Miss Savior Won't Get Caught

It can be seen from the beginning of the novel that the world view is relatively new. It is not a Western fantasy novel such as Warrior Demon King. It is similar to the fate of the Iron Breaker. There are gods and different branches of fate. The protagonist's fate and skill settings are very interesting. But there are too many emotions mixed up in the early and middle stages. Originally, it gave people the feeling of drinking a latte, without the bitterness of black coffee and the sweetness of industrial saccharin. Later, after the "mistake" made more than ten years ago, when the protagonist went to the library, the characters' emotions were very inexplicable. The plot seemed abrupt and changed the flavor. There were too many plots between the characters and the protagonist, which was too delayed. I feel that this is the main reason for affecting the audience. If I want to continue writing, this novel has a lot of space for world view. I feel that it is okay to write 1 million words. This kind of style can be a bit slow and hot. Too many emotional lines will affect the plot of the article. It is obvious that the emotional lines in the front are moderate (after all, it is a novel with multiple heroines and it is not cp-free). There is too much sugar in the early and middle stages. It is easy to get bored. It neither attracts people who like to read pure posts nor retains people who watch the plot. If you want to come up with a wonderful plot quickly, it takes time. It is good to take two or three days to rest and find inspiration. It is not recommended to water the plot just for the sake of daily updates. Adding too much unnecessary sugar will actually affect the popularity of the book. In addition, I hope the author will write better and better The above is my personal opinion The author is very obedient and will make corrections. I hope his writing will get better and better.

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It's not like a novel that Tomato can write, it feels like the reincarnation of an old thing, and there are currently no problems.

The world view of the story is relatively grand, but it doesn't make people feel too dazzled. The protagonist's character is very likable, and the relationships with several other female protagonists are also very delicately portrayed, making it interesting to read on. Very fragrant rice.

The world view is complete, the characters are well created, and the plot is super delicious and delicious, but when I looked at it, I felt like I couldn't hold my phone (it's Gravity Girl Mouth!), I must see more posts

It's a pretty good book with detailed text and a coherent plot. Please work hard to finish it.

The writing is very good, the world view is very novel, and the emotions are also very delicate. I am looking forward to the plot of leaving the dungeon later 😄

Nice story, I hope it can be better presented

What? You want to know if this book is good or not? There's really nothing I can do about you, so sit tight. Here you can see the heroine with a succubus physique, eccentric spirit, and good-natured personality, getting involved in all the flowers and leaves in the huge world, and moving around under the gravity web of three spiders. All in all, it's pretty good to watch, and the twisted plot is really enjoyable 😳😳

So when will we fast forward to QQ space?