After the College Entrance Examination, My Dad Showed His Cards

I've read half of it now and wanted to comment first. The writing is okay, but there are also flaws. I think this may be the reason why few people have read or rated this book: first, it is too short, with only 76 chapters completed so far. This length is not enough to tell a story well, and there are many shortcomings; second, some descriptions are too detailed and repeated too much. The description of the Ferrari key appears seven or eight times in the first few chapters. It is not necessary to use such cumbersome repetitions to highlight the change in the protagonist's mentality, which makes readers feel annoyed after reading it; The third is that there is a problem with the character setting. For example, I have read more than 30 chapters, and I have doubts about Zhou Hao, who was clearly mentioned as a freshman in the report, and went to class with the protagonist, and then turned around and became the minister of external relations. He also talked about last year in regular meetings, which is unreasonable. Then all the freshmen here feel that they are financial elites, and it is unreasonable to be too talented even if they are only freshmen. The fourth is that there are too many financial professional words and the project is too detailed. This is a novel. How many people can understand it? How many people have the patience to look at those project details? The fifth is that there is no fireworks in the whole article. It feels like the characters in it are all superior and elite. It is not grounded and cannot resonate with readers... That's it. I will review it after reading the remaining thirty chapters.

Yes, it's a good book

I've fallen into it and can hardly extricate myself. I won't waste a word. Keep it up, come on!