Under One Person: Dressed as the King's Long-Lost Sister

The overall reading rhythm is well controlled, and the plot advances neatly without a lot of procrastination and watery foreshadowing. For me personally, after reading the Luotian Dajiao chapter, it is easy to stop watching it, but this one firmly grabbed my attention and I read the whole thing. The emotional drama is extremely delicately written, and the characters' psychology and interactions are in line with the logic of the original work. The characters are very vivid and three-dimensional, and there is no serious OOC. The character's character background and behavioral logic are consistent with the original work. You can see the new ideas created by fans without feeling disconnected and inconsistent. Totally shocking and delicious [full][please update]

Let's not talk about anything else, but this pure Otome-oriented work deserves five stars! ! ! Then let's talk about the plot. I personally feel that it developed very quickly in the early stage, but later on when I entered the plot of the older generation, I felt that the writing was better and very delicate.

The setting is very interesting, and I personally think the image of the child is super cute and adorable! Is that why you and Wang are also siblings? It's really a pity that she can't be included in the harem~ But Dumei is really good! The author's writing style is also very good! The writing is really great, and the rice is really delicious!

This is the most delicious meal I've ever eaten on a tomato. Thank you boss [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

The viewing experience is very good from the perspective of an otome under one person. The plot is smooth and it goes by quite quickly. The king is also very delicious. This otome is so cool [Adoration] Time travel. Now that I have passed through Biyou Village, I have reached the Tangmen chapter. It tastes really delicious. I really hope the author will make more updates. There are so few chapters at the moment. It's not enough to eat. ´ᯅ` Personally, I really think it's good to watch, good to watch, good to watch, good to watch, wow, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, I will become addicted after watching it. Generally, I feel bored after watching it, which is generally not to my liking. This one is really not good. The plot goes by quickly, and it is also really short, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

Oh my god, this book is so beautiful. It's like a 360-degree Thomas kneeling down to propose marriage. I hope the teacher can include me in the harem. I don't know why the traffic is not very good. It's really a treasure novel. Read this. Books, I haven't slept or eaten, my heart disease has healed, and my family of origin is no longer in pain. I just want to eat the food cooked by the teacher every day lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen] [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

If the author sees this book review, I really hope to read it. This is my first time to write a long review. I think I am a very impatient person. I often have to skip many chapters in a book. This is my second book review. I dare say this is my first time to read a book twice. In my way of reading books There will also be some very good writing, but maybe because I am still young, I cannot appreciate the deeper emotions behind these words. However, I can understand many of the emotions in this book. Every relationship in it, I would feel confused at first, but I can feel and understand it later. I admit that I like idiots very much. I read this book with a stupid attitude at first. Later I found out that this book is actually very meaningful. It is more meaningful than the idiotic heartthrobs I have seen in the past. In fact, as I write this, I don't know what I should say to the author. I just want to say: Author, please write a side story about Zhang Chulan In reality, I may be a scheming person. Like Zhang Chulan, I am very thoughtful, so in the whole book, the person I can most emotionally resonate with is Zhang Chulan, so please give us a sequel.

Looks good! The plot is very coherent and the characterization is also very good. The growth of "my" and the emotional line of the characters towards "me" are very natural. The plot does not drag out and the pace is very comfortable and enjoyable to watch! This is a rare and good-looking otome novel! Congratulations to the author!

I've played it for the third time, it's a very delicious Otodai fanfic😋The characters are also very interesting, and it's relatively restored. Although it has a name, it feels very immersive. The author's setting is very clever, and the name and life experience are equivalent to the identity cards that readers draw when entering this world. Boss, please write more. Every time I open it 🍅, I re-read the previous article. It's so delicious www🥺

I think the plot of this book is okay. The shortcoming is that the writing is poor. Well, maybe the plot is too fast and lacks some literary qualities. However, I think that as a relatively rare otome novel written by Tomato, I still have to support it no matter what. I also believe that the author will write better and better [Code]

It's good to watch, and it's very comfortable to be involved in it. The parts involving cars are very comfortable to pass through in one stroke. The plot is not delayed and most of the characters are taken care of. The writing has a sense of the original. The only flaw is that the ending is too hasty and too short to watch. Many emotional lines stay in the middle and do not move forward. I feel empty after reading it, but overall it is not bad.

Very nice! The sense of immersion is also very strong. Our players will run away in the next second, okay? Highly recommended, support everyone to watch it! ! !

I have always felt that the original work of one person is very self-consistent. It is difficult to strike a balance between the original work and originality in long-form fan fiction. Therefore, there are very few one-person fan fiction. This article is very well written. It can be seen that the author has a lot of his own thinking and tries his best to give everyone a good ending without changing the flavor of the original work. Another perfect point is pure substitution 😊 I am really lucky to see such a beautiful article [shy]

Woohoo, I'm really sad that you're finished. I can't watch anything since I started reading too many fanfictions. You saved my barren reading life. I love you, but you ended my reading life. I hate you! I actually really like your style... It's not that you said it's not a Mary Sue or an upgrade. In fact, it has a sense of reality. If I were to represent others, I couldn't be loved by everyone and I couldn't be a top martial artist. I came late. I just waited. The update will be finished in a day or two. I really like it. I really want to greedily ask you to write another book. But I love you and I really can't forcefully ask you. I really like your book. I will definitely read the new book when it comes out. Giving a thanks to my dears._(:з∠)_

This book is really good. The plot is smooth and the writing is beautiful. It's just that the comment section is a bit tight. I actually want to ask if it's necessary to say main controller or holster in otome stories? Can't we say heroine? In order to prevent you from thinking that I am stupid, I asked Douyin or Doubao again, and they said that it is not necessary to say it is the main controller or the holster. I thought that the heroine has been using this in our online stories for so many years. The main controller and holster did not appear so early as the heroine in the online text. Plus, isn't "I" the heroine in this text? I saw a lot of five-star reviews in the comment area for this novel. One of the reviews also gave five stars but it was about the heroine and she seemed to be educated? . I feel like I can give five stars because of the heroine's recognition that this novel is very well written. After all, this software is free, so we can just be happy to see it. If I give it five stars from this aspect, it proves that the author's ability is also very good. Furthermore, the genres in this software are very complex, and some readers have never seen this before. So it is about the female protagonist, and the author has already written it. Can't they watch it? So what is the purpose of this software? Their ratings are very high, four or five stars, and because the readers of this novel are a little small, but there are quite a lot of people reading it. If we continue to add their ratings, this novel can be seen by more people. The purpose is to make this novel seen by more people. I would like to suggest that the author should try his best to minimize the consequences because the author's language may drive the entire reader. It is just a suggestion. I just feel that our comments can be gentler, and the atmosphere on the Internet does not need to be in the comment area. Check out Tuyile for free novels. You can do this in the battlefield of Circle B, but it's not necessary in the comment area of ​​novels.

It's extremely beautiful, very beautiful, and it fits the original characters very well. It feels like reading a comic. I loved the days in Tangmen the most, and I had no resistance at all to the stories of the older generation. I have to say that Yang Lie is still too good. Can I wear it again? [Sending Hearts] Actually, I don't know who will be on the table, but I kind of hope to see Koukouliang, Zhizhiwei, Wugengen. I don't know if there will be a chance, but I feel that I have a greater chance of seeing it. I wanted to watch a side story, but the space-time gate option didn't include the old one.

It's a delicious fanfic. The heroine is very charming. Because it's a cool novel, there are no flaws in the whole process. It's just fun all the time and it's not too OOC. In fact, I think it's very good. I really like watching the interaction between the heroine and Sister Bao'er. It's so cute. These two cute creatures just make me happy.

The writing style is unique and very interesting. I just think it's a bit too short, and there are still a lot of places that could be filled with close-ups, which is a pity... Author, I will keep waiting for the allin extra! Please come on...😭😭🥹🥹 The description of family love is very vivid and gentle... I was very heartbroken while reading, and my eyes kept curling up... If you don't mind the ending being a bit rushed, I highly recommend this book. This book is not entirely about love, there are many important things in life! Finally, I wish the author to be happy every day and make big money as soon as possible!

It's super beautiful [laughs] and the writing is smooth and neat. The more I read, the more I read it, and I couldn't stop. The characters are vivid and vivid, and the image supplements of the characters that were not well described in the original work are not obtrusive at all, and it is a strong benefit! ! !

The setting is so novel. I really like it. It's probably because Otomomu is awesome. All the characters are in it! !

Like it! [Blow a kiss] The teacher's writing style is super natural and flowing, the dialogue between the characters is not OOC and there is a little humor from time to time, I like it!

Very good, the plot is not awkward either

After the chase on the plane, why are you so good at writing! The writing is very smooth and the plot is very interesting. I will follow up for more...

Please, can you all read this book?

Really good-looking! O(≧v≦)o is just a bit too little and not enough to watch.

This book is quite smooth to read, and the more you read, the more you read. The overall experience is very good.

The sense of immersion is very strong√ Otome is awesome○○ (＞＜)○○

A masterpiece, very delicious

I also found a good fanfic about Under One Person. I just felt that it was too short, and it didn't finish the whole story, and the emotional line was all over the place, but it was still very delicious.

He is already a very good author in the Under One Person fanfic. I hope to produce more delicious otome stories in the future [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]