Starting as a Snow Elf, I Begin My Evolution

The author has no mark, but the paragraph review has been answered, and the book has become single. I can say that there are many problems. First of all, the most serious one is that the protagonist reads too much childish nonsense. The whole writing has this problem. It must be a new author, so please work hard to improve the writing. It is really uncomfortable to read_:(´□`‖ ∠):_. Personally, I don't think the other issues matter, but the protagonist's many complaints that are different from those of a sane person are really uncomfortable to watch, and his life is always in danger every time he fights. It's very straightforward. There is no need to deliberately create tension in this way, but it will bore the readers. Putting aside the problems of typos and missing data for the time being, the reason for other problems is that the writing is too poor and the only thing I can do is practice more. (It didn't smell too strongly of AI, but it was uncomfortable to watch.) Finally, I saw a trace of an old friend, and then I supported the author and had an encouraging attitude. I gave it 4 stars. Well, by the way, when writing ts (transformation), remember to bid for a hundred marriages. Many people click in impatiently when they see that there is no label on the homepage. I hope the writing style is better. I really couldn't stand it after reading half of it (`Δ´). You can try to change it. If you change it, let's take a look at it again and leave it now (ºº )

It's still pretty good-looking, and the process of upgrading the heroine is pretty good, but every time it's a bloody counterattack, this routine feels a bit too much, but overall it's still very good, and the heroine's description of getting along with others is quite harmonious, and it's still highly recommended.

The plot in the early stages was too repetitive, which didn't feel good, and it was a bit unclear later on. But this is the author's first time writing a book, so my overall impression of the book is okay, so I'd like to give it full marks. I hope the author will persevere and continue to improve the quality ❤️

It should be... The book that best fits my own image. The subject matter is novel, and the protagonist's character is well portrayed... I hope the protagonist can increase his strength or have some trump cards to resist the top combat power. It doesn't matter if he can't beat it, or at least he is a little afraid. Others, I personally think, are pretty good. They come in various intensities, and are comprehensive and cute. I give my lovely Snow Elf a five-star rating~ I suggest you read it patiently, as the author's writing style is still good.

Ah la ah la, I really like snow elves, I want to give you my support. However, I feel that the protagonist is still not strong enough. He is struggling to the death and has many bloody counter-attacks, but there are a few things like showing his saint in front of others. Come on 😘

Please don't always fight back with bloody blood. Watching too much will cause visual fatigue. It feels a bit stretched in the later stage, and it doesn't have the same smell as before [rolls eyes]

Delicious, but not enough to eat

It feels okay, please support me

Very good, light-hearted and contains fighting, highly recommended 👍

Okay okay. But I hope that after the protagonist grows up, she can be like a real queen. Command the world