Douluo: I Have a Sword That Can Open the Gate of Heaven

The writing style is quite good. Among the Douluo novels I have read, it is considered top-notch. The author just needs to keep updating it. I just don't know who the heroine's CP is, even a hundred queens. The update speed of Haki's work is really nothing to say, it is trustworthy [laughing] But now that I have caught up with the latest chapter, I feel that the protagonist's personality is a bit different, and I am a bit uncomfortable reading the time-travel chapter. It's like a mysterious and aloof young lady who suddenly turned into a charming wingman (puppy). Although it can be felt from some of the protagonist's sentences in the previous article that the protagonist's character is not cold, it is still a bit abrupt and there is no transitional plot... Then the timeline is a bit messy, which I won't say much about. In short, it is still very good. I hope Hajisaku can pay attention to this point. Come on, the writing is very beautiful! [Ask for more updates][The masterpiece of bird food][Ask for more updates]

There are advantages and disadvantages. From what I have read, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. The advantage is that the character creation is not bad, and the heroine is not so obsessed with Shrek. The heroine must be intelligent, and she is also quite happy. She created her own soul skills at the age of 13. This issue is really amazing. As for the shortcomings, I have only watched the anime, so I don't know if the original work is like what he wrote. The story line and timeline written by the author are different from that of the anime. There are ghosts and ghosts, and sometimes it is a normal story line, and then it is not right. I feel like I am enjoying writing and writing, but I forget about it. , And it seems to be a new article that draws on the setting and world view of Douluo Continent, and the official matching in the original article is basically removed. And although the writing style is better than other works in the circle, it is relatively immature compared to other GL works. We will see if the writing style will be strengthened in the future. For now, it is still good. The writing is okay, but Douluo Dalu fan fiction is too easy to break, so I hope the author can stick to it. I also have a problem, that is, the author did not clearly state in the introduction whether it is a post-swing or a buying stock article. It's hard to tell in the article. It feels like there's an ambiguous link with everyone. The heroine herself is not cold-hearted, she is the kind of heroine who complains about being humane, and there are provocative plots in the article. I think it's quite novel. It breaks out of a common problem in Douluo Continent fan fiction, which is either cold-hearted or clingy. The above are my thoughts on this article. Everything depends on the growth and writing skills of the later author. These are just personal thoughts. Everyone has their own thoughts.

I was so scared that I cried after reading the first few chapters. Why did the plot change to a foreign country and there was no subject? It was really strange when I saw it. But I like the introduction. The text may be the work of foreign persimmons. Currently, I am skipping reading because of the previous reasons (I am struggling to understand) Come on, teacher! ˶ᵒ ᵕ ˂˶

The author must not stop updating [laughs]

It's very interesting. Please give me more encouragement from the author.

Author, is this one to many? [Chigua] I read the article now and it's quite good.

Not bad, lots of updates

I was scared to tears by the author's update speed [laughs]

Really good, very beautiful

Is this supposed to be a transformation?

It's very beautiful, I like it very much [Bird Food Masterpiece]

Come on, boss, strive for 100,000 updates per day [crying]

Damn, it's so delicious that you want the boss to write a hundred chapters a day [crying]

Bibi Dong, will she still be QF by Qian Xunji? [Angry][Angry]

Author Baobao is awesome