Through the Mist: Teasing the White King at the Beginning

Give your book a full star rating. If you have any questions, please tell the author. The author will read it [smile]

As a fan derivative work, the overall performance is excellent and moderate🀄️, and it has certain potential, and the author is very careful in writing. I should have read the original work many times, and there is not much difference in the reading experience. The author's writing is smooth, but personally I feel that the overall performance is a bit watery. At the same time, I think the author can set up more branch lines about the protagonist and more foreshadowing. Generally speaking, it is more suitable for readers who like this kind of subject. I have not read too much so far and will not comment on the follow-up. So far, I think this book is good.

Five-star support There are some problems. I personally feel that the pressure of the BOSS battle is not enough. The protagonist's ability seems a bit too abnormal now. It is basically just a flat push, which is a bit boring [face covering] I feel like we can add some more detailed characterizations to enhance the presence of the team members (I personally prefer the author to publish a few personal chapters) You can also go through the process of Terraria and make the staged bosses more oppressive (Wall of Flesh, Three Mechanical Kings, World Flowers, Moon Worshiping Cultists, Four Pillars, President Moon, and various disaster bosses. I think the author can just choose a few and describe them in detail. It will be more exciting if the over-writing can be done well) However, as a newcomer, the author still has some literary skills to be able to write like this, but there is a lot of room for improvement, so keep going! I'm optimistic about you

Update, Bai Wang finally has a fanfic

Just write whatever you want (The author asked me to write this)

! ? In vain? ! [Salute] (For the Empire, long live the White King) Genshin Impact is awesome [licking the screen], Mingchao is awesome [licking the screen], BA is awesome [licking the screen], Zero Zero is awesome [licking the screen] The End is awesome [licking the screen] Don't make a fuss [angry] Bengtie is awesome [punch out] Guguquagga🐧You are a smelly penguin~🤪Stinky penguin🐧Stinky penguin🐧Wrong✋😭🤚Wrong✋😭🤚I am a smelly penguin🐧I am a smelly penguin🐧 This book is very delicious, especially the scene where Boss Chen and King Bai are flirting in a small dark room. It is very delicious [lick the screen]. But then the appearance of Bald Qiang disrupts the peaceful life of the two. King Bai is very angry😡because it is the summoned insect Big Chong II and the Bald Qiang fight for 7749 hours. In order to take away Boss Chen, Bald Qiang took out the Sea-Dinging Needle, broke the dimensional wall with the mini world and took away Boss Chen. He conducted a strategy for Boss Chen in the mini world. Boss Chen was unwilling to jump into the turbulence of time and space and traveled to Terraria. Then he traveled back to the land of mist with the help of Doraemon [Salute] I want Hokudai [angry] [angry]! ! I want Hokudai [angry] [angry]! ! Big Brother~Third Brother~Big Brother~Third Brother~ [crying] La☝️La👇La👈La👉La👇La pants inside pants inside pants🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪 🧑‍🦲: Grandpa Bingdong 👨：🧊 🧑‍🦲: Grandma Bingdong 👵：🧊 🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪 🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧

Already reached 15 comments? It seemed that there were only three of them before, and sure enough, I was still very capable.

Must be, the one teasing King Bai is still so cool

The fanfic of Sanctuary is really beautiful. Good luck to the author.

White King fanfiction must be strongly supported

This is the first fanfic of Sanctuary Evolution. So far, the original protagonist group's characters are not OOC. It's also a high-quality meal replacement with a large amount and five updates a day.

Long live the White King, for the White King

🉑🉑🉑, This book is quite good😋

It's really good to read. I'll read your book if Bai Wang doesn't update it from now on≽^⚈⩊⚈^≼

Overall, there aren't that many OOCs, and the plots are all right, without breaking the logical chain. Can be eaten with confidence

White King fanfic is encouraged, but I always feel that there are always some parts in the book that are the same as the original text, just with different names. I hope that more author-created elements can be added.

There are only a few fanfics about Bai Wang. Although the writing style still has obvious room for improvement, it doesn't seem to matter. After all, it is a fanfic [laughs]

White King fanfiction is awesome. I support it directly.

Can be watched as a sideshow

OK, let's support it directly here, okay?

The summary is quite interesting. It's the author, can the protagonist not behave so much like someone who was taken advantage of [face covering]

Amway came here, it's pretty good [eating melon]

The writing is really good, it doesn't overpower the white king, the outlook is normal, it's not brainless, and the plot arrangement makes people feel comfortable watching it.

Ok, five-star praise, very beautiful [laughing]

The writing is good. Very good fit

It's a very interesting book. Please support the author.

Very nice. It just stops updating sometimes. 😔

It's well written. I gave it five stars. Please update it quickly.