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Transition slowly in the early stage, and it will get better and better in the future.
When he woke up, Lin Ze traveled into the magical world of 1981, picked up the Auror badge, and faced Voldemort's craziest years.
Colleagues were busy surrendering, and the boss was worried. Only Lin Ze laughed out loud.
Because only he knows that the Dark Lord will die in one month, not to mention that he also has a golden finger that can keep getting stronger as long as he fights.
So, while gaining experience, he quietly locked everyone's dirty information into a drawer.
A month later, Voldemort fell. He came with a list of Death Eaters, only to find that someone had placed an envelope containing gold Galleons on his desk...
Lin Ze smiled: Hey, I didn't expect Westerners to do this, but... The game has just begun...
Reader comments
It's quite good-looking. On the Tomato platform, even at the starting point, it can be said to be a high-level HP fanfic.
The best part is that the novel begins with being an Auror directly outside of Hogwarts, and doesn't fall into the trap of most HP fanfics following the original plot around the trio. It is quite clever to move around the main plot and have more room for development.
The protagonist is considered to be a very mature Auror, not a naive one, he is very resourceful and capable.
I hope that the subsequent plots will maintain the current level.
Grindelwald's son appears, does the author want to create a new branch? It feels less interesting. Also, starting from about Chapter 80, the character dialogue becomes a bit inconsistent. It is not the wording used in foreign language dialogue, but completely the Chinese way of speaking.
Apart from this, everything else is fine and quite exciting.
As a reader who has followed the book from the first chapter to the present, I must admit that the reading experience this book brought to me is quite unique.
In the highly homogenized HP fan fiction, the author moved the main stage of the story from Hogwarts to the Ministry of Magic, changed the protagonist from a student to an Auror, and changed the core conflict from "fighting the Dark Lord" to "surviving in the cracks of power."
The Lin Ze described by the author is a very recognizable image. He is not the kind of savior who cares about the world, nor is he the kind of avenger who suffers from great hatred, nor is he the kind of morally obsessive person who spends all his time worrying about "should I change history?" He is a smart man who, after traveling to a dangerous world, relies on his foresight to accumulate chips to survive.
I look forward to getting more and more exciting in the future.
Undoubtedly a great book. The writing is very clear. It is not purely a novel, and it does not rely entirely on the main plot. The plot is smooth and the connection is natural.
The protagonist wants to use tricks to gain a foothold in the magical world. He is not very strong in the early stage, and he doesn't know most of the original characters. Why should they help you?
That "Golden Finger" can be overcome with talent. The more you fight, the stronger it will become. So it's not a drawback.
Needless to say, there is a battle of wits in the early stage. If you watch the Harry Potter movies and the original text, you will know that the battle of wits is not very deep, and is mostly foreshadowing and hidden clues. Therefore, the battle of wits in the early stage can only be regarded as a little shortcoming.
Personally, I don't like time travel. I prefer native characters or characters from the original place of birth, so this is a disadvantage for me.
Moreover, other characters in the book also help the protagonist just right. There is no illogical logic in "helping" and there is no "forcible loss of respect", which is very good.
Soul travel, and he has a girlfriend, this is a poisonous point
It's okay, it just feels like it overwhelms the protagonist's combat power, and the part describing the battle feels like the 55 opening of the American team (the description is a bit vague, and overall I feel that the protagonist is a bit aggrieved. I'm in charge of my feelings. The more I fight, the braver I am, I still need 55 opening). The daily life and themes are good.
There are too few elements about magic. I hope the author can add more later.
Okay, this is the real magical society
Very few people read it. It's really good.
It's very wonderful, I finally got a copy of [adoration][adoration][adoration]
Very rare subject matter and direction, well written
Good-looking, novel subject matter [Blowing Kiss]
Yes, it gets more and more exciting later on.
It seems to have great potential at the moment
A very nice book, with the background of Harry's story, a separate story line, and the lightness of officialdom's machinations. Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking
It's good to watch, finally something different to watch.
It's a very good book, but the author is a little slow in updating it.
It's very interesting, the story progresses very well, and there are no embarrassing plots so far.
Beautiful, very beautiful
Hahahahahaha
Quite a novel angle.
Beautiful, beyond my expectations,
Can you write another one?
I can only say it's okay
Not bad, the subject matter is novel and the writing is also very good.
This book is much better than the last one
It's good-looking, completely different from other fans, Yeah[lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]
The author should update soon. The writing is really good. I think it deserves a 9.5 Rating.
Very good subject matter, but too few
This hp fanfic is different, very new and good-looking, update soon
It's quite good-looking. On the Tomato platform, even at the starting point, it can be said to be a high-level HP fanfic. The best part is that the novel begins with being an Auror directly outside of Hogwarts, and doesn't fall into the trap of most HP fanfics following the original plot around the trio. It is quite clever to move around the main plot and have more room for development. The protagonist is considered to be a very mature Auror, not a naive one, he is very resourceful and capable. I hope that the subsequent plots will maintain the current level. Grindelwald's son appears, does the author want to create a new branch? It feels less interesting. Also, starting from about Chapter 80, the character dialogue becomes a bit inconsistent. It is not the wording used in foreign language dialogue, but completely the Chinese way of speaking. Apart from this, everything else is fine and quite exciting.
As a reader who has followed the book from the first chapter to the present, I must admit that the reading experience this book brought to me is quite unique. In the highly homogenized HP fan fiction, the author moved the main stage of the story from Hogwarts to the Ministry of Magic, changed the protagonist from a student to an Auror, and changed the core conflict from "fighting the Dark Lord" to "surviving in the cracks of power." The Lin Ze described by the author is a very recognizable image. He is not the kind of savior who cares about the world, nor is he the kind of avenger who suffers from great hatred, nor is he the kind of morally obsessive person who spends all his time worrying about "should I change history?" He is a smart man who, after traveling to a dangerous world, relies on his foresight to accumulate chips to survive. I look forward to getting more and more exciting in the future.
Undoubtedly a great book. The writing is very clear. It is not purely a novel, and it does not rely entirely on the main plot. The plot is smooth and the connection is natural. The protagonist wants to use tricks to gain a foothold in the magical world. He is not very strong in the early stage, and he doesn't know most of the original characters. Why should they help you? That "Golden Finger" can be overcome with talent. The more you fight, the stronger it will become. So it's not a drawback. Needless to say, there is a battle of wits in the early stage. If you watch the Harry Potter movies and the original text, you will know that the battle of wits is not very deep, and is mostly foreshadowing and hidden clues. Therefore, the battle of wits in the early stage can only be regarded as a little shortcoming. Personally, I don't like time travel. I prefer native characters or characters from the original place of birth, so this is a disadvantage for me. Moreover, other characters in the book also help the protagonist just right. There is no illogical logic in "helping" and there is no "forcible loss of respect", which is very good.
Soul travel, and he has a girlfriend, this is a poisonous point
It's okay, it just feels like it overwhelms the protagonist's combat power, and the part describing the battle feels like the 55 opening of the American team (the description is a bit vague, and overall I feel that the protagonist is a bit aggrieved. I'm in charge of my feelings. The more I fight, the braver I am, I still need 55 opening). The daily life and themes are good.
There are too few elements about magic. I hope the author can add more later.
Okay, this is the real magical society
Very few people read it. It's really good.
It's very wonderful, I finally got a copy of [adoration][adoration][adoration]
Very rare subject matter and direction, well written
Good-looking, novel subject matter [Blowing Kiss] Yes, it gets more and more exciting later on.
It seems to have great potential at the moment
A very nice book, with the background of Harry's story, a separate story line, and the lightness of officialdom's machinations. Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking
It's good to watch, finally something different to watch.
It's a very good book, but the author is a little slow in updating it.
It's very interesting, the story progresses very well, and there are no embarrassing plots so far.
Beautiful, very beautiful
Hahahahahaha
Quite a novel angle.
Beautiful, beyond my expectations,
Can you write another one?
I can only say it's okay
Not bad, the subject matter is novel and the writing is also very good.
This book is much better than the last one
It's good-looking, completely different from other fans, Yeah[lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]
The author should update soon. The writing is really good. I think it deserves a 9.5 Rating.
Very good subject matter, but too few
This hp fanfic is different, very new and good-looking, update soon