Naruto: the Uchiha Brothers and the Little Mute

…I have nothing to say, really. In fact, when I first started watching it, I liked the setting of the protagonist Yan Ling. The rest of it really didn't appeal to me because it was too everyday, unlike other fan fiction I watched. Apart from the setting, such as the system, the gags, or some upgrades or some ability settings for myself, there were other plots that attracted me. Moreover, the pace of this book is very slow, so you can clearly feel that the child is growing up slowly. Unlike some other fan books, it is not like some other fan books, which suddenly cheat from ordinary, or have a cheat at the beginning, and the protagonist kicks whoever he sees. The pace of this book is really slow, so if you mind this, well, you need to consider whether to continue pursuing it. Then my attitude changed was the episode where Shisui died. . . He poked me in the face more than the fanfics and original works I've read. Shocked? Not really, it's more of a peaceful feeling of death. Tragedy? Actually, it doesn't count. At least compared to the original work, someone escaped and someone survived. It is no longer the only Sasuke alive in the original work who is kept in the dark like a fool and has nowhere to vent. I can't find the words to describe that paragraph yet. It's that the knife is obviously a very small knife, but he inserted it so accurately and sharply that it even gave me the illusion that the knife was very big. It runs through the whole text, making you feel pain all the time and leaving you with nowhere to hide. As a result, I will choose to skip that paragraph after reading it. Even if it runs through the whole text, he is everywhere, but at least the part where he faces Shisui's death. I haven't had the courage to read it again recently. Then the writing becomes very rhythmic. And it makes me very uncomfortable and depressed. I have lost a very important person, so my world is full of his presence and his voice is everywhere. That's how it feels. Some people go crazy when they encounter this kind of thing, but when I (the protagonist) encounter this kind of thing, I will tell myself not to stop and keep moving forward, because he told me to move forward, and reality also tells me to move forward, so I must learn to move forward on my own. This book is newly opened, and I think the writing is really good, except for that dead knife, which really hurts too much. It really stabbed my lifeline with precision, causing blood to bleed and could not be blocked. Other than that, it is still highly recommended to watch and catch up on updates. (The writing is not very good, I don't know how to express it) I don't know if the author really wrote Shisui to death. To be honest, if he were alive, maybe he should consider making Shisui a villain, even a controlled villain. Would it feel more interesting to the story? If you really die, your shadow will be everywhere in the world and your voice will be in your mind. It feels like you can write a very story-telling plot. Teacher, would you like to consider writing it all? I want to see them all. . . (But to be honest, selfishly I still want Shisui to live)

Shisui is still dead, which is really a pity. . . I have always liked fandoms so much because they can turn imperfect stories into what we want them to be [crying] It was the first time I saw Obito bringing a baby, and I felt a little bit happy. Coupled with Ayane's reserved and tough character, it really makes people feel sad. Currently, I have less than 100,000 words, but boss, your writing is really good. The logic is smooth and the language is coherent. Although most Naruto fanfics have good ideas and plots, their writing is terrible. It makes people feel like they are sitting on pins and needles, very uncomfortable. So although this book has less than 100,000 words so far, I still keep up with the updates and give it a 5-star review first! In addition, the boss has a Naruto fanfic that has just been completed. I plan to read that one first, because I think the author who can write this book must also have great other works. Finally, while this book is just getting started, I would like to ask if the boss can give everyone a happy ending. The most uncomfortable thing for me when reading the original work is that although there is a possibility of resurrection, everyone just silently accepts the idea of ​​"Don't disturb the rest of the people in the Pure Land." Especially Minato and Kushina [crying] Can everyone make dumplings?

It looks good, but what will happen next? I stand with Itachi and Shisui, still 1v2, still alone.

It's a good read. After reading that one, I came to read this one again. It's really a blessing to have so many chapters. The interaction in the first few chapters felt warm and warm. When I read those chapters, I just kept chewing the silly music. In the back, Obito and his children still said, "Only the strong ones deserve to be my children" [laughs] I think the title of the teacher can be slightly changed to be more attractive. The writing style is very good, and Obito's description is also very good. It feels very interesting. I still think it is more suitable for writing all articles.

The plot is novel, but one sentence is divided into several words, which is quite uncomfortable to watch^⎚‸⎚^

Very beautiful, really beautiful It's really beautiful. Why are there so few people?

It's good-looking, and the characters are all in place.

The content is coherent and interesting.

Good looking, different plot

It's beautiful, pretty novel, I don't know what to say. Anyway, boss, please update quickly😭The serialization makes me so painful😭

Boss, I'm going to fall in love with Obito... So delicious😋