Hey my friend, want to experience the life of traveling in the city by bus? Um? You said you don't want to? It's not up to you, come on over here!
Please experience the journey of hell in this city. Those who have no destiny, please bloom your color in this city. Whether you are a mouse dying in an unknown alley somewhere, or you become the leader at the top of the city, your destiny is in your own hands.
During the time period, I will write about Lobe Company, the Ruined Library, and the Prison Bus. The main focus is on the Prison Bus, and the first two works are foreshadowing.
(I like Yoshihide, and secondly, I will adjust the character's time period slightly so that it will not deviate too much from the original work) (Redeem tragedy, multiple women, follow the main plot)
Reader comments
A. Personally, it is a masterpiece with great potential (I have already explained most of what I want to express). The protagonist has a three-dimensional image (lawful good and not womanly). The emotional portrayal of Yoshihide, Alaya and the protagonist in the Spider Nest chapter is impressive. But there are still shortcomings, that is, the content of the text is too short, making it unable to produce complete emotional resonance. For example, in the Spider Nest chapter, there is no special memory point for the years of suffering in it (it may also be that I have watched too much and have a high threshold for pain), which makes the hatred for the master except for the father-in-law seem a bit abrupt. There is also the Lobe Company chapter,
(Ah, sorry, I clicked send by accident. Continue to add explanations.) In the Naoyi Company chapter, the omission of more than 20 days to more than 40 days is a bit too much, making the novel's supporting characters' feelings for the protagonist seem unfounded. The above are the areas where the novel can be improved, but no matter how you say it is flawed, you can feel the author's love for the world view of the Moon Project from the novel. As a reader, I sincerely thank the author for his creation, and look forward to subsequent updates (๑•ᴗ•๑)♡
Wow, this is another monthly novel that I like. Come on, author, I love reading it. Don't stop updating it.
So far, it's all very good, please keep up the good work and keep updating. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
It tastes good and looks good, I want to see the blood flowing like a river! ! !
Boss, don't stop updating! It's been eight days [crying][crying][crying]
A. Personally, it is a masterpiece with great potential (I have already explained most of what I want to express). The protagonist has a three-dimensional image (lawful good and not womanly). The emotional portrayal of Yoshihide, Alaya and the protagonist in the Spider Nest chapter is impressive. But there are still shortcomings, that is, the content of the text is too short, making it unable to produce complete emotional resonance. For example, in the Spider Nest chapter, there is no special memory point for the years of suffering in it (it may also be that I have watched too much and have a high threshold for pain), which makes the hatred for the master except for the father-in-law seem a bit abrupt. There is also the Lobe Company chapter, (Ah, sorry, I clicked send by accident. Continue to add explanations.) In the Naoyi Company chapter, the omission of more than 20 days to more than 40 days is a bit too much, making the novel's supporting characters' feelings for the protagonist seem unfounded. The above are the areas where the novel can be improved, but no matter how you say it is flawed, you can feel the author's love for the world view of the Moon Project from the novel. As a reader, I sincerely thank the author for his creation, and look forward to subsequent updates (๑•ᴗ•๑)♡
Wow, this is another monthly novel that I like. Come on, author, I love reading it. Don't stop updating it.
So far, it's all very good, please keep up the good work and keep updating. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
It tastes good and looks good, I want to see the blood flowing like a river! ! !
Boss, don't stop updating! It's been eight days [crying][crying][crying]
It's very beautiful. The author must keep it up.