Tomb Raiding: From the Start, I Have Kunlun Qilin Blood and the Queen of Jue Kingdom

The story is different from the original work. The story line is relatively innovative. The story is compact, but a bit too compact. It feels like there is no chance to breathe. It would be nice to end a period and add some daily life. In my impression, there is no chance to eat in peace, and some adjectives and villain tricks are a bit repetitive. There are too many, there are too many temptations like the phantom babble of parents, relatives and friends. One copy is enough to use it once or twice, otherwise it will feel like these. There are also the jokes like "nothing means nothing" after the protagonists in the previous two articles were injured also have the same meaning. The same jokes will become tired after being used too much. Everything else is pretty good.

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Okay, very good. Ghost Blowing Lantern World has written a different story, much better than some popular literature. The story is compact, but too compact. Some daily life would be nice.

Although the plot is a bit too impatient, as I said, it is relatively fresh. The so-called fandom cannot completely follow the plot, and it is very rare for people to write well. Innovating and then making some changes based on the original is the biggest advantage of fan fiction. If you follow the line completely, it will lead to a very embarrassing reality, that is, either the protagonist will be written as too strong, or the original protagonist will be written as too mentally retarded. If you write it like this, people who read the original work will feel that the author has not read the original work and is a bit mentally retarded. In short, the most important thing about fan fiction is to be unexpected. You can learn from the map of the original work and write according to this idea. The reason why many fan fiction cannot get high scores is due to lack of innovation. If there is no innovation, many fanfics will basically be thrown into the street, because for some readers who can only follow the original work in one sentence, it is better to just read the original version of Gui Chuideng. Because if fan fiction cannot innovate, it is basically not as interesting as watching the original version.

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The story is well written and the characters are very vivid.

Fortunately, it's quite good to watch. The plot of Jingjue is similar to the plot of Jingjue Ancient City in Counterattack. The plot is a bit slow, but I like the character of the male protagonist better. It's a pity that it doesn't fit my type. The plot is relatively good. If you mainly like the plot, you can watch it.