Arknights: From the Start, I Become a Warlord

I only found three problems after watching it for 3 minutes. The first is the setting of mutual combat. It said at the beginning that none of the brothers died, and then said that the brothers died. The second is that the human-machine feeling is too heavy, as if it was written by AI. The third is that I haven't seen it yet, so I will leave it blank for now 🤔

Very nice. The main reason is that the protagonist has a funny human-machine flavor and his catchphrase of "tactics +...". 😏

Yes, most of the stories are written by the author, which is very novel. I just don't know if it will follow the main plot later.

In the imitation AI writing competition, the author won first place. 😂 The plot setting process is more interesting, but this dialogue is really difficult to hold on to 😂

It's beautiful, the protagonist and author are both interesting

The plot is very interesting, but there is an inexplicable pause in the dialogue between the characters. It just feels like some dialogues are not foreshadowed in advance and are very abrupt. Some conversations didn't end well, and it felt like they had stopped.

It's quite interesting. The protagonist's mental state is very similar to how I felt when I heard I had to work overtime on Saturday 🙂

Later, if the protagonist, a battalion commander, takes more than 600 people out, and more than 100 people come back, won't they be elbowed by their superiors?

The subject matter is new, and the author is also new. If a new author dares to write fan fiction that does not follow the main plot, it deserves a five-star rating. Disadvantages 1. The characterization is still not full, and the dialogues are a bit sloppy and not vivid enough. The author can learn from high-scoring fans. 2 The emotional lines of the heroines Shuangxing, Alina, and Hongxue are advancing too fast. It doesn't matter what OOC is. Second creation must be created, but the important thing is to have a process. The author can improve the word count, and the readers can also eat sweets. It's okay to say that Hongxue can be a life-saving grace, so it's love at first sight. But for the infected people in the snowfield, especially Shuangxing, they accept it too quickly and express their feelings too quickly. It is recommended that the author add more emotional lines later. 3. When it comes to war, the author's writing style is humorous, but he focuses too much on the supporting characters. The core point of the counter-insurgency campaign is not based on the protagonist at all. The advantages are very simple, the plot is good, the development is fast, and there is Zhoupi's favorite emphasis on girls. I just like to watch the river of blood 😠

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