheting, there is currently a bump on the elm tree. I'm really looking forward to the next episode. This book is sure to be a hit!
The plot is very coherent, a bit like a group novel, there is no deliberate villain, the relationship between the protagonists is touching, and Tiredness is also very cute ⚈₃⚈, there are some bad thoughts, and their emotional development is step by step. It is really beautiful. I have not found anything of the same type in 🍅. The author is also very fond of it. Active, cute😊, everyone in the plot has their own growth line, friendship, and love are all described very well. I really like this book. I hope the author will update it soon 😘 [admiration] 😘 [licking the screen] I hope more people will discover this novel [already planted] [plus one on the bookshelf] [please update]
The protagonist rises up quickly and gives them red bean paste😭 He originally came in after seeing me click on the xp point. Now I just want the protagonist to give them the bean paste, the outer disciple who looks down on the protagonist, the two who grabbed the knife, the rat, the one who insulted the protagonist's formation when the protagonist was 11 years old, the rat, oh, bu bu bu bu, give them, bean paste, all rats, those who look down on the protagonist, those who insult the protagonist, give them all to me!!! I really want to fast forward to when the protagonist makes their bean paste😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Super Invincible is so good, I just wish He could have a longer mouth, say whatever he wants, and don't say anything half-heartedly to make people misunderstood. Now it's okay, my wife ran away 😄😄 I hope the author will update it, it's so good, it's not enough 🤤🤤🤤
It's so beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women look crazy💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock of vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It's God, it's my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I'm on the 20th floor The tango danced on the balcony 😮 made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 It's so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. 😈 It sounded so good 🥰 It's God who is my rose, which illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful.
The emotional portrayal is very delicate, and the two little bitter gourds each have their own reasons. I think this should be the reason why Xiao Juan needs to leave. Some of the characters in the big world portrayed in the early stage were selfish, but I thought they were gone in the later stage. However, it would be better to embarrass your own son and powerful niece from the villain's point of view than to embarrass a little crane who has not grown up and whose parents have died... Human selfishness is very vivid at this moment. I would like to praise the author here. I think the plot you wrote is very coherent and every chapter is very attractive. I look forward to the update every day. Keep up the good work.
Although I was tortured in the early stage and my liver hurt, the growth in the later period will make people feel that it is precious. Compared with other people, the road to tiredness is always full of twists and turns, but because of its unique experience, it has built up the pride of starting alone in the cold.
👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻Good ok, I think I'm okay, I tied it in one day🤔, I've read this book many times, but I'm just starting to follow it now, oh, it's a good thing I read it, otherwise I would have missed such a masterpiece😍, why haven't I read it so many times? Well, I'm not very good at Yin-Yang and Ancient Dan in the introduction😱 Mainly because I ran out of books and read more than 20 chapters, so I silently quit after more than 20 chapters😭 Who knows this kind of pain, but after the tie-up, I only hate myself for not reading it earlier😡 But it doesn't matter, isn't it still interesting? 🥳Finally, I have to say it's so beautiful👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻Yang Persimmon only has 5 stars, I want to give the author a big thumbs up ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐…(os I seem to be talking too much nonsense and it's useless😭It's actually just that I was a little excited after tying the tie, okay, sorry for wasting you another 5 seconds, sorry(๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ))