Magical Girl Agent on Duty

Name: Magical Girl Agent on Duty
Author: Akiyama Mano

魔法少女探员执勤中

by Akiyama Mano (秋山真乃)

Status: Ongoing
Length: 222k Words
Genre: Urban
Subgenre: Urban High Martial Arts
Audience: Male
Updated: 17h ago
Source: Fanqie

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56Chapters

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Synopsis

Xia Ke, an ordinary boy who had just finished his college entrance examination, accidentally awakened his extraordinary power when he was attacked by a monster late at night. When the light dissipated, the man who was once called a straight man turned into a magical girl with pink hair and wearing black knee-high socks with an absolute realm. And this was just the beginning. A sunny, cheerful and outgoing sports girl always wants to be alone with herself, and her hands are not honest; Naturally, the senior sister, who looked terribly sleepy all day long, felt like her good feelings level was full when she came up; The white-haired and beautiful school girl is stubborn as hell, and she is also a waste of fuel; This is only part of it, why are the magical girls belonging to the Special Investigation Bureau not looking normal! For some reason, the magical girls around him always have a different attitude towards him. Faced with this group of crazy companions who regard him as a "weak and cute newcomer", Xia Ke is frightened every day: "Changing clothes together? No, no, no, this is absolutely not possible!" "Taking a shower together? The problem is bigger, okay!" "And, wait, why are the monsters we face getting more and more outrageous? The promised magical girl is only responsible for being cute?!" This is a story about love and bond, as well as the daily youthful story of a straight magical girl fighting against weirdness and getting along with different magical girls, trying to cover her vest, and saving the world with her teammates. (Real or false?)

Reader comments

Worth reading is the expansion of magical girl novels. There is nothing "not but" and a lot of parallelism to fill the paragraphs. However, there are still a lot of cumbersome adjectives and repeated rhetorical techniques. If you can remove those redundant modifying adjectives later, you can read it. Sometimes you don't need gorgeous words to tell the story. Simple straightforward narration and modification can better explain the characters and environment. Forget it, it's still a bit of a step-by-step approach unique to humans and machines, one action after another. I suggest you practice more intensively. There's nothing wrong with it anymore, just repeat the wording and practice it.
7 likes26d ago
You must write it down!
2 likes5d ago
There are no more humans...
2d ago
The combat aspect is pretty good, but I feel like it lacks some routine or transitions. Is there no follow-up to the club's affairs?
12d ago

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