The Outcast: I Awakened the Yin-Yang Hand, Call Me Little Knight

This book is not bad. The main character is a little knight, and the alien gods over there can also enter the world of one person. There should be related plots later. Although the part about Chen Duo is the author's magical modification, I think the modification is okay and there is no big sense of violation. The only thing that is a little unclear at the moment is whether the author plans to write a story with multiple female protagonists or a pure brother-sister single female protagonist. If there is a single female protagonist, don't always make love scenes with other female characters, such as Lu Linglong and Chen Duo who have already appeared. It would be best to write less or shenyin. It wouldn't matter if there were multiple female protagonists. Although the timeline has been written to the main story, the protagonist has planned it in advance. It is best to cut off Xia He's beard and create a Yang Wu Lei Ling Jade.

My personal evaluation is very good. This book has actually exceeded my expectations. From the moment I saw Hollow Knight, I knew that this book might be a breakthrough. If it is well written, it can beat other writers' paths. Now it is almost impossible to find a meal replacement. Currently, I see that there is no chapter 49. The funny jokes that make me feel poisonous are also quite appropriate. I feel that the characters are also vivid, but not that vivid. The current characters are still a bit on paper and not three-dimensional enough. I have not seen much of one person. Whether it is an original character or a character in the show, for me, the difference is still relatively big, after all. There is no introduction to the characters. It's a bit troublesome for someone like me who doesn't read it to make up for it. I have to write about the past in detail so that the characters are more three-dimensional and complete. Even if you haven't read Under One Person, you can watch it directly and jump out of the original circle. The writing itself is not bad. You are one of the best authors among all the books I have read this year. I rarely pay attention to the author. You are one of them.

Looks good, this is a normal brother-sister relationship [laughs evilly] I can't stand it anymore, my sister appears less and less often

It's nice to watch, but the main character isn't pure enough.

Finally saw a normal brother-sister relationship 😏

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Is the protagonist's name intentional or accidental? I feel like the author was inspired to write this book by playing Hollow Knight on a mysterious night. I suddenly wanted to take off, and after searching for a long time, I had to click on the sky of fate and shoot it out in two and a half seconds. After that, my inspiration came out, and I came up with this book [laughing]

Not bad, not bad, but don't ruin the book. The whole text is written about my love. Can the author reply to what I should do? I can't be the heroine!

It's pretty cool, the relationship between brother and sister is harmonious. It feels more everyday.