Evolve from Snow Elf

The author is not marked, but Duan's review was replied, and the book became single How to put it this way, there are many problems. First of all, the most serious one is that the protagonist reads too many childish words. This problem is shared by the whole writing. It must be a new author, so please try to improve your writing. It is really uncomfortable to watch_:(´□`‖ ∠):_. Personally, I don't think the other issues matter, but the protagonist's many complaints that are different from those of a sane person are really uncomfortable to watch, and his life is always in danger every time he fights. It's very straightforward. There is no need to deliberately create tension in this way, but it will bore the readers. Putting aside the problems of typos and missing data for the time being, the reason for other problems is that the writing is too poor and the only thing I can do is practice more. (I didn't notice the strong smell of AI, but it was uncomfortable to watch) Finally, I saw a trace of an old friend, and then I supported the author, had an encouraging attitude, and gave it 4 stars. Well, by the way, when writing ts (transformation), remember to bid for a hundred marriages. Many people click in impatiently when they see that there is no label on the homepage. I hope the writing style is better. I really can't stand it after reading it halfway (｀Δ´). You can try to change it. If you change it, let's take a look at it again and leave it now (ºº )

It's still pretty good-looking, and the process of upgrading the heroine is pretty good, but every time it's a bloody counterattack, this routine feels a bit too much, but overall it's still very good, and the heroine's description of getting along with others is quite harmonious, and it's still highly recommended.

The plot in the early stages was too repetitive, which didn't feel good, and it was a bit unclear later on. But this is the author's first time writing a book, so my overall impression of the book is okay, so I'd like to give it full marks. I hope the author will persevere and continue to improve the quality [love]

It should be... The book that best fits my own image. The subject matter is novel, and the protagonist's character is very well portrayed... I hope the protagonist can increase his strength or have some trump cards to resist the top combat power. It doesn't matter if he can't beat it, or at least he is a little afraid. Others, I personally think are pretty good. They come in various strengths and are comprehensive and cute. I give my lovely Snow Elf a five-star rating~ I suggest you read it patiently, the author's writing style is still good.

Ah la ah la, I really like snow elves, I want to give you my support. However, I feel that the protagonist is still not strong enough. He is struggling to the death and has many bloody counter-attacks, but there are a few things like showing his saint in front of others. Come on [blowing kiss]

Delicious, but not enough to eat

Please don't always fight back with bloody blood. Watching too much will cause visual fatigue. It feels a bit stretched in the later stage, and it doesn't have the same smell as before [rolls eyes]

It feels okay, please support me

Okay okay. But I hope that after the protagonist grows up, she can be like a real queen. Command the world

Very good, light-hearted and contains fighting, highly recommended [like]

Not bad, not bad, it suits my taste very much [blowing kiss]

Personally I think it looks good

It's similar to the anime outline of Spiderman

Give me some support.

Give me a good review because you asked for it

Give you a little support (gesture)

It would be nice to reduce some bloody counter-attack scenes

The whole text is full of laughs and is very interesting

I feel good looking

The content is very good, it's the first time I've seen this type of book [laughs]

It's good-looking and attracts me, but it's a bit short.