A Cute Pink-Haired Little Girl? It's Diavolo!

In fact, it's not that to my liking. Some suggestions are to build levels, combat power, and gold and silver. This kind of layering is mixed. It is recommended to build a single system to prevent the collapse of combat power. The daily descriptions of Diavolo and his master Gesuluo could be more detailed, and the character of Suluo should be portrayed in detail. It is recommended to broadcast the live broadcast. Information is very important. The stand-in is mainly engaged in intelligence warfare. This live broadcast is equivalent to announcing the information to the public, and cannot maintain a good sense of mystery. The author could do with some of the more superficial descriptions. Many move names don't need to be so fancy. The combat descriptions are not too detailed and are a bit simple. It seems like the boss has taken action and the enemy is dead. With this feeling, it is recommended to create some game scenes, otherwise there will be no sense of immersion. Overall, it's okay. You can catch up on this setting, and the writing style is relatively green. Let's gain some experience. In the future, the author will write better fan fiction for us. Come on! ! ! [Praise]

JoJo's classic setting of two souls in one, coupled with the change of the boss's body shape when he switches personalities, the early plot is very urgent and a lot of fun. In addition, the gap in the personalities of the two protagonists firmly grasps the sense of contrast. To sum up, the author NB!

I imagined Su Luo as Yong Hina Taffy [face covering] My Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how delicious his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child no longer has OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to see 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helps me generate bikini photos of the author, and Doubao tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, OS finally let me see something good. Loading is also very fast. It must be highly praised and supported. It's not old-fashioned at all, it's awesome and it ends the game directly. ! It's awesome, ok, ok, I just wish the author - get one, two and two get four, four and forty-six, seven and seven and forty-nine, okay [Adoration] [Admiration] Anyway, it's very good-looking, oh, oh, go and watch it [Lick the screen] [Lick the screen]

The emperor is me, Diavolo!

When writing a fight scene, the author wrote it beautifully for himself. The only shortcoming may be a shortcoming for me, but it may be an advantage for others. It is that the protagonist traveled through time and became Diavolo. This does not mean that Diavolo is the protagonist. Therefore, in terms of personality charm, it is not the real Diavolo. After all, the protagonist did not kill his daughter. Yes, you can. Why do you want to do the National Games as an author? If you don't do it, it might become popular. I highly recommend it. Diavolo is very restorative.

Halfway through reading 666, I realized that the heroine Su Luo seems to be a double-crossed person. When I listened to the novel, I felt that the heroine's name was strange [smirk] [sneer laugh]

It's very interesting. I hope it will be more interesting. After all, Tomato doesn't have many Diavolo fanfics.

Although the front part is a bit like AI, it is only a little bit. The later part is very interesting even if it is written normally.

Very good, I hope to see Yoshikage Kira, with multiple personalities, and one more personality (the protagonist uses another template)

It's very interesting to watch, the personality switching is well written, and it has a boss feel to it.