Apocalypse: My Days as a U.S. Marine in Japan

The author has a good grasp of the general atmosphere. Except for the protagonist's occasional behavior of a socialist giant, everything is fine.

Four stars for encouragement. Opinion: For the description of survivors, try to shorten it to one or two chapters, and don't have too many words. If it is an important side plot, you can add additional notes, otherwise it will affect the main story reading experience. Secondly, it is well written, and the details are much better than most novels. At least the beginning is no longer a virus outbreak, and the world has collapsed. Come on.

This book is really good to read, especially the description of Lu Bu fought hundreds of rounds with Sun Wukong for Diaochan, but Xue Baochai is indeed too strong, if not for Nuoshou, a foreigner Circle hanging + Noxian guillotine, this wave of m4 hits A1 sweep If you shoot, you will die. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's attitude toward A word said by the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man Don't show off your arrogance in front of your brother Liang, "show Zhuge Liang" The indignation against the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks, in short, this The plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, and there are many fights foreshadowed. The scene is as immersive as the characters are described very well! This The writing is excellent, the plot is touching, and the ending is unexpected. The content is resonant and thought-provoking, and the plot is interesting. The characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, and the fighting scenes It's like being there, the author's detailed depiction of the human heart Attentive to details, especially when describing Calabash Q's mission to save the Metamorphosis When Sun Wukong first had sex, his inner excitement and fear were so vivid that he could Clearly, I am the only one who thinks Wu Song killed Qiao Feng Q Wrong? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji from asking, Yang Guo's hand How could he be killed by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang wouldn't be able to do it either Si Guo Ya and Linghu Chong Q have a hot battle, etc. In short The plot of this book is interesting

It's a very innovative apocalyptic novel, and the campus chapter is actually quite good, but it's too long. It is better to focus most of the writing on the protagonist. Occasionally describe the supporting characters to set off the protagonist, and let the protagonist pretend to be cool, which makes it more enjoyable.

It's okay, but there shouldn't be so much space describing a person who has nothing to do with the protagonist. The novel must be written around the protagonist.

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So far, the writing is really good. The subject matter here is basically writing about doomsday explosions in the Dragon Kingdom. Your subject matter is considered new. At least among the novels I have read, you are the first to write about foreign countries.

Apart from treating people too seriously, there is nothing else.

There are no problems, except that the campus chapter is a bit cliche, but the author also reminded me, and overall the structure of this novel is very innovative. I can't say how many stereotypes it has broken, but at least it is from another perspective, which is quite interesting.

Very good, this is our orthodox US military, Ma Run is still a fourth-class person 😂😂😂