The Evolution of Shelters: I Can Be Reborn Infinitely

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Already reached 15 comments? It seemed that there were only three of them before, and sure enough, I was still very capable.

As a fan derivative work, the overall performance is excellent and moderate🀄️, and it has certain potential, and the author is very careful in writing. I should have read the original work many times, and there is not much difference in the reading experience. The author's writing is smooth, but personally I feel that the overall performance is a bit watery. At the same time, I think the author can set up more branch lines about the protagonist and more foreshadowing. Generally speaking, it is more suitable for readers who like this kind of subject. I have not read too much so far and will not comment on the follow-up. So far, I think this book is good.

White King fanfiction must be strongly supported

!? In vain?! [Salute] (For the Empire, long live the White King) Genshin Impact is awesome [licking the screen], Mingchao is awesome [licking the screen], BA is awesome [licking the screen], Zero Zero is awesome [licking the screen] The End is awesome [licking the screen] Don't make a fuss 😠 Bengtie is awesome [punch out] Guguquagga🐧You are a smelly penguin~🤪Stinky penguin🐧Stinky penguin🐧Wrong✋😭🤚Wrong✋😭🤚I am a smelly penguin🐧I am a smelly penguin🐧 This book is very delicious, especially the scene where Boss Chen and King Bai are flirting in a small dark room. It is very delicious 🤤. But then the appearance of Bald Qiang disrupts the peaceful life of the two. King Bai is very angry😡because it is the summoned insect Big Chong II and the Bald Qiang fight for 7749 hours. In order to take away Boss Chen, Bald Qiang took out the Sea-Dinging Needle, broke the dimensional wall with the mini world and took away Boss Chen. He conducted a strategy for Boss Chen in the mini world. Boss Chen was unwilling to jump into the turbulence of time and space and traveled to Terraria. Then he traveled back to the land of mist with the help of Doraemon [Salute] I want Hokudai 😠 😠!! I want Hokudai 😠 😠!! Big Brother~Third Brother~Big Brother~Third Brother~ 😢 La☝️La👇La👈La👉La👇La pants inside pants inside pants🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪 🧑‍🦲: Grandpa Bingdong 👨:🧊 🧑‍🦲: Grandma Bingdong 👵:🧊 🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪 🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧🤪🐧

Update, Bai Wang finally has a fanfic

Just write whatever you want (The author asked me to write this)

Although it feels a bit OOC, I still support Laobai's fan fiction. But after all, they are all fan fiction, and I still hope there will be more scenes between Bai Yi and Ashes. Anyway, that's why I watched it [Chigua] Please don't interrupt the update 🤦 Did you say that you planned to let the protagonist participate in the copy of the Holy Empire of Terra? @A white light flashed across

Five-star support There are some problems. I personally feel that the pressure of the BOSS battle is not enough. The protagonist's ability seems a bit too abnormal now. It is basically just a flat push, which is a bit boring 🤦 I feel like we can add some more detailed characterizations to enhance the presence of the team members (I personally prefer the author to publish a few personal chapters) You can also go through the process of Terraria and make the staged bosses more oppressive (Wall of Flesh, Three Mechanical Kings, World Flowers, Moon Worshiping Cultists, Four Pillars, President Moon, and various disaster bosses. I think the author can just choose a few and describe them in detail. It will be more exciting if the over-writing can be done well) However, as a newcomer, the author still has some literary skills to be able to write like this, but there is a lot of room for improvement, so keep going! I'm optimistic about you

It's very good, especially this one. It's especially good when not many people write it. I like to read this kind of story. One thing is, can we not rely too much on the Great Sage in the later stage? Generally speaking, it is a good recommendation. I highly recommend it. I feel that there is a great being. I don't know if the great sage is a backup for the great existence or a backup for the return of the protagonist. The protagonist must be similar to the White King in the later stage.