The Coach Asked Me to Be a Useless Person. After I Refused, I Became a Member of the World Health Organization.

I can say that this is a very good football article. Different from most football articles, this one tells the story of a defender. Well, it can be seen that the author is careful. Although AI is used as a modification, the story is very good. The plot of this book can completely cover up the AI flavor. However, this article has the shortcomings of the article. The common mistakes made by AI modification include wording, grammar, and repetition, including some words, such as Napian, and the protagonist's sister. The protagonist is 17 years old, and is in high school. He is three years older than his sister. How come his sister is a sophomore in high school? , The author should take a good look at this issue. Maybe this book has a bit of an AI flavor, but I think the story is the most important, written with AI. It is impossible to write such a pure football article. AI writing will be repetitive, but the author clearly wrote his intention, a story about the growth of a defender, with clear clues and context. What we hate is not AI articles, but articles that have no taste, no plot, and no emotion.

It's very creative and has a thoughtful angle. It's a good story to gradually become a world-class player from leagues such as Korea. However, the AI flavor is too strong and affects the reading experience too much. It is recommended that in the final review, those meaningless words and sentence patterns that are commonly used in AI (such as a large number of "not... But...", Such as some meaningless details that can be more reasonable), this book has great potential in the future. If changes can be made, it can be followed for a long time, but currently out of encouragement, I can only give four stars.

I can see traces of AI, but overall it's pretty good and the AI smell is not that strong. In the last four or so pictures, the traces of AI are a bit obvious. It's not that AI is not allowed to be used, but can the author clean up the manuscript to at least make it look less awkward, right? So ugly

It's a rare football article, and it's not the kind of formulaic article where the system rewards countless skills. It's better to write about defenders. There are not many novels about defenders on the Internet. Some of them start to become midfielders and midfielders. I hope this book can always be about defenders. I'm tired of reading about midfielders and midfielders.

It's really well written, and by the way it's not a drag. I hope the author will continue to write more.

Okay, the front looks very good, please update more

So far good, keep up the good work

Very few, but beautiful

Very nice, keep up the good work.

Come on, come on, it looks good, but it would be even more perfect if it were just winter.

Good-looking but too little

Very interesting football article. I used to read mostly midfielders and forwards. This is my first time reading about defenders, but there are too few.

I went. I really didn't expect to see such a good football article on Tomato. I feel it's no worse than Lin Hai Tingtao's. I can make a living from this book even if I read it!

Finally I came across a football article that is not invincible from the beginning.