[Demining: Writing a novel for the first time is very different from the original plot]
Didina traveled back to Moe Academy in the third season.
But why...
Will he be picked up by Flame King who is still a cute warrior when he appears? Suspected by everyone on Myriax to be a dark force?
And the cute warrior plans to escape from the underground sewer room?
The entanglement between the amnesiac Eric and Ukenana...
Dark File
…
Didina: Isn't this direction a bit wrong?
Holy Sword of Sorey: Oh! Right, right.
This time, the past of Black Magnet is revealed, the secret of Moon Star gradually emerges, the sinister Duchess fails to succeed, and the confession of Mysterious Star... Before everything happens, there may be a chance to be changed.
Just...
How did she come to this point in time?
The opera "Orfeo*" in the time tunnel... Is this a reminder?
Destino forjado
*Spanish: Destiny calculated by humans.
And I won't be Orpheus.
Reader comments
The teacher wrote it very well! ! ! The emotional line between Midi is very delicately written! There is absolutely no OOC in the characters, and the arrangements of the characters and plot are very delicate and reasonable. There is both magic and humor in the article, which makes people not want to stop reading! ! It has rekindled my yearning for magic and cuteness. I hope the teacher will continue to persevere and don't care about other people's comments. The teacher really writes very well! ! ! Keep up the good work, teacher [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
It's very good-looking, and very consistent with Moe Academy. It's not OOC at all. It advances the plot through comedy, magic, and crisis. Author, please don't take a break. Please update it quickly. I want to watch Midi Fa Tang.
After reading the chapters I finished, I found out that my wife, who I watch every day, no longer watches her every day. Ugh, it feels so uncomfortable, so uncomfortable (´o̴̶̷̤ㅂo̴̶̷̤`).
I also read that very long review. Emm, it's true that everyone has their own love. The only discrepancy is the timeline. I vaguely remember that Ken Douji was taken away and then Principal Oos came, and then came the magic competition. During this period, Ukenana was just a nightmare and was not caught, because she was still hiding it from Myriax at this stage. There was a period when Myriax was struggling with whether to give a gift for Best Friends Day, which proved that she had not been caught in any detention room. (Strictly speaking, when it comes to controlling other people, the Flame King has already returned from the game.)
Therefore, the big timeline can be regarded as a separate one. There is no need to say that it strictly follows the original timeline. Whether it is the game or the secret room, it is a good choice to heat up the relationship and wash away the suspicion on Didina. Except for this big event, it is a bit ridiculous to remove the suspicion on Didina in other S3 plot points, not to mention the emotional line (it is good not to be caught.)
In fact, I have always felt that S3 was a bit watery and all the events were very shabby. The major events were very good. The game about stealing the spirit stone on King Flame's birthday is considered a typical S3. And the mention of the puzzle only adds to the interest of the article. There is no need to be too rigorous for a sweet article. It is a bit similar to the small card scan answer of Charles IX when I was a child. The entertainment nature and the advancement of the plot are very good.
Finally, I mentioned Mya Star. Mya Star's growth has indeed changed a lot in the first three seasons, but the book has passed the level of suspicion. It is even said that this level has been passed. The obvious growth of Mya Star in s3 should be regarded as praising and slandering the dark undercover, but Dafa has not actually written it here. At this time, Mya Star's flamboyant and sinister attitude has also been written. All the experiences are not to say that they have dampened his spirit. The Mystery star in the first season was only 17 or 8 years old, but by the third and fourth seasons he was already 19. Not only is his age changing, but his mind is also changing. Behind the scenes, they are also learning and growing in places that we cannot see. Experience and learning have made him calmer rather than losing his original brazen and sinister youthful spirit. We should be happy for the character's growth, rather than liking a child who will never grow up.
Moreover, the mysterious character written in the book is also very good, his speaking style has not changed much, and his experience is more like an ordinary life without script manipulation, which is more smoky. The rhythm of the original book is very tense, with things piled up and things broken up. This book is more like the ordinary life they experienced in the middle.
As for respecting the original drama, for time-travel novels, what the people who time-travel inadvertently change will affect the future, so it is normal that many of the original dramas will not appear. And if you strictly follow the timeline, first of all, it will be boring, and you can completely guess the occurrence and outcome of the next event. Secondly, you will find that the emotional line of the Mystery Emperor will be very strange and dull.
Of course, these are all personal opinions. The draft in the early morning will be a little confusing. But if you look at it completely, all the developments in Dada are reasonable and not surprising. After getting along with each other, the secret love test is natural, and you can even see the shadow of the Star Palace in S4. Overall, it is really beautiful. Come on Dada (ᐡ⦁⩊⦁⸝⸝ᐡ)₊୭, I wish Dada a lot of inspiration and success in the present life.
Don't worry about those bad comments! ! If you don't read the negative comments about mine clearance, why bother? The mystery of this article is really good! ! After all, this mystery book is like chocolate. People feel comfortable after eating it, but dogs eat it... [Blows a kiss]
I've been reading it for a long time and I couldn't bear to finish it. Can you finish it in one go? (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ
The mystery written by the author in big letters gave me the feeling of a steady stream. Although the plot has been changed a lot, it does not affect the viewing. On the contrary, it makes me feel that the characters are more three-dimensional. When reading, I can unconsciously bring my own perspective into it, which makes me feel that I have experienced the same thing with them. The newly added game makes me feel even more that the two of them are destined to be together. Also, the point that Ukenana did not disappear was well written, and Eric finally didn't have to look at his gloves to see things and miss people. I am looking forward to the following plot more and more [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] As long as you write it in a big way, I will definitely follow it *▽*
The author writes very well! It feels like I'm watching the original drama, the characters and the plot are all very right😌! Also, the emotional connection between my little couple, Mi Ti, is so delicately written, I really like it! Come on, come on!
Surprisingly, I can still enjoy the wonderful writing of Mi Di. The teacher writes superbly! The plot is so interesting! ! !
The teacher's writing is so good. Calling for Midi and the teacher.
I think the author's writing is very thoughtful and exciting. The author will update it soon. I want to keep reading. Don't give up! ! ! Support the author. I hope the author can update 80,000 words a day and don't forget to take a rest.
There are few masters who write the mystery of Yamiami's fine chaff! Like! Love watching!
Fragrant rice! Midi is so annoying
If you like mysteries, you must read it. It's super exciting, and the emotional line is particularly interesting. The writing style is also good, and the writing is very delicate. I recommend it! Recommend! Recommend!
It's good to watch. When I watched Moe Gakuen, I particularly liked the two characters, Midi. The writing is also very good. I like it very much. I hope there will be more updates.
When to update
Like [please update] Come on, teacher
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Da Da is really well written. The plot is very interesting. The reason why Didina came here is that I didn't expect it. Moreover, there is foreshadowing in the first chapter. I really admire Da Da's writing style.
Super praise, praise, I like it, hehehe
The author is simply amazing. It's so beautiful. I look forward to the follow-up.
It brings back memories of the same year, so give me a five-star encouragement.
It's pretty good. The final foreshadowing of "And I won't be Orpheus" and the weight of my heart shocked me a bit. I deduct one point for be.
Extremely delicious, Mi Di cp
You are my audience!
It looks great. Everything is closed in a perfect loop. Our Emperor Dina is the bravest and very powerful. In the end, Mystery Emperor 99
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh well written! Long live Madi! Long live Didina! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]
Please give me more updates quickly! Don't force me to beg you for qwq, the teacher is so good at writing ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... So handsome I'm so handsome that every move is on my heart...
So pretty! ! ! It is a blessing to us to have an author with such good writing skills and rigorous logic enter the puzzle circle. Will the teacher update it again? ! ! !
The writing is so good and the character setting is also very good, MITI99
The teacher wrote it very well! ! ! The emotional line between Midi is very delicately written! There is absolutely no OOC in the characters, and the arrangements of the characters and plot are very delicate and reasonable. There is both magic and humor in the article, which makes people not want to stop reading! ! It has rekindled my yearning for magic and cuteness. I hope the teacher will continue to persevere and don't care about other people's comments. The teacher really writes very well! ! ! Keep up the good work, teacher [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
It's very good-looking, and very consistent with Moe Academy. It's not OOC at all. It advances the plot through comedy, magic, and crisis. Author, please don't take a break. Please update it quickly. I want to watch Midi Fa Tang.
After reading the chapters I finished, I found out that my wife, who I watch every day, no longer watches her every day. Ugh, it feels so uncomfortable, so uncomfortable (´o̴̶̷̤ㅂo̴̶̷̤`). I also read that very long review. Emm, it's true that everyone has their own love. The only discrepancy is the timeline. I vaguely remember that Ken Douji was taken away and then Principal Oos came, and then came the magic competition. During this period, Ukenana was just a nightmare and was not caught, because she was still hiding it from Myriax at this stage. There was a period when Myriax was struggling with whether to give a gift for Best Friends Day, which proved that she had not been caught in any detention room. (Strictly speaking, when it comes to controlling other people, the Flame King has already returned from the game.) Therefore, the big timeline can be regarded as a separate one. There is no need to say that it strictly follows the original timeline. Whether it is the game or the secret room, it is a good choice to heat up the relationship and wash away the suspicion on Didina. Except for this big event, it is a bit ridiculous to remove the suspicion on Didina in other S3 plot points, not to mention the emotional line (it is good not to be caught.) In fact, I have always felt that S3 was a bit watery and all the events were very shabby. The major events were very good. The game about stealing the spirit stone on King Flame's birthday is considered a typical S3. And the mention of the puzzle only adds to the interest of the article. There is no need to be too rigorous for a sweet article. It is a bit similar to the small card scan answer of Charles IX when I was a child. The entertainment nature and the advancement of the plot are very good. Finally, I mentioned Mya Star. Mya Star's growth has indeed changed a lot in the first three seasons, but the book has passed the level of suspicion. It is even said that this level has been passed. The obvious growth of Mya Star in s3 should be regarded as praising and slandering the dark undercover, but Dafa has not actually written it here. At this time, Mya Star's flamboyant and sinister attitude has also been written. All the experiences are not to say that they have dampened his spirit. The Mystery star in the first season was only 17 or 8 years old, but by the third and fourth seasons he was already 19. Not only is his age changing, but his mind is also changing. Behind the scenes, they are also learning and growing in places that we cannot see. Experience and learning have made him calmer rather than losing his original brazen and sinister youthful spirit. We should be happy for the character's growth, rather than liking a child who will never grow up. Moreover, the mysterious character written in the book is also very good, his speaking style has not changed much, and his experience is more like an ordinary life without script manipulation, which is more smoky. The rhythm of the original book is very tense, with things piled up and things broken up. This book is more like the ordinary life they experienced in the middle. As for respecting the original drama, for time-travel novels, what the people who time-travel inadvertently change will affect the future, so it is normal that many of the original dramas will not appear. And if you strictly follow the timeline, first of all, it will be boring, and you can completely guess the occurrence and outcome of the next event. Secondly, you will find that the emotional line of the Mystery Emperor will be very strange and dull. Of course, these are all personal opinions. The draft in the early morning will be a little confusing. But if you look at it completely, all the developments in Dada are reasonable and not surprising. After getting along with each other, the secret love test is natural, and you can even see the shadow of the Star Palace in S4. Overall, it is really beautiful. Come on Dada (ᐡ⦁⩊⦁⸝⸝ᐡ)₊୭, I wish Dada a lot of inspiration and success in the present life.
Don't worry about those bad comments! ! If you don't read the negative comments about mine clearance, why bother? The mystery of this article is really good! ! After all, this mystery book is like chocolate. People feel comfortable after eating it, but dogs eat it... [Blows a kiss]
I've been reading it for a long time and I couldn't bear to finish it. Can you finish it in one go? (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ The mystery written by the author in big letters gave me the feeling of a steady stream. Although the plot has been changed a lot, it does not affect the viewing. On the contrary, it makes me feel that the characters are more three-dimensional. When reading, I can unconsciously bring my own perspective into it, which makes me feel that I have experienced the same thing with them. The newly added game makes me feel even more that the two of them are destined to be together. Also, the point that Ukenana did not disappear was well written, and Eric finally didn't have to look at his gloves to see things and miss people. I am looking forward to the following plot more and more [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] As long as you write it in a big way, I will definitely follow it *▽*
The author writes very well! It feels like I'm watching the original drama, the characters and the plot are all very right😌! Also, the emotional connection between my little couple, Mi Ti, is so delicately written, I really like it! Come on, come on!
Surprisingly, I can still enjoy the wonderful writing of Mi Di. The teacher writes superbly! The plot is so interesting! ! !
The teacher's writing is so good. Calling for Midi and the teacher.
I think the author's writing is very thoughtful and exciting. The author will update it soon. I want to keep reading. Don't give up! ! ! Support the author. I hope the author can update 80,000 words a day and don't forget to take a rest.
There are few masters who write the mystery of Yamiami's fine chaff! Like! Love watching!
Fragrant rice! Midi is so annoying
If you like mysteries, you must read it. It's super exciting, and the emotional line is particularly interesting. The writing style is also good, and the writing is very delicate. I recommend it! Recommend! Recommend!
It's good to watch. When I watched Moe Gakuen, I particularly liked the two characters, Midi. The writing is also very good. I like it very much. I hope there will be more updates.
When to update
Like [please update] Come on, teacher
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Da Da is really well written. The plot is very interesting. The reason why Didina came here is that I didn't expect it. Moreover, there is foreshadowing in the first chapter. I really admire Da Da's writing style.
Super praise, praise, I like it, hehehe
The author is simply amazing. It's so beautiful. I look forward to the follow-up.
It brings back memories of the same year, so give me a five-star encouragement.
It's pretty good. The final foreshadowing of "And I won't be Orpheus" and the weight of my heart shocked me a bit. I deduct one point for be.
Extremely delicious, Mi Di cp
You are my audience!
It looks great. Everything is closed in a perfect loop. Our Emperor Dina is the bravest and very powerful. In the end, Mystery Emperor 99
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh well written! Long live Madi! Long live Didina! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]
Please give me more updates quickly! Don't force me to beg you for qwq, the teacher is so good at writing ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... So handsome I'm so handsome that every move is on my heart...
So pretty! ! ! It is a blessing to us to have an author with such good writing skills and rigorous logic enter the puzzle circle. Will the teacher update it again? ! ! !
The writing is so good and the character setting is also very good, MITI99