After transmigrating into the world of Jujutsu Kaisen, Lu Cheng wakes up with his mind still full of the comments from last night’s online argument.
Starting with the Ten Shadows Technique isn’t bad. He can summon the Divine Dogs, and his cursed energy flows smoothly. It all feels innate. He barely has time to celebrate before something he never summoned rises from his shadow: Mahoraga. The ultimate weapon that no Ten Shadows Technique user throughout history has ever managed to tame. A hulking, over-six-foot monster that can reshape the terrain with a single punch.
But the one before him doesn’t even reach his chest.
Bare feet on the concrete, silver-white hair spilling in disarray over her robe, wings and cloth bands covering her eyes, and an eight-bead golden Dharma wheel gleaming in the dim factory. She stands facing him without moving, so quiet the air itself seems to grow thin.
“This is wrong. It’s definitely wrong. I didn’t chant Furube Yurayura. I didn’t chant anything! I haven’t even finished the tutorial, so why did I get sent straight to the final boss?”
She says nothing.
“Can you understand me? If you can, take one step forward.”
She takes one step forward.
“Do you like these? Strawberry daifuku.”
“...Sweet.”
“...I like them.”
The development of the plot is pretty good, and the description of getting along with Luo is okay, but there are serious typos and omissions, and there are also problems with the use of punctuation marks and sentence structures. There will be several periods in a paragraph and they are used in wrong places. In some places, the sentences are also divided incorrectly. If you can take some time to refine the reading experience, it will be better. Come on 👍
I don't know how to put it, but it smells like AI
The angle is quite interesting, remember to use high voltage electricity next time
The writing is quite good, but the protagonist's domain has been expanded and the spell power has been improved. It is really not possible to exchange left and right brains with Shi'er to brush up the physique. As long as Shi'er's physique is crushed, at least it will not be so fragile when fighting. At least the five-year-old skill is not as powerful as the full power after it is just summoned. Gojo Satoru is stronger than the pure constitution of Tian and Curse Binding. What's wrong with the villain Konsuo? Eat whatever you eat to make up for it. Infinite Warlock?
It's really interesting. I'll probably never forget you in my lifetime.
It's super nice, but the author is very slow to update.
It looks great, keep up the good work, author! 😋😋😋
It's rare, I hope I can write it down
Isn't it just what if Moxuluo adapts to? Σ( ° △ °|||)
The characters' emotions are detailed and their small movements reflect the emotions at that time.