"Be my disciple, you are a separated martial soul like me..."
"I'm sorry, Master, I have my own plan." Lin Chen couldn't help interrupting Yu Xiaogang, "If there's nothing else, I'll leave."
After saying that, Lin Chen turned around and walked out of the house.
When Tang San next to him saw this scene, he suddenly thought, "Fortunately you didn't agree."
But when I saw Lin Chen's actions, I felt that Lin Chen was ungrateful and thought angrily,
"You have a way to die."
Reader comments
The overall story is okay, but there is one section that is very obvious and feels like AI. During the battle with the Mo team, the description of each team member is too repetitive. For example, the attack type will repeat the sense of power, and the control type will write about coldness. Each team member will be described emphatically in the previous chapter, and then similar words will be repeated in the next chapter, making the reader (for me) feel uncomfortable and cumbersome.
There are also two teachers whose expressions are surprising, a bit rough, and a bit heavy on AI. Regarding Bai Qingqing's arrangement after the battle with Mo Tuan, they always repeat in their words, "No,, no,, yes,,,". This AI style is more prominent and obvious words. AI comics are quite popular now, which is a bit unfriendly to some people who are loyal to the novel.
Generally speaking, I still hope to further revise this part of the battle section to reduce excessive descriptions of prosperity and reduce the reading burden. Repeated words and phrases will cause reading fatigue for readers. Hope to keep up the good work
In addition, the word rhythm is used too often. It is said that the protagonist's auxiliary ability is the team's rhythm, and the control position is the key to the team's rhythm. . At the same time, in the narrative process, the appearance of four-character words is a bit complicated. I hope to improve and keep up the good work.
It's very interesting, I hope I won't stop writing. Very well written. That's why soul power is written as spiritual power.
This novel is very interesting and highly recommended [Like]
The writing is pretty good, but I feel like less people read it.
The overall story is okay, but there is one section that is very obvious and feels like AI. During the battle with the Mo team, the description of each team member is too repetitive. For example, the attack type will repeat the sense of power, and the control type will write about coldness. Each team member will be described emphatically in the previous chapter, and then similar words will be repeated in the next chapter, making the reader (for me) feel uncomfortable and cumbersome. There are also two teachers whose expressions are surprising, a bit rough, and a bit heavy on AI. Regarding Bai Qingqing's arrangement after the battle with Mo Tuan, they always repeat in their words, "No,, no,, yes,,,". This AI style is more prominent and obvious words. AI comics are quite popular now, which is a bit unfriendly to some people who are loyal to the novel. Generally speaking, I still hope to further revise this part of the battle section to reduce excessive descriptions of prosperity and reduce the reading burden. Repeated words and phrases will cause reading fatigue for readers. Hope to keep up the good work In addition, the word rhythm is used too often. It is said that the protagonist's auxiliary ability is the team's rhythm, and the control position is the key to the team's rhythm. . At the same time, in the narrative process, the appearance of four-character words is a bit complicated. I hope to improve and keep up the good work.
It's very interesting, I hope I won't stop writing. Very well written. That's why soul power is written as spiritual power.
This novel is very interesting and highly recommended [Like]
The writing is pretty good, but I feel like less people read it.