My Martial Soul in Douluo Can Evolve

The overall story is okay, but there is one section that is very obvious and feels like AI. During the battle with the Mo team, the description of each team member is too repetitive. For example, the attack type will repeat the sense of power, and the control type will write about coldness. Each team member will be described emphatically in the previous chapter, and then similar words will be repeated in the next chapter, making the reader (for me) feel uncomfortable and cumbersome. There are also two teachers whose expressions are surprising, a bit rough, and a bit heavy on AI. Regarding Bai Qingqing's arrangement after the battle with Mo Tuan, they always repeat in their words, "No,, no,, yes,,,". This AI style is more prominent and obvious words. AI comics are quite popular now, which is a bit unfriendly to some people who are loyal to the novel. Generally speaking, I still hope to further revise this part of the battle section to reduce excessive descriptions of prosperity and reduce the reading burden. Repeated words and phrases will cause reading fatigue for readers. Hope to keep up the good work In addition, the word rhythm is used too often. It is said that the protagonist's auxiliary ability is the team's rhythm, and the control position is the key to the team's rhythm. . At the same time, in the narrative process, the appearance of four-character words is a bit complicated. I hope to improve and keep up the good work.

Come on, the author must keep writing well. This looks really good. In terms of writing style, this Douluo fanfic is already much better than other fanfics. It doesn't look so boring, and it doesn't look like the protagonists in other fanfics, who are victorious in every battle right from the beginning. Being able to become a Titled Douluo from birth, this book is very good. The protagonist and the team have gone through experience, and the author's writing style has given some color to the supporting characters. Overall, it is very good, but the data is a bit appalling. I hope the author can persevere and he will definitely survive.

The writing is pretty good, but I feel like less people read it.

It's very interesting, I hope I won't stop writing. Very well written. That's why soul power is written as spiritual power.

This novel is very interesting and highly recommended [Like]

I haven't seen it yet, is it two men or one man and one woman?