Shelter Evolution: I Can Be Reborn Infinitely

Give your book a full star rating. If you have any questions, please tell the author. The author will read it [smile]

As a fan derivative work, the overall performance is excellent and moderate🀄️, and it has certain potential, and the author is very careful in writing. I should have read the original work many times, and there is not much difference in the reading experience. The author's writing is smooth, but personally I feel that the overall performance is a bit watery. At the same time, I think the author can set up more branch lines about the protagonist and more foreshadowing. Generally speaking, it is more suitable for readers who like this kind of subject. I have not read too much so far and will not comment on the follow-up. So far, I think this book is good.

Just write whatever you want (The author asked me to write this)

Five-star support There are some problems. I personally feel that the pressure of the BOSS battle is not enough. The protagonist's ability seems a bit too abnormal now. It is basically just a flat push, which is a bit boring [face covering] I feel like we can add some more detailed characterizations to enhance the presence of the team members (I personally prefer the author to publish a few personal chapters) You can also go through the process of Terraria and make the staged bosses more oppressive (Wall of Flesh, Three Mechanical Kings, World Flowers, Moon Worshiping Cultists, Four Pillars, President Moon, and various disaster bosses. I think the author can just choose a few and describe them in detail. It will be more exciting if the over-writing can be done well) However, as a newcomer, the author still has some literary skills to be able to write like this, but there is a lot of room for improvement, so keep going! I'm optimistic about you

Already reached 15 comments? It seemed that there were only three of them before, and sure enough, I was still very capable.

Update, Bai Wang finally has a fanfic

Long live the White King, for the White King

🉑🉑🉑, This book is quite good😋

Must be, the one teasing King Bai is still so cool

White King fanfiction must be strongly supported

Can be watched as a sideshow

This is the first fanfic of Sanctuary Evolution. So far, the original protagonist group's characters are not OOC. It's also a high-quality meal replacement with a large amount and five updates a day.

The fanfic of Sanctuary is really beautiful. Good luck to the author.

It's really good to read. I'll read your book if Bai Wang doesn't update it from now on≽^⚈⩊⚈^≼

OK, let's support it directly here, okay?

The summary is quite interesting. It's the author, can the protagonist not behave so much like someone who was taken advantage of [face covering]

Amway came here, it's pretty good [eating melon]

White King fanfic is encouraged, but I always feel that there are always some parts in the book that are the same as the original text, just with different names. I hope that more author-created elements can be added.

There are only a few fanfics about Bai Wang. Although the writing style still has obvious room for improvement, it doesn't seem to matter. After all, it is a fanfic [laughs]

White King fanfiction is awesome. I support it directly.

The writing is good. Very good fit

It's a very interesting book. Please support the author.

Very nice. It just stops updating sometimes. 😔

It's well written. I gave it five stars. Please update it quickly.