How Dare You Flirt Without Marrying? If You Run Away Again, I'll Lock You Up.

How should I put it? Although some parts are very unreasonable, overall the writing is okay. Sometimes I suddenly become lyrical, which feels a bit awkward. (I feel sorry for myself) But it's well written and gives me a sense of immersion. Come on, author, update quickly, the five-star praise has been sent

Although time travel, the stories are about the daily lives of the male and female protagonists, and nothing particularly big happened. The female protagonist should have liked the male protagonist from the beginning, and then the daily stories written about her seemed a little less interesting to me. Is the male protagonist too innocent, not like normal life, and more easily embarrassed than most girls? Is there really such a person? Generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with the plot, but the daily descriptions are not very interesting. They can be improved. I remember there was a woman named My Wife from 1,000 years ago. There is no villain. The daily life of the two people is written throughout. It is very interesting and very popular.

Author, are you writing from the minds of boys? What you know is a novel, but what you don't know is that it is fantasy, fantasy, fantasy, whims, daydreaming, and mirage. A dream in the south, a dream in a yellow beam, a flower in the mirror, a castle in the air Wandering in the imaginary state, thinking and dreaming It's all daydreams, dreams, and daydreams. It's great to be an author, you can write whatever you want. I really agree with this sentence: I can't write when I'm reading a novel. If I can't write when I become an author, then it's not in vain for me to become an author [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

[Much better than other novels I have read! The writing technique is very good, the writing style is very good, and it is faster and faster! [It's very interesting. I'm looking forward to the next plot. Very good-looking, very good-looking! [Quick, I can't wait. It's very good. Many people have asked about this book. Please update it soon! [A good book with a very comfortable plot. [It's really beautiful, I can't stop watching it. Recommend! Great content! Able to resonate with readers. Very good, very good. [Anywhere is fine, but if you don't update it, author, I will... Give you a gift! Good-looking, love to read, more updates.

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The author will update soon, I want to see the blood flowing like a river. The heroine's emotional transition in the early stages was very smooth, much better than other novels I've read. It can be seen that the author has an outline, knows how to use contradictions to create conflicts, and has good writing skills. The writing is very good. And it's not poisonous. I hope the author can grasp the boundaries of the second new female character that appears, otherwise the story will easily collapse when the heroine regains her memory.

Although the plot, supporting characters and behavior are a bit unrealistic, you can still watch the emotional drama. There is no need to criticize the author. The protagonist should also have the shadow of the author. Come on, you will definitely become a great writer [Sending Hearts]

There was another amnesia novel around the same time, with the same subject matter, but this one was obviously better written. That one relied on misunderstandings that could be clarified with some explanation but were not explained to advance the plot. This one also relied on misunderstandings, but it was much more reasonable.

Enjoy it, my family. The author's writing style is quite good, but the transition is a bit too fast and he likes to lay out minefields. However, the plot is very smooth and the characters are very vivid and vivid. I really like the heroine Ye [lick the screen] [lick the screen], hehe, but it is a bit scary and scary [crazy]

After reading the author's previous works, they were all too short. I might try to write a longer one on this subject. I hope the author adopts the author's advice and I will keep reading. The premise must be well written. Come on.

I have read a similar book before, but it ended after a little writing. Now I see a similar book. I hope it can make up for the regret. I really beg you, the author, please don't stop reading. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Good-looking, love to read, more updates. [Anywhere is fine, but if you don't update it, author, I will... Give you a gift! Very good, very good. Recommend! Great content! Able to resonate with readers. Very good-looking, very good-looking! [It's very interesting. I'm looking forward to the next plot. [Much better than other novels I have read! The writing technique is very good, the writing style is very good, and it is faster and faster! It's really beautiful, I can't stop watching it. [A good book with a very comfortable plot. [Quick, I can't wait. It's very good. Many people have asked about this book. Please update it soon! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I like yandere themes. There are more and more authors who like to write about this subject, and the works they write are becoming more and more sophisticated, preferably ones that are close to reality, or feel close to reality. You can also try to write plots with a huge world view and yandere elements.

Not bad, at least it makes me feel a little bit sad. There is a certain sense of immersion. Yeah, the heroine is also quite cute.

Now that I have finished reading it, I have some feelings I would like to share. The heroine is really good. I will meet someone like her sometime. What the male protagonist said is the same as what most people in the comment area said. He is too cowardly. He is always afraid of this and that. He is a manly man. At worst, let the female protagonist know and explain later. But after all, every time the heroine is in danger, it is good for him to rush to protect her without hesitation, even if she may be misunderstood by the heroine. I don't like to give negative reviews, so I give them five stars. I hope the author can write better.

What can I say about this book? It has the same framework as the novel next door. I basically skipped through the first few chapters, but I still liked the content [laughing]. The heroine's surname in the book next door is Xia, while our male protagonist's name is Qi Nan [laughing]

Okay, okay, I hope the author will write well. Although it skipped a bit, it is still very good. I just don't know how I will write about the person named Su later, and what the female lead and the male lead will say. Well, I support it very much.

The writing is good, but maybe it's because I haven't read too many articles of this type, so I really can't understand why the protagonist insists on some misunderstandings and lies, and refuses to explain at all. I really don't understand this, but the candy written by the author is really good-looking.

Why can't the protagonist be considered the heroine's creator? The creator comes to the world he created to save his protagonist.

It's really beautiful. The heroine deserves to be a heroine. Even if she loses her memory, her brain is still there. She really deserves to be the daughter of a top wealthy family. People can't stop watching it. The author must continue to do more [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's very beautiful. I look forward to recovering my memory and returning to the Ye family. It would be better if I tortured it more [laughs]

Overall, as far as it goes, the writing is quite good. Although I don't read many yandere types, I don't know why I am a little bit opposed to this type. But now I tried to read this type and found that it is acceptable. I just don't know if I can withstand it in the future.

Hurry, hurry, hurry, hurry, I can't wait. It's very interesting. Many people have asked me about this book. Please update it quickly. Don't break up the two of them, because I see the shadow of my past in them.

Okay, occasionally I feel a little uncomfortable. Can enter This makes me a little envious, but this envy is so futile, because to me now, the longed-for future is as far away as the breeze that cannot row the boat, and the broken bridge that has never crossed the remaining snow...

Five stars are given to you. It is regarded as the top level of Tomato in the same genre. Although some places are a bit cliche. For example, the protagonist's innocent attitude of rejecting the heroine is actually a bit repetitive. But after all, it is a good book and it should not be too demanding. Moreover, I also think that this book can be read by more people. The rating of 6.9 Is definitely a bit low, so I will give five stars to support the author.

I have bought three pairs. The quality is very good. It is consistent with the seller's description. The children like to eat it. The fit is very good. The fabric is comfortable. The size is standard. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

So far, the plot development has been very natural, and the heroine also has an IQ. It is not the kind of rigid pseudo-human dialogue. The male protagonist has the blessing of a certain death plot in the book. He was really panicked in the early stage, but he gradually fell in love with the female protagonist without seeming out of the blue. After confirming their relationship, he met his female protagonist's sister and wandered around. It's human nature. Overall, the writing is very good, I hope the author will keep up the good work.

The plot is gentle, there are no suffocating plots, and it is very pleasant to read [laughs] So sweet! ! ! ! [Adoration] (The suffocating part refers to the big sword or the heaven-defying plot)

The characters written by the author are sometimes abstract but very detailed. Two chapters a day is not enough. I hope the author will update 3 chapters from time to time.

It's pretty good, although there are few people who rated it. Cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes]

The heroine is so good. I beg the author to have a good ending for the heroine. The heroine is so possessive and she likes it like this. It's very interesting. It's the smoothest novel I've read in the past few days.