How My Big Talk Got Me Thrown into Re:Zero!

Since the author said it was his first time writing, he still needs to be encouraged. Being able to control the rhythm so appropriately is already very impressive for a newcomer (anyway, I can't control the rhythm, so I write at a very fast pace 🤦) Although the one-day copy of the Royal Capital is the simplest one, I still finished it out of a learning and observation mentality. I can only say that there are not many differences in this plot for the time being. Besides, this shower is not for ordinary people. Normal people who have read the script will choose the safest method, but he did not. At this point, the character motivation is a bit lacking, and it feels like adding drama just for the sake of drama. (One star less is a personal feeling and does not mean it is a quality problem) However, there are more things I can praise. My daily writing is very good, and my writing style is not a noob. It reads very smoothly at the moment, and there is no feeling of being stuck at all. But since you are all reading the fanfic, of course what you want to see is a plot that is different from the original work, and I am looking forward to the subsequent plot development.

I would like to call it the top REO fanfic!! The development of combat power is reasonable, the character design is not OOC, and it does not deviate from the underlying logic of REO 👍 The author's writing is very good, I really enjoyed reading the latest one in one go, please be sure to read more [Send my heart][Send my heart]

OK, I'm going to comment on the author after reading it. First of all, the author's plot rhythm, some foreshadowing, and the character's psychology, personality, and action description are very good. It can be seen that AI is used. As for the poisonous points mentioned in the book review, it is not poisonous at all. The protagonist and Natsuki Subaru wear the same clothes. You let the protagonist disguise himself as a prophet? The author originally wanted to write about the life of the protagonist and Natsuki Subaru in another world, rather than the prophet of another world who predicts everything. It may also be said that the protagonist is a slave, which made him laugh. I have read re0 and I don't think so. I won't talk about it. I read the two negative reviews in the book review and laughed. In short, the author please be sure to update more diligently. Colleagues who are looking for re0 fans, Ai Suba TV is serializing it again and it is edible😋

Meow meow, I feel okay Next is my feeling when reading 1. Natsuki Subaru's early plots heavily described him as ignorant, stupid, arrogant and rude, although we knew he had such a character before. But every time he describes it, he writes like this, and then combines it with the background of this other world, which not only makes people worry about him, but also hopes that he can grow up and understand the malice of this other world. 2. Before the main character plot begins, the scenes are similar to Subaru's. Later, after meeting Julius, the scenes gradually decrease. Subaru and Julius talked a lot, and he only said one or two sentences at the end. Well, I don't want my words to sound too harsh. 3. When trading with a mobile phone, it always feels like a cool text. For example, when I traveled to ancient times and brought modern things with me, others were surprised and I felt secretly happy. 4. There are also advantages. The character is not OOC and fits the character's personality. The plot is slow but exciting and has highlights

It's good-looking, with different perspectives of the protagonist and 486. I'm curious to whom the protagonist's ring will be given. Reinhardt is extremely powerful and it is not difficult to ask him to help, but his human nature lacks emotional intelligence and he often follows the program exactly like a personal computer. Julius, his fighting ability is okay, but he is easy to die. Many if lines are playing corpse characters.

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Five-star motivation. I like the rhythm of this book. I want to read the bond between double time travellers! That's it ､ゞヾ∧""'∧;, ヾω ﾐoミ ~ﾐ /ｿ,,,0; ,;;:､0ヾ

It's average for me. I've used AI but not much. I don't have the desire to read it. I can read it when I don't have a book to read. As for the poisonous point, it's a bit bland. I've read chapter 36 so far. If it's more fun, I should find a lot of people to hunt for intestines. And the protagonist also said before that Emilia's lost badge cannot be known to too many people. As a result, both Julius and Cursio know about it. Well, in fact, it is enough to just find the milk dragon, and there is also the [game mode is survival] that was mentioned at the beginning. I still can't see what it is for. And I read other RE fan fiction, usually after Subaru dies once, he wants to save Emilia, and then the protagonists argue at the beginning and run away together. In the end, the protagonist and Subaru go together. This novel is different. The protagonist advocates to save Emilia, but Subaru advises the protagonist not to go.

That's right, that's what I want to see. It doesn't take Subaru's body, nor does it take his place. Instead, as Subaru's brother, he knows his pain and accompanies him to move forward together. This is the brother plot I want to see.

Yes, I still like the character of Subaru. He values ​​​​love and justice. He reminds me of my innocent self when I was always pursuing a perfect ending. In my opinion, this kind person deserves a perfect ending.