Pirate: Nami, I Have to Control You!

It looks good. Focus on the world of pirates and don't write too much about the real world. Many books about this subject are addicted to the real world [crazy][crazy]. The writing of pirate world is very interesting. I hope the author can work hard [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] just don't interrupt the update [laughing][laughing]

The plot is very smooth. There are no tricks and no misfortunes. Pure comedy with an unparalleled lawn-mowing plot. I am looking forward to seeing Nami defeat the three seafood generals. Then mow the grass at the Battle of the Top. I hope the author doesn't let the protagonist know that this is not a game. I can't accept falling in love or the protagonist's mother's heart will not cut grass in the future.

This is what real players should do, stripping off clothes manually and randomly playing around with the whole thing. There is no small poisonous point of overindulging in the plot and committing the plot of helping others. It is purely about strength. People skip the plot and just want to have fun. The fun factor is full. The forty chapters of Seedlings are currently very enjoyable. I hope to keep writing at the same level. After a break of updating for a few days, finally a special pirate article is gone?

I give it 5 stars. It's a good pirate story. It's not good to take away Nami's power when you don't control her. At least leave the boost to Nami to protect herself. I can't even imagine that I will be able to reach the general level in the future. Nami becomes an ordinary person once the protagonist is offline.

The writing is very interesting. There is nothing toxic so far. I just hope that there won't be any plots in the future where the protagonist loses his horse and loses his position. The author has cut off the book. I had a bad feeling since the author made excuses to delay the update bit by bit. I didn't expect it to be true. It's a pity that the writing is quite good. In my heart, it is at least 8.5.

I have finished reading the latest chapter. The viewing experience is good. The writing is smooth and the logic is rigorous. At least the current content is like this. I can look forward to the future. The protagonist controls Nami as a player through a computer game, but does not know that the computer is actually a real pirate world, so he can write a new story and fill his regrets. The setting is very interesting. Let me talk about the shortcomings I feel. First of all, it is too big. It has only just started, and I have already fought with Garp back and forth. This is still a small problem. As a game, the purity is very complicated. It stitches all kinds of strange things, such as poke balls, Superman glasses, sure-hit guns, etc. One Piece does not have the look of One Piece. I prefer that skills and items are built in the world of One Piece, so don't mess in. As the background world of the game, the performance of One Piece World in this article can be said to be like a sewer. It has no sense of realism or grid, only a sense of virtuality, because the protagonist can stop, teleport, save and load files anytime and anywhere. He can still do many operations while stopping, go back in time and resurrect at will. It's indeed a game, and it's a relatively low-difficulty game. The whole world seems to be at your disposal. This caused me to only regard Nami and the others as a bunch of data when I was watching them, and I couldn't empathize with them. I would recommend making the world of Pirates a bit higher level, not so low-level, and closer to the kind of game system where Nami obtains data and digitizes herself. The essence of the world is still the world, rather than the world being digitized into a game.

It has a unique setting and the plot is pretty good. As long as the protagonist's character can't be removed in the later stage, I probably won't give it two stars. Just let him think it was a game.

This book is very good. It describes the characters of the players and the original characters. The game manufacturer is a foreshadower. I don't know how to deal with him at the moment. This is a fun article, so those who mind may read it by mistake, but if you want to try something new, it's not a bad idea.

It has everything it should have, the cool points are well managed without turning into poisonous points, the plot has a coherent rhythm and the characters are brought to life. For the protagonist, this is the virtual world, and for Nami, this is the real world. They can be separated, which is done very well. The aspect of becoming a naval hero is very novel, and players enjoy fighting. Nami becomes a captain in this story line, and I look forward to the follow-up. I looked at the comment section and everyone was afraid of accepting girls. I think the "game world" is the main line. There are more scenes in the story line process. Players mainly provide the fun of the fourth natural disaster.

Don't tell me, don't tell me, I unexpectedly wrote it well. Can there be more interaction between Nami and Karina in the middle [laughing]

It's okay, 6.7 Points, which is a bit low. Just don't write too much about reality. Focus on the game. In reality, the main character can't starve to death.

This book is still very good, especially after Diao Chan captured Dong Zhuo, Na Lu Bu and Sun Wukong in seventy-nine rounds, defeated Tathagata Buddha with the help of the Supreme Treasure, and then fell in love with the six-eared macaque. All in all, this is a book

Although the routine is not new, the subject matter is very new, and the plot is almost original. I just feel that it is a bit outrageous for the protagonist to keep asking Nami, whom he thinks, to call daddy. The other aspects are pretty good.

The rhythm and writing style are quite enjoyable. It looks interesting. It should be good to grasp the proportion of the player's chaos and the context of the original work, and keep it updated. Overall, it's okay. Take your time, but you must be quick [eating melon]

It suits my taste very well. Although it may be a bit early to give five stars before it is finished, it is indeed good-looking. I never thought that I would also read the book one day. Authors should be strictly controlled to write books. Do you have Nika to control authors to write books? [Laughing]

It's very to my liking. Novels with this theme always spend a lot of time describing reality, which is very off-putting. But this novel is different. It has updated more than 60 chapters, which are basically descriptions of game content. There are very few realistic descriptions. The pace is fast, the battles are not procrastinating, and the plot advances at a moderate speed. It is very suitable for the game settings. The writing is very comfortable, and it is so refreshing to read without procrastination.

If you score well, give yourself a five-star reward [blowing kiss]

It's a very interesting book, with a very novel angle. It's a pity that it's a eunuch.

I saw the latest one in one go. The angle is very novel and fun. Just look at the back.

God. The flavor of the Fourth Scourge is so strong and fun. It really makes use of game mechanics, and there doesn't seem to be much real-life plot so far, and there's no obvious bias towards the characters. Really skip the plot and become a real player. It's suspected that he is cooing, so he enters the observation period.

Update soon, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this!

Although this genre of manipulating characters to fight monsters is rampant, you can't say that this book is quite interesting.

Love this book! Come on, author! 5 Stars, must be 5 stars! This one looks good! Recommended by 20,000-hour bookworms!

Not bad, good, update quickly and keep this pace, it will definitely become popular

Xiancao, the subject matter is novel, the writing is good, and the plot is interesting, but why have I stopped updating it for two days [face covering]

It's pretty good, nothing too poisonous, it's just fun to fight. Okay, I didn't pay attention to the eunuch.

The setting is interesting. The plot development is also very good.

I have read a few control books, and this is the first one about controlling the world of pirates. The overall plot is quite entertaining, and the protagonist is not a crazy player who has no limits. The other minor shortcomings are not a big deal.

I've tasted enough One Piece fanfics, but this is the first time such a novel setting has been introduced [Like]

It's well written, but it's too little. I'll probably die if I keep it.