I'll Change the Ending of The Legend of the Dragon King

The plot advances very reasonably, the rhythm is also very good for me, Lin Yue's interaction is also very sweet, the author writes really well 🥰🥰🥰🥰[licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen]

The early part is really good, very good, very surprising to me. I don't read many fanfics, but this is one of the best ones in the early part. It can be seen that I read Dou San very carefully before writing, and many foreshadowings were taken up. In the later stage, it has now become interstellar voyage. I personally think this subject is average, but there is really nothing to write about. You can't keep writing travel notes, right? Also, how should I say it? There are so many modern words that you can tell it was written by a real person. For example, I am super powerful, is this hell? But I still hope that the author will use these jokes appropriately. If they are used too much, they will easily cause drama, and they will be more abrupt and less humorous. It just feels weird.

A great daily novel. Some of the dialogues between the characters really made me feel like they were speaking in person. However, I hope that some dialogues would not use their full names, because the full names of the seven monsters in the original novel are rarely used in dialogues (except for Xie Xie). It is really a good daily sweet article 🤭

It's a good work. The overall character design is still online and the plot is reasonable. It's just that there are some differences from the original work, but the overall look and feel is still good.

Has Xuan Yu been digested by Gu Yue? The descriptions of the characters in the book are good, but the timeline is a little inconsistent with the original work. Overall, I feel that the writing is good.

Don't stop updating, come on 😢😢😢

It's so beautiful. I beg the author to keep updating it.

Very good, pure and sweet daily life

It's really good and pretty.

Direct five-star praise