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[Urban Pokémon, male and female, single, eternal flowers and leaves, no system, no golden fingers like the power of Changpan, not an academy style, traveling to gyms, preferring daily slow-burning, not mindless fun, Doubao's enlightenment from the gods. ]
On this day, Xu Qing, who was still begging on the Internet, met a kind person, an enthusiastic netizen named "Attack AZ". The enthusiastic netizen promised him that as long as he passed his test, he would give him an Eternal Flower Leaf.
Xu Qing passed the test, but what Xu Qing didn't expect was that I asked you to send me Pokémon but not to ask you to send me Pokémon!
This is probably a daily story of an erroneous trainer and her magic pill Pokémon, and occasionally it can also be an epic story.
Reader comments
When reading elves, I only look at these points
1. World view: To evaluate this book, I can only say that it is too far-fetched. Is the world so small? The style is considered cozy, but I personally prefer the dark style.
Second, level division: I personally think this thing is very, very important, including how strong each level is. In other elf texts, Champion of Heaven can move mountains and seas at every turn. I personally feel that Champion of Heaven is not as solid as an AK in this book, but considering the warm style and the addition of a new author. Ignore directly, ignore directly
3. Plot (including details): summarized in one sentence. It seems like he understands everything, and yet he seems to understand nothing. It seems like I can write, but it seems like I can't. This feeling is really strange, but consider the new author. It's normal
Fourth, writing style (it can be seen from this that he is a complete novice and has not done any homework. If he has really done his homework and can write like this, it is also a kind of talent). . . Then I didn't know what to say. I really didn't know how to make it up, brother. And your Wen Wenwen, let me ask you about your daily life. It looks so strange, as if there is a sense of routine, but also there seems to be no sense of routine. And the details are too rough. Of course, I only read the first 10 chapters (maybe the later ones will be more exciting, it's slow-burning, but in this fast-paced era) I originally wanted to read a few more before commenting. But I really can't stand it anymore. You have made all the mistakes you make as a novice.
5. Self-evaluation: Maybe it's not to my taste. It's too bland and fades away. I could fall asleep watching that battle, and I still like the blood.
Consider newcomers, after all, who didn't come from newcomers? Five stars for you, bro. Give it, give it.
(I don't accept anyone's refutation. At the same time, I would like to ask the author, can you read it yourself first and feel it. I feel that what you wrote is really abrupt. I am a certain person and I am lucky enough to have written a book. I read each one a dozen times and read it a dozen times to check whether it flows. It's unreasonable, and then I'll think about it from the reader's perspective before posting it, but it's too tiring, so I really can't stand it anymore, but I think it's amazing that you can stand it, so you don't have to worry about whether it's good or not.)
One thing I forgot to mention is, what's the point of dressing up as a man and a woman? I feel like the protagonist is born a woman. That's why I clicked in, do you know? It's such a waste of my feelings. Why don't you just say yes, heroine?
And who taught you to name Pokémon? They already have names, so do they still want you to choose them? Can you do your part well? I beg you, author. Others give Pokémon names just for fun and fun, maybe with a little warmth in everyday life. What's the significance of naming him? Can't we tell the difference?
This five-star reward is my reward for asking questions [laughing][laughing][laughing]
As for the content, it's not a god but it's still very good, so join me and press that shit yellow button hard, and the author of the side policy will add more updates [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]
It can be said that I have reached the master level. Yesterday I pushed all the way from the Poké Ball to Advanced Ball 3, and today I went from Advanced Ball 3 to Advanced Ball 1 and half of it. It was going well at first, but then I lost all the way and went back to Advanced Ball 2 [crying], and finally made it to the Master with 4 consecutive wins [face covering]
It looks good, I like it, and the villain is not the kind of villain who has no reason, he is more sincere! ! I like this kind of daily routine or little interruption, and because I have a powerful Pokémon, I don't have to worry about danger or anything like that! ! ! !
This friend's point of view is indeed very interesting, but Lao Ganma's
The hot and sour flavor does not add freshness to the Cantonese rice rolls, but the braised chicken rice.
Rice makes me feel more at ease, so I think wearing a suit
If so, it would be more appropriate to wear a tie. Of course, too
When the sun rises from the east, it also means that it will set from the west.
Down. Even if the little-headed dad is not Big-eared Tutu's biological father
Honey, I still think she shouldn't steal Pig Man's super awesomeness
Lollipop
If you think it's good, please leave a book review here. You don't need to take it too seriously, just give it a five-star rating [Sending my heart]
Regarding the poisonous points in Bulbasaur at the beginning, the author has tried his best to optimize it. The author really listens to advice and corrects his mistakes when he sees them. If you have anything, you can @the author. The author often reads comments.
Therefore, please be merciful when rating and give the author a chance to make corrections [crying]
Come on, Boss Hukan [laughing evilly]
The plot is not that exciting, and the writing is good. Personally, I think it is already a very good book in the Pokémon circle. I don't want the book to become popular anyway, so please help the author. The author is going to die soon...
This book has a compact plot, a high degree of overlap with the original setting, and a clear narrative that can be understood by people outside my circle. I recommend it.
Full five-star rating! This Pokémon fanfic is so well written, the world view fits the setting of the original work, the characters are vivid and full, the Pokémon battle descriptions are tense and exciting, the plot is smooth and not draggy, and you can't stop reading. I can feel the author's full love, it's really beautiful
It's not bad. Even though I'm not interested in Pokémon, I still enjoy watching it.
The latest conflict was a bit abrupt, and it felt like it ruined the rhythm. I didn't pay much attention to it, and it was a bit uncomfortable to watch.
It's very beautiful and the battles are well writtenヾ(^▽^*)))
It's good-looking and can be understood by outsiders, and the author is very cute. I hope the author can work hard and don't stop updating [Blowing Kisses][Shy][Shy][Flowing Kisses]
The content of this book is very good. The subject matter is novel and the content is unique. Every paragraph is explained very clearly. The author is great. Please hurry up and update. I'm in trouble. I'm in trouble.
Not bad. In the past, Pokémon could only see the sun and moon, but I can still understand it. It's pretty good.
Excellent work, looking forward to the follow-up
A very good book, the battle is well written
Good-looking😄The content is unique and makes people enjoy watching it
Great, this is my type.
No comments, what's going on?
There are many parts of the plot that don't stand up to scrutiny. If you don't care too much about the rigor of the plot, it would be fine.
It's very interesting. I hope I can keep it updated. A similar book was discontinued and it was very sad. [Rolls eyes] [Rolls eyes] [Rolls eyes]
Yes, yes, it's also very good-looking.
After reading it in one sitting, I was so hungry~
No need to watch anymore, please update quickly.
Not enough [almost crying]
When I was a kid, I watched this episode and was elbowed by Cliff Sword to a height that Groudon couldn't reach.
After reading it for so long, I realized that I didn't give a book review, which I personally think is good. . . .
A good book, I think it is very good
Well written, give it five stars
It's okay, not draggy, the plot is relatively compact
A nice novel, the author is very talented [Admiration]
When reading elves, I only look at these points 1. World view: To evaluate this book, I can only say that it is too far-fetched. Is the world so small? The style is considered cozy, but I personally prefer the dark style. Second, level division: I personally think this thing is very, very important, including how strong each level is. In other elf texts, Champion of Heaven can move mountains and seas at every turn. I personally feel that Champion of Heaven is not as solid as an AK in this book, but considering the warm style and the addition of a new author. Ignore directly, ignore directly 3. Plot (including details): summarized in one sentence. It seems like he understands everything, and yet he seems to understand nothing. It seems like I can write, but it seems like I can't. This feeling is really strange, but consider the new author. It's normal Fourth, writing style (it can be seen from this that he is a complete novice and has not done any homework. If he has really done his homework and can write like this, it is also a kind of talent). . . Then I didn't know what to say. I really didn't know how to make it up, brother. And your Wen Wenwen, let me ask you about your daily life. It looks so strange, as if there is a sense of routine, but also there seems to be no sense of routine. And the details are too rough. Of course, I only read the first 10 chapters (maybe the later ones will be more exciting, it's slow-burning, but in this fast-paced era) I originally wanted to read a few more before commenting. But I really can't stand it anymore. You have made all the mistakes you make as a novice. 5. Self-evaluation: Maybe it's not to my taste. It's too bland and fades away. I could fall asleep watching that battle, and I still like the blood. Consider newcomers, after all, who didn't come from newcomers? Five stars for you, bro. Give it, give it. (I don't accept anyone's refutation. At the same time, I would like to ask the author, can you read it yourself first and feel it. I feel that what you wrote is really abrupt. I am a certain person and I am lucky enough to have written a book. I read each one a dozen times and read it a dozen times to check whether it flows. It's unreasonable, and then I'll think about it from the reader's perspective before posting it, but it's too tiring, so I really can't stand it anymore, but I think it's amazing that you can stand it, so you don't have to worry about whether it's good or not.) One thing I forgot to mention is, what's the point of dressing up as a man and a woman? I feel like the protagonist is born a woman. That's why I clicked in, do you know? It's such a waste of my feelings. Why don't you just say yes, heroine? And who taught you to name Pokémon? They already have names, so do they still want you to choose them? Can you do your part well? I beg you, author. Others give Pokémon names just for fun and fun, maybe with a little warmth in everyday life. What's the significance of naming him? Can't we tell the difference?
This five-star reward is my reward for asking questions [laughing][laughing][laughing] As for the content, it's not a god but it's still very good, so join me and press that shit yellow button hard, and the author of the side policy will add more updates [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]
It can be said that I have reached the master level. Yesterday I pushed all the way from the Poké Ball to Advanced Ball 3, and today I went from Advanced Ball 3 to Advanced Ball 1 and half of it. It was going well at first, but then I lost all the way and went back to Advanced Ball 2 [crying], and finally made it to the Master with 4 consecutive wins [face covering]
It looks good, I like it, and the villain is not the kind of villain who has no reason, he is more sincere! ! I like this kind of daily routine or little interruption, and because I have a powerful Pokémon, I don't have to worry about danger or anything like that! ! ! !
This friend's point of view is indeed very interesting, but Lao Ganma's The hot and sour flavor does not add freshness to the Cantonese rice rolls, but the braised chicken rice. Rice makes me feel more at ease, so I think wearing a suit If so, it would be more appropriate to wear a tie. Of course, too When the sun rises from the east, it also means that it will set from the west. Down. Even if the little-headed dad is not Big-eared Tutu's biological father Honey, I still think she shouldn't steal Pig Man's super awesomeness Lollipop
If you think it's good, please leave a book review here. You don't need to take it too seriously, just give it a five-star rating [Sending my heart] Regarding the poisonous points in Bulbasaur at the beginning, the author has tried his best to optimize it. The author really listens to advice and corrects his mistakes when he sees them. If you have anything, you can @the author. The author often reads comments. Therefore, please be merciful when rating and give the author a chance to make corrections [crying]
Come on, Boss Hukan [laughing evilly]
The plot is not that exciting, and the writing is good. Personally, I think it is already a very good book in the Pokémon circle. I don't want the book to become popular anyway, so please help the author. The author is going to die soon...
This book has a compact plot, a high degree of overlap with the original setting, and a clear narrative that can be understood by people outside my circle. I recommend it.
Full five-star rating! This Pokémon fanfic is so well written, the world view fits the setting of the original work, the characters are vivid and full, the Pokémon battle descriptions are tense and exciting, the plot is smooth and not draggy, and you can't stop reading. I can feel the author's full love, it's really beautiful
It's not bad. Even though I'm not interested in Pokémon, I still enjoy watching it. The latest conflict was a bit abrupt, and it felt like it ruined the rhythm. I didn't pay much attention to it, and it was a bit uncomfortable to watch.
It's very beautiful and the battles are well writtenヾ(^▽^*)))
It's good-looking and can be understood by outsiders, and the author is very cute. I hope the author can work hard and don't stop updating [Blowing Kisses][Shy][Shy][Flowing Kisses]
The content of this book is very good. The subject matter is novel and the content is unique. Every paragraph is explained very clearly. The author is great. Please hurry up and update. I'm in trouble. I'm in trouble.
Not bad. In the past, Pokémon could only see the sun and moon, but I can still understand it. It's pretty good.
Excellent work, looking forward to the follow-up
A very good book, the battle is well written
Good-looking😄The content is unique and makes people enjoy watching it
Great, this is my type.
No comments, what's going on?
There are many parts of the plot that don't stand up to scrutiny. If you don't care too much about the rigor of the plot, it would be fine.
It's very interesting. I hope I can keep it updated. A similar book was discontinued and it was very sad. [Rolls eyes] [Rolls eyes] [Rolls eyes]
Yes, yes, it's also very good-looking.
After reading it in one sitting, I was so hungry~ No need to watch anymore, please update quickly. Not enough [almost crying]
When I was a kid, I watched this episode and was elbowed by Cliff Sword to a height that Groudon couldn't reach.
After reading it for so long, I realized that I didn't give a book review, which I personally think is good. . . .
A good book, I think it is very good
Well written, give it five stars
It's okay, not draggy, the plot is relatively compact
A nice novel, the author is very talented [Admiration]