All Beasts Attack+Sword Come
Sorry for the poor writing skills of a new writer. If you have any questions, please ask.
Lu Chen: Walking on the cloud tide with a thousand feet in his clothes, holding the stars in his arms and drinking in the loneliness
The crane's shadow cuts through the pine trees and separates into the moonlight, and the sword's light breaks through the fog and breaks the rainbow's waist.
Zhuang Zhou dreamed of butterflies wandering the flower path, and Liezi rode the wind across the sea.
Don't ask where to send this body, the roar of the river and sky will be the present day.
Reader comments
Overall it's very good
Not only the shaping of the characters and the arrangement of the plot are very good, but also the main framework of the original work is retained in the restoration, and the author's small innovations are also incorporated.
The description of details is very delicate, and the small movements of the characters can be better integrated into the article. Moreover, the dialogue is not stiff, and you can feel the emotions from it. The relationship between Jie and Chen is not achieved overnight, but also has a development process, step by step, and everything comes naturally. Maybe the end of the story is a bit regretful for me (I can't eat the knife ΩДΩ)
This is a very good article on the subject of all beast fandom. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. I hope it will get better and better in the future. O(≧▽≦)O
(emmmm Boss, should this be considered a long review? I'm not very good at writing book reviews, but I recognize the author's great writing style. Maybe I don't have friends and can't express myself well, hehe (つд⊂) )
What makes this book very stylish is the author's language, which sometimes makes people feel that the words are very weighty when reading. It's not that it's depressing, but I can really feel the thoughts and emotions behind the words.
The shortcoming is probably the arrangement of the overall plot. It can be seen that the author's plot has been overturned. But that's not important either.
Generally speaking, although this book is not a story with ups and downs, it does carry a lot of weighty experience and soul.
I agree, come on
I really beg... Tomato, please let me eat something good! Give me more articles like this!
I love watching it, but can you please don't stab me?
After searching for a long time, I finally found another book that is still updated and good to read [face covering]
Overall it's very good Not only the shaping of the characters and the arrangement of the plot are very good, but also the main framework of the original work is retained in the restoration, and the author's small innovations are also incorporated. The description of details is very delicate, and the small movements of the characters can be better integrated into the article. Moreover, the dialogue is not stiff, and you can feel the emotions from it. The relationship between Jie and Chen is not achieved overnight, but also has a development process, step by step, and everything comes naturally. Maybe the end of the story is a bit regretful for me (I can't eat the knife ΩДΩ) This is a very good article on the subject of all beast fandom. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. I hope it will get better and better in the future. O(≧▽≦)O (emmmm Boss, should this be considered a long review? I'm not very good at writing book reviews, but I recognize the author's great writing style. Maybe I don't have friends and can't express myself well, hehe (つд⊂) )
What makes this book very stylish is the author's language, which sometimes makes people feel that the words are very weighty when reading. It's not that it's depressing, but I can really feel the thoughts and emotions behind the words. The shortcoming is probably the arrangement of the overall plot. It can be seen that the author's plot has been overturned. But that's not important either. Generally speaking, although this book is not a story with ups and downs, it does carry a lot of weighty experience and soul.
I agree, come on
I really beg... Tomato, please let me eat something good! Give me more articles like this!
I love watching it, but can you please don't stab me?
After searching for a long time, I finally found another book that is still updated and good to read [face covering]