[Supernatural + Horror + Urban Legend]
In the Age of Dharma End, heaven and earth will be peaceful. Zombies disappear and ghosts never come out.
The Taoist priests have no place to use their talents, and the inheritance of talismans has been broken by 70%. There is still incense in Longhu Mountain, but no one has seen the Celestial Master come out of the mountain for thirty years.
Who still believes this these days?
Chen Qingxuanxin. Because he is the 65th generation Heavenly Master. The only person in the world who has inherited the complete lineage of the Heavenly Master.
Others rely on opening an altar to catch ghosts, but he raises his hand and casts a thunder talisman and it's done. When others were trying to deal with zombies, they would set up a formation to invite gods. He just put the corpse-suppressing charm on it, and the flying zombie couldn't move.
Evil spirits are rare in this world, and most of them are still sealed away by the ancients. Occasionally, one leaked out of the seal and got into his hands, just during a business trip.
But in the past six months, the seals have been loosened more and more frequently. Someone is deliberately awakening things that shouldn't be awakened.
But there is only one person, Chen Qingxuan.
There are fewer and fewer talismans in his hand, fewer and fewer people can help, but more and more things have to be faced——
There is no need for heavenly masters in the Dharma-ending era.
But Xie Sui didn't think so.
Reader comments
It's too bland, with no emotion, and the ghosts in it don't feel like they're doing much, and they can't be brought into the perspective of the protagonist. Then there are too many strange descriptions, which makes it tiring to read and makes people uninterested.
Although the article was embellished with AI, I didn't dislike it at all. I glanced at it briefly, at least it was better than the straight-forward version.
Each of your paragraphs is too long, and you divide it into paragraphs after a period. It is comfortable to read it this way. Do you feel tired when you read it like this? Especially on mobile phones, it is all clumps. I use a tablet and it is fine.
There is also character dialogue, which is also very long at the end. It can be divided into two or three sentences. In the process of dividing the words, some actions, expressions, etc. Can be added. But don't use AI to add them randomly. Fix them yourself, otherwise it will be very ugly.
It's too bland, with no emotion, and the ghosts in it don't feel like they're doing much, and they can't be brought into the perspective of the protagonist. Then there are too many strange descriptions, which makes it tiring to read and makes people uninterested. Although the article was embellished with AI, I didn't dislike it at all. I glanced at it briefly, at least it was better than the straight-forward version. Each of your paragraphs is too long, and you divide it into paragraphs after a period. It is comfortable to read it this way. Do you feel tired when you read it like this? Especially on mobile phones, it is all clumps. I use a tablet and it is fine. There is also character dialogue, which is also very long at the end. It can be divided into two or three sentences. In the process of dividing the words, some actions, expressions, etc. Can be added. But don't use AI to add them randomly. Fix them yourself, otherwise it will be very ugly.